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Excellent chapter. Theo's a big softie and is thrilled to have something that's his own for the first time in his life. I'm rooting for these guys.
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What Happens In Rome...
Modified Cub commented on M. Harding's story chapter in What Happens In Rome...
I'm not really into bi stories but that was a hot chapter. Matt had been scheming with Sofia for a while to set the wheels in motion for him to seduce his dad? I'll keep reading the series for now because I am genuinely curious how it will develop. -
Interesting indeed, I'm intrigued at least.
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The guys do behave like characters in a sitcom and it's hilarious to observe, endearing at times and frustrating at times. Theo is rearranging his shift and willing to work a double though, all so he can spend extra time with Elliot and I think that says a lot about how Theo feels about Elliot and it's beautiful.
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Oh Richard... when are you going to wake up?
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The timeline jump helps move the story along but in a way that makes sense. Now, I'm terrified of what's coming and equally terrified of a Karen appearance. It was nice to have two feel-good chapters in a row though, just saying.
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“Every Gay Man’s Dream”
Modified Cub commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in “Every Gay Man’s Dream”
Great chapter! It seems Elliot is in love with Theo and has made quite the impression on Ian. Perhaps a love triangle is in the works? I hope not because I love the Elliot/Theo pairing! -
Chapter 32: The Price of Justice.
Modified Cub commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 32: The Price of Justice.
Yet another twist in this unforgettable story! Hopefully, Dean will be okay! Maybe Inspector Mercer has some type of tracking software on Julian's phone or has a team watching him and Aiden also? Can't wait for the finale!!! -
WOW 🔥🔥🔥- for never having had sex with a man before, Theo was starved for Elliot and that was a memorable night of passion for both guys. Beautifully written @Nuno R.F.C.R!
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Harriet continues to be one of my favorite characters in this story - she continues to surprise Richard. Vicky is annoying with her dramatics. Although he did come out to his parents at the beginning of the story, they were too self-absorbed to have heard it. Dickoless will break Richard's heart eventually. I'm looking forward to the ball.
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Progress, albeit slow, is a signature of the great Nuno's brilliant writing, but always worth it. Seems like Mateo's presence was the catalyst for Theo to make a move. Great chapter!
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The Revolutionaries
Modified Cub commented on Richie Tennyson's story chapter in The Revolutionaries
Richard & Stu would make a great couple and clearly Stu is interested. It's a shame the meeting wasn't attended for the right reasons. Richard is still delusional about Nickolas. -
Chapter 5: Poorly Executed Plans
Modified Cub commented on Thightide45's story chapter in Chapter 5: Poorly Executed Plans
We were able to learn a little more about Sky and Harper seems inquisitive about him. Wyatt sounds like my kind of guy - the tattoos are a bonus! Great chapter! -
Mike & Sammy are progressing nicely, and it appears that Mike is about ready to come out. Hopefully, that goes well. The campaign is picking up steam as well. Nice homerun by Sammy too!
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Chapter 4: In The Light Of Day
Modified Cub commented on Thightide45's story chapter in Chapter 4: In The Light Of Day
Wyatt is a peacemaker and has a soft spot for injured animals and humans. Skylar's still somewhat a mystery. -
Parents Weekend, Book Five of Five
Modified Cub commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Five of Five
Definitely a memorable weekend for Matt in many ways. He definitely got good use out of his main tool. Hayden will remember that fuck forever. Great chapter and a hot story overall. Likeable characters are your strong suit @Boy Mercury X - thanks for sharing with us!- 16 comments
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Definitely a carefree, feel-good chapter! We'll probably wish for a lighthearted one like this one soon. The reunion between Troy & Miles was so sweet. I like the way Miles respects Erik. What a unique family Miles now has!
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The Search And Contact
Modified Cub commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Search And Contact
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Parents Weekend, Book Four of Five
Modified Cub commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Four of Five
What a sizzling hot ending to a run! If I knew running could be that satisfying, I would have done that in college! Great threesome and story! Can't wait to see how Matt leaves the dorm room and if he finds out if Caleb and Hayden are more than just roomies! -
Great chapter! Harriet flying over the fence sounds like her. Richard actually sat down with Maggie but couldn't bring up what he really wanted to! It'll be interesting to see how Vicky reacts to dad's news and how and if Richard voices his thoughts to Mr. Jane about the ball.
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A unique, thought-provoking story about Ben, his manipulative co-dependent family, and an AI life-form named Julian, who has a tremendous impact on Ben and his family. A few lovable supporting characters add color and brevity to the story. Truly a wonderful read that will make you think and tug at your heart!
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Epilogue - Ben's POV
Modified Cub commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Epilogue - Ben's POV
A perfect ending to a story I have thoroughly enjoyed! The ways in which Ben's family transformed was great to see - Mason holding a job and using a spreadsheet to budget, Rachel actually asking Ben and in advance, and Diane seeing that AI Julian hadn't changed Ben in detrimental ways. Thankfully, Tessa moved into advocacy to assist other Halcyon/human pairings. I especially enjoyed Vera and Sophie & Grace and of course Professor Stomps! Ben's transformation was the biggest and most needed and I'm glad to see him & Julian got their happily ever after. Another brilliant story @mastershakeme - can't wait to read your future projects! -
Chapter Twenty-Two - Julian's POV
Modified Cub commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Twenty-Two - Julian's POV
Yes!!! Tessa saved the day! Ben & Julian will be eternally grateful to her for her diligent efforts to keep them together. My favorite line of this story is when Ben said Julian doesn't belong to him; he belongs with him! This has been an enjoyable story with a thought-provoking plot and interesting albeit flawed supporting characters which paralleled perfectly to real-life families. I can't wait to read the epilogue! -
Obviously, Elliot. there's mutual attraction, so just go for it! That was either Theo's first time kissing a man or he has some kind of internalized struggle going on we don't know about yet.
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HOLY SHIT! Didn't foresee the casual dropping of a $13.7 fucking million-dollar trust happening. I have to admit I was in tears at how well the guardianship and trust evolved so quickly and easily. So, that tells me there will be drama of some kind coming soon. Such an endearing story though!
