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  1. york366
    Just thought I would post my story here and see what people thought of it. I may post more of my stories later if I get feedback. Become - Chapter 1 Become - Chapter 2 Become - Chapter 3 Let me know what you think! Anything at all! Thanks!
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    I have read a lot of different stories but I never expected to see a story like this. I think you have started to set up this story very well. A dying mother's wish is always a powerful motivating force. I don't know what you have planned but I think just writing this story will be doing great justice to the topic. I have actually been working on a story with actually a very similar plot. I have an outline of the story but I don't know what I am going to do with yet. Maybe I will be inspired by your story. Hope to see more chapters soon.
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    haha yeah i guess so...
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    Maybe Fairview? which made we wonder if this story is set in the present or the past since you said that crestwood was built in the 60s... minor details anyways, hope to see the next chapter soon!!!
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    loving your story... I found it really cool that the setting of you story is actually real. At first, I thought it was just some made up idyllic place somewhere in the northeast but when you started talking about I309, I looked it up and found that everything actually exists, the Nuangola lake and everything. I don't think you mention it but I'm guessing the high school that Steph goes to is Crestwood. From your descriptions in the story, Nuangola seems like a really beautiful place. Anyways, I hope you keep referencing real place names in your story because it just seems to make it more vivid and alive...
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    Ummm. Don't know them. The person below me has pulled an all-nighter just reading a story here. (cuz I totally have hehe)
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    I'll take the girls. Not that I don't like guys Go on a European tour with your family or go on a tour of Kansas with your best friends???
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