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Yeah, the discussion among the guys was interesting. Seems like Len & Jody are about to further Jody's education in a meaningful way!
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Firstly, thanks for the early release @Krista and a Happy Thanksgiving to you and all the writers and fellow readers! I'm certainly thankful for my GA family. I'm glad Joel decided to play baseball and think it will be good for him. He does seem to be taking stock of certain guys around him and maybe he finds Mr. Braden attractive? Colt had no business blurting out Joel's sexuality, but he did seem genuinely apologetic. Like others, I wonder how Javin will be perceived once they're discovered? I could see Celia or Lacey catching them kissing. Even though we're all wanting to see Cody I'll take any bonus chapters we can get! Awesome chapter!
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Hot start!
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The City of Eternal Spring
Modified Cub commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in The City of Eternal Spring
Interesting start... I'm woefully undereducated about Colombia but have always enjoyed learning new things and this tale thus far will be a mixture of education about the country and Hunter's exciting tango with hot locals. -
Heartwarming chapter!
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Sounds like a promising semester ahead for Jody - perhaps he'll be quite busy!? I also enjoy the pics - adds to the context! Jody has good taste 😝
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A perfect segue from freshman to sophomore year! I'm glad our boys had a good summer and found ways to deal with their issues. Looking forward to the next installation of adventures. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us!
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Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Modified Cub commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Julian feels trapped in everything
Great chapter! What interesting developments! Is Julian adopted? Where has Aiden been all this time? I can't wait to see what happens next! -
Chapter 1: Shadows and secrets!
Modified Cub commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Shadows and secrets!
Great start! I love the chemistry between Julian & Nathan and Dean seems to be a great wingman. Obviously, the grandfather is a douche. Sad that Julian lost his mother a year ago. His dad seems to be the buffer between the generations that tries to placate both. -
Sounds like Jody cemented his future with his first time. I'm quite sure Len will make it so that Jody ends up on campus! Can't wait for what's next!
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I'm hooked - really excited to see what all Jody gets in to!
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More sweet progress for #TeamJavin! I'd have thought Davin would've planned ahead for the potential explosions given he brazenly planned to sleep in Joel's room but teenagers don't plan ahead. I do wish Joel would play baseball because he truly does love the game but also understand him feeling like a traitor. The birthday party should be interesting - I hope we finally get to see the reunion with Cody and how he reacts to Joel's living situation. How long will it take for Javin to be noticed by someone in the family and what will those reactions bring? I'm excited to find out!
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Totally agree @Seraph28! Too beautiful to mess up with too much commenting - loved it @LittleBuddhaTW!
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I very much enjoyed this unique story and the Covid angle was interesting as well. Thanks for sharing it with us!
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An awesome feel-good chapter! Loved it!
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I totally understand that. I'm an emotional person also - I cried a couple times through this story for example. You have a kind heart though and are a remarkably talented writer ❤️
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Powerful chapter indeed. The last paragraph was my favorite. It is definitely a tough path to endure as a young person coming to terms with their sexuality and trying to reconcile that with the "Christian" ways they'd been taught. I've been there and it took a toll.
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What a cathartic chapter for everyone involved, including us readers. I'm glad to see Christian & Jonah come in like the cavalry and give Nick a chance to breathe. Nick's mom has made some inroads in getting Jack the help he needs. Interesting development with Christian kissing another guy - guess I missed his curiosity? It'd be hilarious if Jack teaches some of the boys how to die or bleach their hair! I'd like to see more of his emo side come out. Also, more Ms. Charice and a healing trip for the gang with Nana Bev in Seattle. I love this story and just want more in any way I can get it!
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My goodness... what a powerful chapter! While I never contemplated suicide, the harmful rhetoric that spewed out so effortlessly of Julian and Hosea, is why I suppressed my sexuality for more than 30 years to my own father. I'm feeling many emotions here and I know this is a fictional story, but thanks for writing it and sharing it. What great men Marcus & Joshua are and thank goodness for Small-Fry Speed!
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Great chapter! I certainly hope someone intervenes on Elisha's behalf!
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I ache for Elisha and the world in which he's been subjected to. How utterly pathetic yet endearing that his best friend is a stray dog with whom he shares many similarities. Hosea is the worst kind of "Christian" and is about as flawed a human being as is possible. I can see Elisha & Caleb developing a friendship perhaps. It seems as though Elisha is heading towards ending up a ward of Marcus & Joshua perhaps? Definitely interesting developments are on the horizon for all of the key players.
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Great chapter! It's interesting to see the ways in which the lives of the characters intersect.
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I love reading about Joshua & Marcus! Poor Elisha - his story resonates with part of my own journey!
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Great chapter @Krista! I don't think Trace was alluding to Joel coming out either, just to try and be more comfortable in his own skin. It's nice that they're putting him on their insurance and getting him a phone. And it was also comforting to see they're trying to plan a party for Joel & Cody. I think Davin is up to the task of convincing Joel to stay at their school and hopefully he'll give baseball with the War Hawks a try. I'm still 100% Team Javin!!!
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Sixième partie : L’Entrée
Modified Cub commented on W_L's story chapter in Sixième partie : L’Entrée
Best chapter yet! Love the foodie aspects of this story also! Reese can help Dexter get his Michelin back if he'll put in the work and put down the pills and wine!
