Modified Cub

That was a unique style of writing - a bit of a departure for you - but enjoyable nonetheless. Hopefully, Lyle finds happiness again and has a successful career in the ER. The last entry gave me goosebumps!

Nice ending to an enjoyable story. I would have preferred a more thorough ending such as them getting married and dealing with their relationship amongst the media storm it would bring and how they'd be perceived outside of their team, but it's still a great story regardless.

A cumbersome chapter, dealing with the finances, but one that was necessary given the inequity among the three. This type of chapter is not one most authors would write about, but we all know that these types of conversations are necessary in real life. Hopefully, they'll be able to work out the specifics.

Love that they're getting a place of their own and that Randy had been pondering the possibility since their second kiss! I also love how they got the second bedroom just for show! Outstanding progress guys!

Great chapter. The juxtaposition between the two is interesting yet the spark seems to be there. Hoping things turn around for Richard, and these guys get to bring joy to one another.

Great chapter! Headed to the finals and the cat's out of the bag... officially. Wonder who will win the bet on them getting married? Makes sense that Coach Hayes won the bet. Loved the reception by the team - this would be great if it happened in real life!

Perfect ending to an incredible story I thoroughly enjoyed reading! Thank you for sharing your talents with us once again and making me feel so many emotions while devouring it. You've created yet another wonderful story-verse. I had several favorite moments in this chapter - Meg's greeting, Erik's welcome home son, the house plans, Mrs. P's lasagna, Mila's excitement about her cat and pony, and of course, our guys consummating their relationship once again in the cabin where it all began and enjoying a spectacular sunset. I plan to write a review as well, after the epilogue of course. Kudos to you @kbois for your writing!

Nick keeps getting mixed signals from Kit & Luke. Kit, as the QB, is always going to have girls clamoring for his attention - that's the hierarchy of high school. Luke showing concern for Nick, reaching for his hand, and being able to read his mood, shows he cares at least somewhat. Nick also has to contend with the thoughts and concerns of his core friend group, who just want him to be safe and happy, but they're adding anxious thoughts into his already cautious nature given what he's been through. It'll be interesting to see if Kit mentions the girl during chemistry and how he treats Nick after their time together on Saturday. Nick's parents also are clueless their son is gay so they must not have known about the Jack incident.

Jackson certainly could've taken the shot but instead passed to Noah because he knew he'd be in the right spot to score and he did. The love between the two is becoming clearer now. Noah recognized that Jackson wanted him to take the shot.

Richard appears to have had it rough over the years so now I'm quite intrigued over what he's been through. He was delighted to see Tate though.

I was surprised by the romp for the Major & Loretta, but I guess it does make sense. Paul & Kurtis continue to enjoy their time together. Bernie will get what's coming to him one way or the other it appears.

It's a no-brainer for our guys to buy the cabins and have a peaceful place to retreat to, away from the chaotic schedules they deal with. The "cabins" are even more gorgeous with the help of ChatGPT. That photo of Sky at the pride parade was absolutely gorgeous as was the one on the balcony of him and Brant.

This one piqued my interest and it's a good start. Looking forward to more!

Loved the tenderness and simplicity between the guys in this chapter, and that they're comfortable cuddling on the bus in front of their teammates and coaches.

Emotional chapter. Taylor has wonderful parents and Bernie & Thomas are great supporters of his. Chris was noticeably worried... could he be interested romantically in Taylor?

Sweet chapter. Given his aptitude and quiet nature, Kent will do well in his educational pursuits, he just needed to dust off that part of his brain. Randy made an excellent point about an apartment being easier for him to study plus there will be many other wonderful benefits!

Woo hoo! Some fantastic progress! And it was nice of the three main teammates to let the moment breathe at breakfast without comment.

I really liked the depth in this chapter. Brayden has grown on me and he's a good friend to Jake and kept him from getting punched by Foster. It remains to be seen if Foster will lash out again, but he could learn a lot from Jake's past mistakes and seems to be an alcoholic. Although the discussion turned dark, the gathering in Erin's room and subsequent discussion emphasized the dark cloud over the US right now with regards to queer people and immigrants. Allies are needed these days too. Jake definitely has caught feelings for Kody, but until Kody stops running away every time he sees him, he'll continue to be ignorant about Jake's feelings.

Lots of great developments in this chapter. Juanita is okay and has asked that Sky not worry so much about her. Our guys and Sky's parents, along with David, are teaming up with hunky Gianni on a new restaurant venture, and Brantorsky seems to be on the verge of purchasing the property where the first movie was made and where the love story began. Valerie & Cole are engaged. Rachoud & Rafe are gorgeous. Sky's parents approved of Bransky adding Hector to their relationship. Everyone seems to be doing well.

Kent has definitely matured and I bet the watch from Randy will continue to hold significance for him as much as the bracelet from Ken has.

We finally got the full backstory on the hell Lynn endured and why she left Miles. The kids were ecstatic to meet their uncles, especially Mila who's a big fan of MilesFromNowhere and MP. We heard about Troy's plans to build their home on the ranch, and he helped Miles figure out the logistics of the holiday season. Our boys enjoyed a fantastic Thanksgiving with Lynn & family and now they'll get to be together for the Christmas season with Robbie in tow. Perhaps Lynn & her crew get invited as well? It was just like Miles to offer his entire inheritance to Lynn and gracious of her to decline, while Troy bridged the gap with a compromise both siblings could live with. Fantastic food porn this chapter, too! I've enjoyed this story so much that I hate to see it end, but it's been such a great road to travel!

Great chapter and nice adjustments by the coach!

If nothing else, Juanita is a consummate professional! She aced the interviews as always and even cautioned her audience with the teaser before the Hector segment so as to diffuse any ill-will reactions some might have had. This story continues to be a fascinating look into life imitating art and vice versa. We do care about Juanita's feelings and reactions and should give our esteemed author time to flesh out the rest of the plot. Fantastic chapter Ken! And, I have to say ChatGPT does a fantastic job of bringing your characters to life.

Kit & Luke both continue to amaze and confuse Nick with their actions. It's nice he had another Saturday spending time with them both. His self-confidence does seem to be growing, which is awesome.

Alexander greeted Oliver as if he was Adrian and was surprised to see him but couldn't tell it wasn't actually Adrian. Victoria is the obvious gold-digger to me. Leo acted as if Oliver was going to yell at him and the older two were definitely not happy to see Adrian return. He must have made his feelings about them quite known before his departure. Fascinating story!