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Chapter 15 - Family
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Family
A great way to leave the story for now... I know I'd very much appreciate a 2nd book (where Sam is but an old memory with perhaps an obituary) but I devour any story by @ChromedOutCortex with delight. I was glad to see Margaret's evolution towards James and her acceptance and appreciation of Evan and their relationship. And of course, I'm a sucker for a good m2m romance that shows character growth and a willingness to work through problems rather than run to a meaningless hookup for instant gratification. Thanks for sharing your talent, COC ❤️ -
Sizzling outdoor sex by two of Hollywood's hottest actors. The next scene will play a major role in defining Brant's sexual future I believe. He obviously enjoys topping Sky but for him to bottom, it may help him realize if he's actually gay or not. All I know for sure is I can't wait to read about it. David and his editors will earn an Oscar if they can keep the movie rating acceptable for wide release.
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Great chapter. Brant's interview is going to be a viral sensation and will get everyone to anticipate the movie even more. It's wise of Sky to be cautious about Brant's declaration of love. It was interesting to see Brant's action at the end of the chapter - pulling back.
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Sounds like it's highly unlikely that Margaret will ever recoup the funds that Sam stole. If/when he shows back up, she better not let him sweet-talk her and somehow end back up in her good graces. So happy that Evan and James are taking the next step together. And I thought it was quite nice that the lawyer was willing to guide Evan through the legal machinations considering he's still in school. This is a unique story that I've enjoyed all along @ChromedOutCortex
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What a beautiful day on the lake and a good time was had by all. The dinner sounded delicious and the scenery was breathtakingly beautiful. I had wondered about David's decision to make this type of movie, and I'll admit that the reason why got me choked up. Then, Brant's admission that he's falling in love with Sky and considers him his boyfriend really surprised me in the best way. I do think Sky will ask some pertinent questions and question whether their relationship will have any chance to flourish once they leave their bubble. Another great chapter @KKirk ❤️
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Great chapter as always @KKirk! I absolutely love the sexy chapters but ones like this add tons of color to the overall story. Wise advice from Sky's parents regarding keeping his feelings towards Brant in check. It'll be interesting to hear how much buzz Brant's teaser interview will generate.
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Chapter 13 - After The Storm
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 13 - After The Storm
What a tangled web Sam has unleashed on his grieving mother! It's my hope that she has finally seen the light and will continue to let James & Evan guide her in the right direction. I don't think we've seen the last of good-for-nothing Sam and hope he's punished to the full extent of the law. Elder abuse is awful but has been growing at an alarming rate the last 10 years or so. I've witnessed several perfectly sweet seniors lose thousands of dollars to these types of scams. -
Chapter 12 - Storm Clouds
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Storm Clouds
Another emotionally charged chapter @ChromedOutCortex that was well-written! James, as we all predicted, stepped in and has been a rock for his mom, who frankly didn't deserve his compassion. It goes to show that some people can still be good humans despite their upbringing and the coldness that can come when one dares to come out and be their authentic selves. Sam is a piece of shit and deserves whatever is coming to him. I'm proud of James for finally putting him in his place and knocking him down. Evan's parents exemplify what unconditional love should look like. He's lucky to have them. I feel like Margaret is evolving but does she truly realize what she and her husband did to James? The emotional scars run deep. So much of this story resembles what many in the LGBTQ+ community face from their families - it's heartbreaking to say the least. -
The chemistry between the guys is off the charts and to be honest @KKirk I'm not sure how easy it would be to pen such a sizzling scene without needing to breathe because wow! Indeed, the director's cut or even a XXX version could eliminate debt worldwide!
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Nice chapter giving us insights into remote location filming and it sounds like Sky has plenty of eye candy. It will be interesting to see if our leading men can keep their libidos in check outside of filming.
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This chapter was romantic and has Sky anticipating the intimate moments ahead - those during filming and the quiet, serene nights like this one. I found it hilarious how Brant requested that David not let the sex scenes be filmed too far apart. Otherwise, they'll be grumpy. Duh, man. You had a taste of Sky's ass and now it's all you can think about! Really easygoing chapter!
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Nice scenic and arousing drive to the mountains for our guys! It was great to hear some of Brant's background and his activities from childhood along with a breakdown of his family. I sense lots of sexiness ahead!
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Chapter 11 - Ouroboros
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Ouroboros
Damn, I felt all kinds of emotions during this chapter! Good for James for finally having enough self-respect to stand up to Sam and for not letting him continue to demean him. It will be interesting to see what Sam's excuses will be for not being at the hospital and for not answering his phone, let alone for being fired and lying about it all this time. Seems like James will be forced to be there for his mom in many ways going forward. I, for one, hope she finally realizes the hurt and emotional damage the family inflicted on the oldest son. Great chapter! -
Sounds like Brant is falling hard! Already wanting Sky on his arm for the premiere?! Lots of probing questions to be answered for sure! The more I read this story, the more I really want to see this movie!
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Yes, yes, a hundred times YES!!! Beautiful balcony scene!
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The chemistry, sexual and non, definitely is evident between Brant and Sky and with all that making out and faux-fucking, who wouldn't be turned on? David did offer some sage advice though and I hope our guys heed those wise words. I'm up for more "wet" scenes and action to come!
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Chapter 10 - Hospital
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Hospital
I still have faith that James will reach his boiling point and go the f*** off on his ungrateful parents and asshole brother! Evan continues to show up for J in all the right ways, and I feel like they're in a good place and heading towards a full partnership situation.- 16 comments
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Outstanding! Way to initiate the action, Sky! Rach better not have heard - he's gonna be jealous!
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Chapter 9 - Home Life
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Home Life
Come on J! Just once - unload all the hurt, anger, and cruelty back at all 3 of them! And make sure Evan is right there beside you, holding your hand! -
Talk about awkward! It had to be a sight for Brodie to see his son like that even though he knew it would be happening! Definitely a sexy chapter although the part where Sky was educating the straight guys about penetrative shower sex was comical.
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Chapter 8 - In The Cold
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 8 - In The Cold
James has got to put his foot down at some point and stop being the family punching bag! Evan's really stepped up and has grown on me - he's a keeper!- 9 comments
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Damnit, James! I know she's your mother but stand up for yourself! And where oh where is the anointed golden son Sam? I really hope James lets them all have it! You just know his homophobic asshole dad is gonna say something cruel and demeaning! Great chapter @ChromedOutCortex because I was feeling all the emotions. Evan is a great guy.
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I certainly enjoyed the rehearsals of their upcoming scenes! I really wish this film was actually happening lol!
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I feel for James, still clinging on to hope, but it does explain why he is how he is. Even us readers can see Evan's growth. Glad James got his promotion! Great chapter!
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Uh oh, Brant's in trouuuuuuuuble lol! Great chapter and thanks for the eye candy!
