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Don't expect him to run out and do it right away. He'll be taking it slow for a while.
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So far, you are the only one to mention that you've spotted a contraction that the shaman used. You get a gold star. Yes, they get to head home now, but what will happen next?
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No, I wanted to put you to the test. And I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and wondered how Devin and Mac were going to use these skills.
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@Al Norris Al, you got most correct, but these four I've put the correct answers. 2 and 3 were also correct to an extent.
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I didn't say all the words had to be used, but a baby opossum is called a joey. And I think you saw that video on is The Proof Is Out There.
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I'm sorry to hear about your problem with comprehension. Does the same problem affect you when you have to remember things at work? Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter before you forget it.
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Chapter 36 – Leaving New Mexico After we woke up the next morning, I immediately wanted to find out what the shaman had planned for us to do. “What animal are we going to work on now?” I asked. “None, Grasshopper, because I think we should all eat something first. I am certain you are all hungry, so we will talk about this after we have eaten breakfast.” As soon as he mentioned eating breakfast my stomach rumbled, so I had to concede he was right. “Ok, but I ca
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If you like mysteries and a good thriller, then I would recommend this story to you. There are a lot of flashbacks as Austin in trying to deal with his fear of thunder and lightning storms, as the title suggests, but you'll find clues in those flashbacks that will help you understand some of the emotions and better understand the final outcome of the story.
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Compelling and suspenseful. I love the way you cloaked Austin's life in mystery and used the storm to mask them behind an impenetrable wall that he was trying to break through. Reyansh is the boyfriend I think we all would have loved to have - so loving, so caring, and so thoughtful - even when Austin got upset with him, Reyansh was trying to proceed in Austin's best interests. I'm glad that Austin was finally able to get some of the answers he was seeking, although he became upset with his deceased adoptive parents as well. In my opinion, they hadn't kidnapped him, and instead rescued him from a very unhealthy situation. I do hope, however, that someday Austin will inform the authorities about his recollections, so in case Tyler is still alive he can still be brought to justice for what he'd done. Thank you for this wonderful and fascinating story. I truly enjoyed it. I see where others thought it disjointed and hard to follow, but maybe it was due to my erratic brain, but I find that it's how the mind works when you're trying to deal with fearful or stressful situations. The flashbacks were informative and held clues, and I love the way you put this together. I may be alone in this, but I thought the story was very realistic and well done.
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The term doff could also be used to mean 'to thrust aside', such as 'to doff the chamber pot'. In other words to toss the contents out the window.
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One suggestion is that this originated from a late Middle English contraction for 'to do off' and don is a contraction for 'to do on'. Another suggestiion is that it comes from the Middle English word 'doffen', meaning to 'take off'.
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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, Terry, and you're correct. The quills and bird bones have a great deal in common.
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This is a touching, insightful, and sometimes humorous tale about a guy whose relationship is in trouble, and its status is signified by a tea cup. We can scratch our heads and identify with him, since many of us have been through a similar situation, and we can either agree or disagree with the outcome. Either way, this is a well written and interesting short story which I recommend everyone should read.
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Adi, I know I'm Johnny come lately, but I want to add my two cents. I could definitely identify with your protagonist and throughout the first part of the story I could feel his pain and despair. Fortunately, Andy was a good listener, and when she did speak she seemed to say the right things to get him thinking. I'm glad he came to a realization and left the teacup behind, to let us know the relationship is over. As far as the saying 'tempest in a teapot', I'm not sure if it's something the younger generation is familiar with or is in their vocabulary. As for us older folks, it made perfect sense, although we may have been oblivious to the fact that you were about to use it. It was perfect and I loved this stoy. Well done!
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Mother Moon's Message in Troubled Times
Bill W reviewed Headstall's story in 2020 - Spring - Full Moon
If you enjoy poetry, then you won't want to miss reading these two beautiful poems. The first is a tribute to the author's mother and he provides details that leave you feeling as if you almost knew her. It provides descriptions that gives you a brief glimpse of how she may have appeared on a given day, as well as a tribute to the fact that she would bend, but never break, and was always there for him. In the second poem, the author pays a heartfelt homage to the moon. He is deeply in touch with its phases and relates to how it affects his life. I believe too many of us simply ignore the moon or just take it for granted, but it has a much deeper meaning for the author.-
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Please accept my belated response, but I found these two poems to be beautifully written, Gary. The tribute to your mother is stunning and almost makes me feel as if I knew your mother. At least I got a brief glimpse of her from the descriptions you provided. The second poem wonderful and heartfelt homage to the moon, something which I think all too many of us simply ignore or just take for granted. Well done.
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An enjoyable look at how a gay man navigates his life, managing the demands of his job and family, while also worrying about the dogs that he may encounter as he walks from the bus stop to his front door. The story is very detailed and includes many details that you will find interesting, and if you're like me, after reading it you will be left wanting more. For me, that's the only reason I gave it four-stars instead of five, because I thought the story could have included much more.
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Carl, I know I'm late to this party, but I want to thank you for this sweet story, I just wish there was more of it. You had me scared for a brief time, since I thought Bob was going to discover the fire was his house going up in flames and I was worried about his hubby and the kids. I was also disappointed in Rene, although that's the attitude of many Catholics. However, I was encouraged that Denny invited Bob and Chris to his house for the Fourth of July outing and his sister has a wife and her brother-in-law has a husband. It was nice that Bob and Chris had two kids, even though their daughter was still a foster child. I would have liked to find out how the Fourth of July went, and I'd also like to find out what happened to Jamie's parents. I know, I'm one of those demanding readers that always wants more. Anyways, I still enjoyed the story.
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No matter what ails you, just rub this on your nuts and your symptoms will disappear. And possibly your testicles will too, after someone licks off this tasty treat.
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I'm not working, so I end up eating the contents of the bag of Kit Kats that I bought for Halloweeners that never showed up. And trust me, I don't need the extra calories. but I hate to see the money go to waste.
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The word motely is thought to come from the Anglo-Saxon word motteley, meaning composed of many colors. Then during the 14th and 17th century in England it was used to refer to woolen fabric of mixed colors. It later evolved to mean anything that is composed of disparate or unrelated elements.
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When I was in college, every apartment I lived in hot a motley collection of old furniture, but it sufficed. It's amazing what we did to get a higher education.
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Ok, I've experienced 3:00 a.m. twice already and I don't know if I should feel an hour more tired or not. Well, I do and I'm sure my body clock is going to be off kilter for a while now. At least it makes up for the spring when I lost an hour.
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That will be an interesting time.
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There is no need to be in constant contact with Mother Earth once she allows you to transition. You can board a plane and fly to a different location or you can transition into a bird and soar above the ground, it won't haven't any effect.
