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Chapter 18 - Time Flies
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Time Flies
I too think Dean might surprise Kris and may be willing to move with him - it would be good for him to change environments and maybe help him move on somewhat from his tortured past. Kris does need to share his news with Dean soon though - the subtle secrets between the two is aggravating. I do feel bad for Ethan, who seems like a catch, in that he's realized Kris will never be able to reciprocate his feelings. -
Seizième partie : Le Dessert
Modified Cub commented on W_L's story chapter in Seizième partie : Le Dessert
Such a beautiful, emotional chapter! -
Liam forgave Rod, bumped up his team's bonuses, and then coincidentally again runs into a woefully unprepared Adrian at a hiking trail. This story is definitely unique in a good way. I'm enjoying the ride!
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Nice progress for my favorite fictional ink slingers! I found it fascinating to "hear" each of their thoughts as they hastily slid into their experimental quasi-relationship. Can't wait for more!
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Chapter 17 - Truth Be Told
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Truth Be Told
Good for Dean for finally coming out to his brother and finally being honest with Leah. She was pissed and maybe had the right to be. Kris, though, needs to come clean with Dean about his pending move to Toronto and then they need to decide where to go from there. -
Quinzième partie : Le Fromage
Modified Cub commented on W_L's story chapter in Quinzième partie : Le Fromage
Another great chapter although I was tearing up. Cancer is such an ugly disease. -
Quatorzième partie : Le Savoureux
Modified Cub commented on W_L's story chapter in Quatorzième partie : Le Savoureux
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Chapter 3 - Coincidence
Modified Cub commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Coincidence
Great chapter! I could feel Liam's pain and grief. Memories can be bittersweet and cruel at times, but important for us to remember the good times with the ones we loved and lost. -
Incredibly erotic! I definitely enjoyed that!
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Chapter 7: Where Hearts Go to Shatter!
Modified Cub commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Where Hearts Go to Shatter!
I think it's a good thing - when talented writers are able to evoke a myriad of emotions from their readers it shows a true talent - at least in my humble opinion! -
At least Joel didn't punch dumbass Jaxton although he's becoming quite the social media star at his new school. I thought Colt would've reacted differently when Joel offered to help warm him up - like said something defensively. I have an inclination that someone catches Javin all cozied up in the tent. Joel definitely will be feeling all that beer the next day. Javin should also know by now to just skip the lame post-game field parties and get to partying on their own - like back at Davin's - where there's no one waiting for them!
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I feel bad for Kris - his life finally feels like it's coming together then, bam, Ethan's confession, the new job offer, the complicated relationship with Dean, the choices he'll have to make! I hope he takes the Toronto promotion and takes his mom. I also feel for Leah and the anguish she's experiencing. Dean is definitely a conflicted, complicated person who seems to genuinely want to be with Kris, yet his upbringing and self-denial could ruin his potential relationship with Kris.
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Chapter 7: Where Hearts Go to Shatter!
Modified Cub commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Where Hearts Go to Shatter!
You certainly have a way to make me feel multiple emotions at once with your writing - anger, sadness, despair, you name it! -
"Melancholia" (Part 1)
Modified Cub commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Melancholia" (Part 1)
I'll admit I'd forgotten about this sexy tale - but glad to see a new chapter where some family details are revealed. -
Treizième partie : Les Entremets
Modified Cub commented on W_L's story chapter in Treizième partie : Les Entremets
Bittersweet chapter. Glad to see Jasmine bounce back and gain success. Ritchie was an unknown blessing. Reese & Dexter finally thriving and then, bam, the return of cancer. Don't get me started on immigration - unless you're a direct descendent of Native Americans - you're from an immigrant bloodline. Great chapter -
Precious - every single line - just adorable and so sweet!
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I've loved this story since you first posted it and am enjoying the internal monologues of the guys. I'd love to have multiple chapters released each week! I also really like the tatts and piercings descriptions, but I have several myself and that also keeps me interested!
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Liam's really in his own head about the coincidental run-ins with Adrian. Was Adrian there of his own volition or had Rod mentioned to him the same workout center Liam just happened to visit like clockwork every Sunday? Interesting chapter and we heard more about how Kevin's decline began. Can't wait to see what happens further!
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A beautiful ending (for now?) to a superbly written story! Like my fellow readers implied, I'd love to revisit this loving family down the road and read more about their lives. Thanks for sharing with us!
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Wonderful, endearing chapter had me tearing up several times!
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Cathartic chapter!
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A thoroughly enjoyable experience for us all 🔥
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So, Hunter's expanding his circle and seems to have romantic options yet I feel like Miguel may indeed be a "plant" to keep tabs on his dad's whereabouts or actual job. Perhaps something develops with Yeison? Interesting chapter
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I really like this so far - it's a unique and refreshing concept. I'd love to read more. Thanks for sharing!
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Kate was a surprise and I'm sure Aiko would pass out from that news! Good on Dad for standing up for Creek & Dailan. I love them together and hope they get their happily ever after! It feels like it's meant to be especially how he sacrificed himself to save Forest!
