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Thank you for the comment, Parker. Jimmy means well. He’ll come through later for Mark, on more than one occasion.
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You too are right, droughtquake! California? Now I understand the name droughtquake.
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Thank you, mfa. You’re right! You’re now a full fleged sleuth.
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Thank you, Chris. Glad you like it.
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LATE FRIDAY AFTERNOON/EARLY EVENING, DAY 3 “Here we are,” Mickey says as we approach his home.” I’m surprised. “Wow, you actually live on the ground floor of a high-rise, with street access.” “Yeah, it’s a two-story townhouse,” he explains. “It’s really sweet, and in a location that’s really convenient for me to get around the downtown on foot. Tanner Springs Park is just around the corner. It’s a really nice concept; a wetland park in the city, among high-rises.” “Cool. You’ll h
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You do have a good imagination. You’re way ahead of me!
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I do this because It really peeves me when someone writes a good story that draws me, then abruptly quits it, leaving me hanging. In fact, I often wait until a story is complete before I begin reading it. Thanks for the comment.
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I really like Jo. She brings out the best in Robbie. And she’s a no-nonsense woman. I enjoyed their conversation while filling out the form. She may seem a little wacky, but she gets things done; she got Robbie to talk to Conner and she got Sue to apparently lay down the law with Don. Jo’s got a lot of power and everyone knows it. My favorite line: “No, I’m not going to kill myself. I don’t need to; Don’s gonna do it for me.” Another great chapter, Dodger! And a powerful one; Robbie’s facing his issues, which includes his dependence on Jo. You’re an incredible writer. I know that it takes a while to write good chapters like this. I’m patient.
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Thanks for the comment, FanLit. Interesting observation. I really haven’t taken the time to dissect them.
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Thanks for the comment, Chris.
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WEDNESDAY MORNING, DAY 1 I turn my head towards the door as it opens and see an attractive, slender young man enter, a canvas messenger bag slung over his shoulder. He’s cute, I notice as he approaches the service counter, looks up at the menu above the barista’s head and stands there, trying to decide. It takes him a moment before he smiles and says, “I’ll have a Mocha Java, very light on the cream, please. And I’ll have a cinnamon scone, warmed, please.” And he’s polite. A student mayb
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Mickey is a rather shy twenty-year-old first-year college student majoring in interior design and Mark is a more worldly twenty-two-year-old first-year law student. Mark has an eye for Mickey from the moment that he sees him and strikes up a conversation with him as soon as Mickey seats himself at the table next to him in Starbucks. As fortune would have it, Mickey moves to Mark's table and they forge a friendship. But sensing that there is more to this enigmatic young man than meets the eye, Mark sets out to confirm it, hoping that he and Mickey can become more than just friends.
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A very meaty chapter! Both characters have taken on a life now. Aubrey is writing again and I expect Andrew to be a major influence in Nelson’s life. Friction ahead for Aubrey and Kat. Thanks for the great chapter, MozLover21.
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Chapter 5: Painting the deck
Arran commented on GabrielCaldwell's story chapter in Chapter 5: Painting the deck
Shame on Brian. What justification can he have to avoid Jonah now when he’s given Jonah every reason to believe that they have a future together? Next chapter should be a good one. Thanks, Gabriel. -
Thank you. You’re welcome.
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Thank you for the compliment, Philippe. Yes, more to share very soon.
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Thank you, droughtquake (interesting name). You’ll get a chance in a day or two.
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Thanks for another good chapter. Surprising that Aubrey capitulated so easily. Could he feel the electricity too? Could it be that he isn’t as happy with Tom as he wants Andrew to believe?
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I thank everyone who has reacted or commented to this, my first story. Great community!
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Thank you, Mike. I really appreciate your comment. Stay tuned.
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Thank you, Chris. I appreciate your comment. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Another one coming soon.
