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6-7th comment! My nieces and nephews would chuckle at that achievement for me. This was a tremendous chapter in its depth. Congrats to Troy & Miles for their well-deserved wins. I felt the worst for Owen who we found out knew about Miles but didn't know it was that Miles. Troy's acceptance speech was more-or-less a thank you to Miles for encouraging him to pursue art rather than take over the ranch. Miles's speech was dedicated to Robbie and also a nod to Troy and their past. I thought it signaled trouble that Troy, despite his claim that he was like a deer in headlights, left out a thank you to his fiancé. As good a cliffhanger as ever. Wednesday's chapter will be a doozy for the three guys.
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My condolences on the loss of your fur baby. I'm glad to hear Kurtis & the Major are father/son officially. Seems that Kurtis is in for some hazing at his new school and Paul could possibly be a boyfriend or tormentor?
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Rachel is an excellent actress and indeed almost stole the chapter. Sky was very excited about seeing Hector and had to have a break. Ch 24 is going to be sizzling!
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I really enjoy your chapter lengths - they're fantastic! Congrats to Chase for officially securing the job. I feel for Pru not making friends easily. Violet, Mrs. G, & Silvie are delightful. Simon continues to flirt and Buddy continues to find excuses to be around Chase. Those muffins sound delicious! Hopefully, things continue to improve for the Hollow household.
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Three weeks until our guys get to go home, but will everyone make it home safely? I hope so! It remains to be seen what will happen between Randy & Kent.
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Damn, what a hot bunch at the pool party! Lots more to come - Sky & Hector are certainly looking forward to their initial scene together and the three-way kiss sounds hot!
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Our guys got well-deserved promotions, care packages from home, a Charlie Brown Christmas tree in the mess hall, a nice dinner, and Randy gave Kent a meaningful gift. Nice chapter.
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Things are getting interesting...
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Fantastic integration of Hector into Bransky and Hector definitely enjoyed his first MM sex scene with Brant. The conversation in the movie felt like it mirrored the real-life discussion Bransky had about the threesome for the movie. Rachel's outfit also caused a stir, and I thought the way you wrote her response to the paparazzi was great - her appearance will be a surprise to the audience later on. Hopefully, no jealousy ensues amongst the four principles.
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You more than try. I definitely understand how complicated it would be weaving those webs and it would be difficult to guess how we readers connect those dots when you try to leave us guessing. It works quite well, honestly.
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Sexy start to the movie! Several familiar faces are back on set including the scrumptious chef Gianni & Rachoud gets to be up close to Bransky once again. Gregory seemed particularly surprised by the intensity of the lovemaking. Sky was definitely not acting when he shot so spectacularly! What a fantastic film this would be!
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Incredible chapter! I had a feeling that Miles & Robbie were heading to the same awards when they were headed to the airport, but the name of the awards had me gasping out loud and thinking of the inevitable reunion. There are several unresolved issues which we hope we will get answers to in the coming chapters. Owen has a right to be pissed at Troy. Troy has a right to be pissed at Miles. Robbie knows the whole story and will potentially be the one to smooth things over. We got a glimpse of how floored Miles was when Owen called out for Troy and then Miles saw him turn his way. An absolute masterclass in cliffhangers once again @kbois - well done!
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What a sweet last third of the chapter. Randy lovingly helping Kent with his blouse and a hot kiss between them, and Randy's declaration that he didn't know what he'd do if he lost him. My favorite chapter thus far.
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I can see Rachel definitely being a hit with her cougar role and it looks like Jeff & Randy want in on the sexual fun, but will David & Harold accommodate their request? I love being able to join in on the making of the highly anticipated LL and wish it was available to view in real life 😂
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Kurtis got to meet the colonel and was given a heads-up about the major's impending deployment and found out he'd be staying with Rico, so he may or may not be looking forward to that. The major has set the wheels in motion for charges to filed against Bernie and Kurtis enthusiastically looks forward to testifying against him. The major's team has cool nicknames. It looks like the DNA testing process and results are next!
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A delightful chapter! The banter between Chase & "Buddy" is quite entertaining. I like how Chase dishes it back to Buddy. I definitely get Gilmore Girls/Hallmark vibes from the town and the hotel. Buddy reminds me of Michele. The Ashton brand is described as five-star and Buddy seems to want the small-town property to be formal but that contradicts the vibe of the town and property itself. Buddy is apparently being punished by being sent there in the first place. Chase has a bit of an old soul and it was brave of him to show up and apply for the BA job instead of apply online and hope for the best. Simon definitely has his eyes set on Chase already, but is that just to distract us from an upcoming love triangle between him, Chase, & Buddy? I love Mrs. G and Silvie.
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Nice way to end Book 2. I look forward to reading Book 3!
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Fun chapter with the Miami premiere and a great awards season for Brant! Sky & Hector seem to really be into each other. I was beginning to think Bransky was going to go a chapter without sex and was worried there for a minute 😜 I think we're all looking forward to Living Large to begin filming.
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Taylor does have allies in Mrs. Mason and Bernie and his parents are obviously supportive and trying to show him that without embarrassing him. I get that he's a hormonal teenager, but why not confide in them? It's likely Stephanie either said or insinuated about Taylor to Jason so she's definitely aiming to drive a wedge between them. I find it endearing that Taylor wants to pursue Civil Rights Law.
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It's cute how Kody gets all flustered when Golden Boy is around and now can't get him out of his mind. Our mind tends to notice someone more if we've seen someone once, it's as if we're subconsciously hyperaware of their presence. Charlie continues to be quite the horny teenager. Dad gives sage advice to Kody - don't dwell on the straight guys.
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Boymom, Part Three of Three
Modified Cub commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Boymom, Part Three of Three
Diane can be a bit much, Cal realizes that yet still indulges her. I'd like to thank Nate is willing to give her the 2 weeks a year so he can enjoy the luscious pink farm boy cock the rest of the year. Another fantastic short story my friend @Boy Mercury X ❤️ -
Nice wins for Brant & Rachel! Hector is nervous about the sex scenes and excited about performing alongside Rachel. I think our guys will make him quite comfortable. Juanita is a champ!
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What a fantastic first chapter and I love the story and chapter title! I'm always a sucker for a story with food themes or backgrounds so I'm hooked! I've got my fingers crossed that Chase goes after the bakery assistant job and eventually sees his dreams come true.
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Lots of developments for Troy in this chapter. It's awesome that he was nominated for the prestigious award and gets to go to Scotland for a vacation and the awards festivities. Owen surprised him with a proposal that he seems surprised by but in to. Meg has graduated and taken over the majority of duties on the ranch. It's not surprising that they stumbled upon the vlog that Miles started at sea and continued with Marco Polo, although obviously Owen was unaware of the connection between Troy & Miles. Erik seemed concerned that Troy accepted Owen's proposal. I find it interesting that Troy snuck away to watch Miles' videos series in its entirety and hasn't chosen to tell Owen about Miles. This could go in a number of directions so I'm not even going to venture an educated guess at this point.
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Boymom, Part Two of Three
Modified Cub commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Boymom, Part Two of Three
Mom's digs and undertones are certainly noticed by Nate. That was some exquisite sex on the upper balcony, fulfilling Cal's teenage fantasy. It'll be interesting to see what the conclusion brings.
