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Richard saved Tate at least twice. it appears Victor planned for Alex to flirt with Tate and slip something in his drink that could've led to who knows what, rape or something even worse. And, had Richard not read the contract and alerted Tate, it could've resulted in financial catastrophe. Richard has more going for himself than he realizes. An unexpected turn of events in this chapter - fantastic job @BecSun
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I love the length of your chapters. I wasn't surprised Buddy offered help and did so in a creative accounting type of way so Chase doesn't have to worry about the cost and also looked up contractors for him. Like everyone else, he also seems taken with Pru. The townspeople also have affection for Chase & Pru and their situation, which again, reminds me of Stars Hollow. Aunt Beth & Uncle Dale also give off Richard & Emily vibes, as in they're willing to help, but only under the condition of a required weekly Sunday dinner. It's sweet that Pru calls her brother "Dad", because her memories of their parents aren't as prevalent as Chase's, yet he worries about her forgetting them altogether. This is one of those sweet, memorable stories I love to read.
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Sexy chapter with some romantic music and great food. The banter between our three guys is playful, yet they're discussing things rationally also. It was nice of both Hector & Sky to check in on Juanita. Sky's parents are hilarious and even though we don't care about their hetero relations 😄it still shows they're into one another, and yes, they offer great advice to their son regarding finances and the business.
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Interesting move by Tate - not only asking Richard to be his pretend boyfriend but he also conveniently had extra clothes in his car. Hopefully, no one is an ass to Richard. It would be interesting to hear more about his backstory between high school and now.
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The Difference Between Silence and Nothing
Modified Cub commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Difference Between Silence and Nothing
Kit had the balls to step up to Jack & defend Nick in front of others, while Luke did not. Kit also sensed something was off about Nick and let him know he didn't like Madison in that way. Nick was enthralled by Luke's sudden confession and should have listened to his gut. I don't think Luke was being intentionally mean after they had sex, it was his own internal battle telling him to withdraw. Hopefully he'll reach out to Nick in the morning and apologize for his actions. Also, it was shitty of him not to get Nick off in some way. If Nick continues to be down all weekend, will Kit notice and get him to talk about it, and if so, will he confront Luke? -
Andy was right in his dressing-down of the captain and the Judge was right to pull him aside and remind him of a valuable life lesson.
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A follow-up would be fantastic and those ideas sound great. I'd definitely read and enjoy it! I'm not really a hockey guy but do love sports stories.
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That was a unique style of writing - a bit of a departure for you - but enjoyable nonetheless. Hopefully, Lyle finds happiness again and has a successful career in the ER. The last entry gave me goosebumps!
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Nice ending to an enjoyable story. I would have preferred a more thorough ending such as them getting married and dealing with their relationship amongst the media storm it would bring and how they'd be perceived outside of their team, but it's still a great story regardless.
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A cumbersome chapter, dealing with the finances, but one that was necessary given the inequity among the three. This type of chapter is not one most authors would write about, but we all know that these types of conversations are necessary in real life. Hopefully, they'll be able to work out the specifics.
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Love that they're getting a place of their own and that Randy had been pondering the possibility since their second kiss! I also love how they got the second bedroom just for show! Outstanding progress guys!
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Chapter 3 The most familiar stranger
Modified Cub commented on BecSun's story chapter in Chapter 3 The most familiar stranger
Great chapter. The juxtaposition between the two is interesting yet the spark seems to be there. Hoping things turn around for Richard, and these guys get to bring joy to one another. -
Great chapter! Headed to the finals and the cat's out of the bag... officially. Wonder who will win the bet on them getting married? Makes sense that Coach Hayes won the bet. Loved the reception by the team - this would be great if it happened in real life!
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Perfect ending to an incredible story I thoroughly enjoyed reading! Thank you for sharing your talents with us once again and making me feel so many emotions while devouring it. You've created yet another wonderful story-verse. I had several favorite moments in this chapter - Meg's greeting, Erik's welcome home son, the house plans, Mrs. P's lasagna, Mila's excitement about her cat and pony, and of course, our guys consummating their relationship once again in the cabin where it all began and enjoying a spectacular sunset. I plan to write a review as well, after the epilogue of course. Kudos to you @kbois for your writing!
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Things He Had No Right to Feel
Modified Cub commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Things He Had No Right to Feel
Nick keeps getting mixed signals from Kit & Luke. Kit, as the QB, is always going to have girls clamoring for his attention - that's the hierarchy of high school. Luke showing concern for Nick, reaching for his hand, and being able to read his mood, shows he cares at least somewhat. Nick also has to contend with the thoughts and concerns of his core friend group, who just want him to be safe and happy, but they're adding anxious thoughts into his already cautious nature given what he's been through. It'll be interesting to see if Kit mentions the girl during chemistry and how he treats Nick after their time together on Saturday. Nick's parents also are clueless their son is gay so they must not have known about the Jack incident. -
Jackson certainly could've taken the shot but instead passed to Noah because he knew he'd be in the right spot to score and he did. The love between the two is becoming clearer now. Noah recognized that Jackson wanted him to take the shot.
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Richard appears to have had it rough over the years so now I'm quite intrigued over what he's been through. He was delighted to see Tate though.
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Maine: Mom Re-enters The Picture
Modified Cub commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Maine: Mom Re-enters The Picture
I was surprised by the romp for the Major & Loretta, but I guess it does make sense. Paul & Kurtis continue to enjoy their time together. Bernie will get what's coming to him one way or the other it appears.- 51 comments
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It's a no-brainer for our guys to buy the cabins and have a peaceful place to retreat to, away from the chaotic schedules they deal with. The "cabins" are even more gorgeous with the help of ChatGPT. That photo of Sky at the pride parade was absolutely gorgeous as was the one on the balcony of him and Brant.
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Chapter 1 The invitation
Modified Cub commented on BecSun's story chapter in Chapter 1 The invitation
This one piqued my interest and it's a good start. Looking forward to more! -
Loved the tenderness and simplicity between the guys in this chapter, and that they're comfortable cuddling on the bus in front of their teammates and coaches.
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Emotional chapter. Taylor has wonderful parents and Bernie & Thomas are great supporters of his. Chris was noticeably worried... could he be interested romantically in Taylor?
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Sweet chapter. Given his aptitude and quiet nature, Kent will do well in his educational pursuits, he just needed to dust off that part of his brain. Randy made an excellent point about an apartment being easier for him to study plus there will be many other wonderful benefits!
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Woo hoo! Some fantastic progress! And it was nice of the three main teammates to let the moment breathe at breakfast without comment.
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I really liked the depth in this chapter. Brayden has grown on me and he's a good friend to Jake and kept him from getting punched by Foster. It remains to be seen if Foster will lash out again, but he could learn a lot from Jake's past mistakes and seems to be an alcoholic. Although the discussion turned dark, the gathering in Erin's room and subsequent discussion emphasized the dark cloud over the US right now with regards to queer people and immigrants. Allies are needed these days too. Jake definitely has caught feelings for Kody, but until Kody stops running away every time he sees him, he'll continue to be ignorant about Jake's feelings.
