Summerabbacat

He has "fooled" me before @weinerdog and almost did it again in this chapter. Surely it cannot just by the "python" (aka little Liam) and his "stench". Surely there has to be more to his "charms". Are we so shallow that the first big dick and waft of manly pheromones that comes along makes us swoon. Say it isn't so @weinerdog.

If I may influence this story in any way @Avogadro1001, please ensure said body bag is made from the cheapest possible materials and in the ugliest of colours. After all, nothing is "too good" for Jessica. What a bitch. I hate her so much I would be happy to see Trish Collins make a "guest appearance" in the story just to slap Jessica's face, repeatedly, with increasing ferocity each time.

Either that, or staked naked beside a naked Jessica and watch the blow flies and maggots thrive. As much as I detest Liam, he is my "bestie" compared to Jessica. She is truly evil.

Oh Jessica, Jessica, Jessica. You are a scheming, vindictive, spoilt and rotting mass of putrescent flesh, but all your "talent", such that it is, is between your legs. You don't have much between your ears. Dylan ridiculed you one, two, three times, before he turned your threats back onto you, you stupid ho. Methinks, or at least hopes @Avogadro1001 this may have a domino effect on Jessica and the mighty will topple. She may find her latest fashion accessory, a body bag. Oh well, shit happens.

Cum @Al Norris? Oh God I hope not. Dylan obviously has a very strong stomach. This chapter needed a much stronger warning @Avogadro1001. "Well, there’s lots of sex in this one and descriptions are pretty graphic, so strictly 18+" simply did not "cut it". It should have read "Well, there’s lots of sex in this one which includes Jessica and descriptions are pretty graphic, so strictly 18+ and a barf bag may be needed". The description of the sex between Liam and Jessica was so graphically written and evoked strong visual images, such that I may never get a hard on again for as long as I live, and my dinner went very close to reappearing when I swore I detected Jessica's "scent" as Liam fucked the bejesus out of her. The only thing which will ever improve Jessica to the point that she becomes tolerable is embalming fluid. She is as odious as she is odorous. Dylan showed remarkable chutzpah in this chapter, but it will it be enough to overcome "her". I am looking forward to chapter 16, the promise of Jessica's total degradation.

Jake and his father in an incestuous bisexual threesome with Jessica. Jessica naked 🤮🤮🤮 being buttfucked by Reginald dressed in his wife's clothes whilst she, Jessica, is pegging Jake who is dressed in one of Jessica's snatch-baring slutty outfits. Reginald buttfucking Jake whilst Jessica watches, fingering herself (she'd have to do this with her fucking foot to feel it given the magnitude of that canyon) to orgasm after orgasm 🤮🤮🤮. I cannot imagine viewing anything more disgusting (but not deliciously so), which is legal, than seeing that skanky ho (she of the Jennersque lips, great for sucking cock) naked in any scenario. Dylan certainly seems to court trouble. He is obviously highly intelligent, but his decision-making skills on life situations, appear to leave much to be desired. He apparently is concerned for his safety around Jake (whom to date has only shown a relatively minor streak of "violence" when he fucked the bejesus out of Dylan), but he is prepared to go to the home of someone, with no one else present, who has inflicted such violence on him that his spleen was ruptured and multiple other injuries caused, which I cannot recall as I have tried to erase them from my mind. All I can say @Avogadro1001 is that Liam's "stench" must be so overpowering that it stimulates the male butt to such an extent that it starts self-lubricating and twitching violently from deep within, resulting in a need so great that only a cock the size of a forearm can quell the hunger. OMG wait, I think I can smell Liam all the way over here in Australia, and I am playing George Michael on CD. Yes, yes, yes. Oh Liam, how may I service you? Yeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssss. Drive right in and pull up the the bumper. LOL.

Last Christmas by Wham (which I unashamedly love) was released in 1984 and peaked at #2 that Christmas. It finally became the #1 song for Christmas in 2020 and again in 2022 and 2023. I am determined you will not have to wait 36 years for your Christmas #1. Rally the troops @Gary L. We need to give your fellow Brit a #1 Christmas hit.

Is this what you had planned for all those "nooks and crannies" @weinerdog?

Given your state of residence, your obvious intellect and the above gif @drsawzall, my thoughts turned to Arthur Miller's The Crucible. Are we readers of this well crafted story in danger of becoming like the residents of Salem? If so, I say hang or burn the "witches" now.

I thought you were joking, but Google informs me you weren't. I have many musical, literary and film reference points, but virtually no TV reference points. Without you and Google I would have remained blissfully unaware that such a TV show was ever created.

Another top 10 entry for you @Robert Hugill, this time with this story at #3 in the 'Mystery' genre. We readers will have to rally behind you to see if we can get you a #1 spot the week of Christmas, something why is very "big" in the UK on the pop music charts. Cliff has managed to do it on a number of occasions, so we will have to throw down the gauntlet and have you challenge him.

There you go again @Mancunian, your fair, forgiving and caring self looking for a reason as to why Guy may have behaved as he did. The rest of us have "tried and fried the bitch" before even giving a thought to why he jumped to conclusions. You are to be commended for this, which is why you are ideally suited to the work you have undertaken in helping people. I share your caring side, albeit it with a different "audience". I must run as I have to attend to a sneezing cat.

Nick was perhaps in the hole in the backyard or had been drugged and was asleep. The first song is about a man wrongfully hung for a crime he did not commit. His sister was the murderer and she had murdered his "cheating" wife and one of the men she "cheated" with. The first two songs had the "hanging" reference and for some reason Diana's Upside Down made me think of someone "hanging" upside down.

Way too "deep" for me at 1.00am with a heavy head and sinus I am afraid @Paladin. I will have to mull it over later with a clearer head, but it appears to have a sound basis.

I think this is very possible @centexhairysub as this would also cover up the crime of either rape or if not rape, incest.

Oh you are no fun @Paladin. How about the alternative: Fictional characters aren't real so have fun killing them. Fictional characters don't exist so have fun killing them.

Another grotesque possibility certainly @centexhairysub as neither spermie nor the incubator appear to regard incest as taboo.

I just revisited the chapter when Stephanie "disappeared" and Skylar made his first appearance." The following Friday was the next scheduled visit from CPS. Stephanie Lawson, however, was no longer their caseworker, it seemed." It is possible @Lee Wilson has been "playing us" @weinerdog, throwing in one of @drsawzall's oft sighted red herrings.

Or maybe Aunt Eve gave birth and they collectively murdered the child.

You never cease to amaze me with the things you know @Paladin. I wonder then if the incubator was pregnant and had only just given birth and murdered the child or if she had a backyard abortion and disposed of the foetus.

It was @Mancunian whom I recall speculated in several prior chapters that Jill may have become pregnant from spermie having raped her. I wonder if she did and the human remains found are that of a murdered baby or a backyard abortion. It was @Anton_Cloche who speculated in the last chapter spermie and the incubator may have had another child which they murdered, and whilst anything is possible, I think a murdered grandchild or backyard abortion is more likely. Either of these scenarios could be something Jill has blacked out. I wonder if the start of Steve's stuttering coincided with the rape of Jill by spermie and the incubator. And as for her Aunt Eve, being a junkie now seems a "minor" negative in her guardianship suitability in comparison to the fact that she participated in the rape of her niece. Lance Blackstone should resign as the legal representative for the incubator immediately, and if he is representing spermie, resign from that position as well. The only revelation which surprised me in this chapter @Lee Wilson was that spermie and the incubator forced Steve's presence at his sister's rape, but then given what they have collectively done to their children it should not come as a surprise. I am not surprised Jill remembered it in vivid detail; she is extraordinarily strong to have retained remembrance of this event for such a long time without showing any signs of distress until she revealed it. After the revelations of this chapter @Lee Wilson I think the incubator is even worse than spermie. Hopefully in the not too distant future Vicki Lawrence's 1973 pop hit The Night The Lights Went Out In Georgia will apply to spermie and the incubator, or perhaps Johnny Bristol's soul/disco classic Hang On In There Baby might take on a whole new meaning when they are found guilty of their horrendous crimes. Or perhaps Diana's disco classic Upside Down may have a double meaning.

I am probably being a little harsh on Emma, but for my liking she was not appalled enough by Dylan's revelations in this chapter. Yes, Jessica has to suffer greatly. Not only last season's fashions, but last season's fashions as sold through Walmart, plus Walmart home-brand makeup and cosmetics (if they make them). Extreme and uncontrollable flatulence at the most socially awkward moments; sudden hyper-hair growth in her ears and nose and on her legs and her legendary "snatch", which no amount of waxing or laser treatment can remove; and, finally a bank balance of $0.00.

Liam, Jake or becoming a cloistered monk? I would normally never suggest the latter, but it is emerging as the more appealing and safer option of the three for Dylan as each chapter passes @Avogadro1001. Any residual "sympathy" I had for Liam evaporated with Dylan's revelation to Emma of Liam's destruction of his glasses and his dunking of Dylan's head in piss. I no longer care if he has a brain tumour or neurological damage from his meningitis. He is an abomination. As for Emma, I am liking her less with each passing chapter. She has made excuses for her husband's behaviour in the past and is doing the same for her son. I don't care if her self-esteem is so low she has allowed herself to be beaten, she needs to fuck off and go and be pathetic at home. Dylan does not need her bringing him down. And in @Summerabbacat fantasy land @Avogadro1001 I look forward to the arrival of the new girl at Montgomery High School, Venus, a 188cm tall, blonde Amazon in the vein of Brigitte Nielsen. She is everything Jessica is not, beautiful, kind, caring and truthful. She is also smart and takes an instant dislike to Jessica and the feeling is mutual. Jessica tries to slut-shame (a pot calling a kettle black if ever there was one), discredit and destroy her as she did Veronica, but Venus is not intimidated by Jessica. With the first blow she breaks several bones in Jessica's face and several of her teeth, and explodes botox, dermal fillers and collagen such that Jessica looks like she is wearing a meat lovers pizza on her face. Jessica threatens Venus in much the same manner she did Dylan, having taken photographs of Venus' twin siblings Paris and Troy, not realising the 8 year old twin boys are more than capable of taking down a bitch like Jessica. I have to stop now @Avogadro1001 as I am having way too much fun plotting Jessica's demise.

And in platform shoes, flares and a body shirt with gold chains hanging on your chest @Cane23 whilst you do The Bump, The Busstop and Nutbush by the Rivers of Babylon.

Actually it is me who is confused @Avogadro1001, too much "Village People excitement". The first time Gerald is referenced in this chapter the prefix great to grandfather was hyphenated and on the line before rather than hyphenated and on the same line. My bad.