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  1. ......................Has strong urge to take old shoes and clothing out near a church at 4am and put dry ice in the up right shoes and scatter the clothing.
  2. ................ How did I miss those other chapters?? So a great secret is locked up in Cameron's head somewhere? I think they are going to get captured but invisible girl will be the key to their rescue. The memorial car, is a great inspiration, they will rise up and not lose this war. Great chapter(s)
  3. ............. Better not, or I may consider a roasted goat for X-mas.
  4. HAPPY BIRTHDAY MYR!! ....................Have a great one!!!!
  5. ............. I agree, Nick was full of surprises as well as being surprised himself, Ninja Ace, haha I like that! Looks like Ace's mother is going to take a lot of time to 'adjust' her thinking. I love how Nick basically told her off. Haze did good in telling Nick to not get so angry over the whispers and stares, he knew Ace could feel tension. Great chapter Nephy, looking forward to the next 'fun' chapters.
  6. ....................... Agreed !!! Agonizingly slow, but I see the end of the charade being played by Trevor and Shane. It looks like it will take Trevor's impending melt-down to bring these two together. The meeting between Lisa, Joel, Jim and Dirk is going to be most revealing! How much Dirk tells will be the turning point for Lisa and Joel. Will 'light bulbs' finally go off in their heads? Great chapter CJ!
  7. HAPPY BIRTHDAY GRAEME!! ............ Have a G'day Mate!!
  8. ...................Hahahaha! Yep, I can see this, obviously CJ had no clue how to advance this!
  9. ................. Yep Bridget f'**d up here! I expected it to be from George and indirectly it was, but still the word of mouth will ruin her plans and bring focus back to her. Trevor and Shane, how much longer is thing going to go on??? It is obvious they have eyes on each other, nice boiling point of it of the beach scene though. Hmmmm, time is antagonizing slow here! The title threw me, but I at least expected to here from Sanchez, Gonzales, Henry George or Bridget in this chapter.................... Or at least Shane and Trevor at least getting it on!!! LOL, great chapter Goat!
  10. ............. Interesting question, I felt forever young until I hit 55, then those old injuries started to act up on me .. still my body is in pretty good shape. But you won't find me running like Vic (methinks he is just checking out guys running in front of hi though)
  11. HAPPY BIRTHDAY PAT!! .......Hope it is a great one!!
  12. HAPPY B-DAY ANDY!!! .................................. Have a good one!!
  13. ............Here's hope that BBQ will end the discussion of Shane and Trevor's distractions Lisa and Joel's meeting went without a hitch in their thinking, I'm still wondering if Henry has 'checked out the guesthouse' seeing that he knows about it in his surveillance. His tagging George might lead to some results that Gonzales and he both desperately need as Joel's assumptions are just that. Jason and Barney are going to set loose a hornets nest here, sending Trevor on another danger very soon. Problem I see with Joel and Lisa's investigation is that it will all be entered into Bridget and George's ear. Great chapter CJ! But what is going to unravel first? The coke plant, the attempted assantion of Trevor or the much anticipated 12/17 meeting with Gonzales and Dirk. Will Henry find Georges vehicle near Joel's at the planting of evidence? Will he stop the attempt or will he find out the over generous monies spent on Trevor's old vehicle.
  14. ........... First off great chapter Nephy! 2nd I really think Haze needs to confide to Ace's mother on what he has observed. Keeping silent will only allow this to escalate, Haze has to realize there is a real danger here, and he needs not to explode his fury. Such as what if before Ace came home, his mom happened upon the shoes and the note. She would know right off it wasn't Nick, Haze or Ace leaving only......
  15. ....................... Ditto, OMG, how close he could come to dying! I hope he recovers fully!
  16. .............. And the title is what? 'Frank & Henry'?
  17. [quote name='Agincourt' timestamp='1304213342' post='299769' I had the same concerns. It surprises me that Dewberry managed to carry out his type of activity as long as he did without detection. Presumably it was because the boys involved consented. Which raises the question, why did he suddenly turn to coercion in Woody's case? It was supremely risky for someone in his position. Was there any indication in the story that Woody was such an extraordinary "catch" that it would be worth the teacher throwing away his entire career and life as he knew it in order to pursue him? It's as though the guy went right off the deep end. A ................. I think Dewberry never considered getting 'caught' he had been doing this for so long he thought he was 'teflon', and thought that by blackmail he could continue it. I mean it worked for him for so long! Why how he coerced Brandon is beyond me though, Brandon obviously had some mental issues. Woody still has his own issues to resolve here, his family is not very happy and his notoriety may soon be seen in school. But the author left us with a cliffhanger here didn't he?
  18. .................... Don't feel to bad goat, when I replied to the last my Kid Frank come in and for some reason he distracted me enough that Henry became Frank!!!
  19. ................That was interesting! I would have not guess that Ace was going there, in fact I was surprised that he asked to be bottomed here His 'experience' caught me off guard, as I'm sue it did to Haze, kinda of a twist for you Nephy! Great chapter, although the first two paragraphs left me a bit lost.
  20. ..... Ok, I see a problem with George's seemingly solution here, I'm very sure that Frank has already bugged the guesthouse, so he knows enough to warn Lisa and Joel to the dangers here. Perhaps enough to sway them them into thinking of the upcoming dangers. Frank is going to be the key in convincing those two that Dirk is not responsible in Trevor;'s attempted assassinations on his life. I doubt he will convince them of Bridget's complicity in it though, maybe they will come clean on the money though. Enough to set a counter trap against George and Bridget. I wonder if Bridget will turn on George? Sanchez has problems in Australia? Seems odd since he had a reach in the middle of an ocean? Finally Shane and Trevor are moving closer together, I have no doubt here that Shane is also gay. Great chapter CJ!!
  21. ...............So the title of the next chapter is 'Double Entendre'?
  22. ...................... There are several of Dom's stories that are well worthy of publishing 'The Log Way" is one of most favorites along with 'Desert Droppings'. The one I most intrigued with was the 'The"Other Side Of Me'. It was a thriller all the way, with a perfect ending leading us on to beleive in schizophrenic kid. The blending of the 'non existent kid' as seen from anothers eyes was great, finalized by the freedom and truth. Salute to DOM!!.
  23. ............... Great chapter Nephy!!! At 1st I thought Logan was the helpful cross walker, but decided that even Ace would have recognized him. Logan has plans to dis-rail Ace's independence, but cannot phantom why? Jealousy or hatred? Haze did the right thing in letting Ace regain his bearings, likewise Ace did the right thing in returning home with Haze to settle down. Wonder if Logan over plays his hand in telling his parents about Ace's misadventures, he might just trap himself there. Hahaha! Yes, Haze's mother is something else, I was even a bit shocked at her meat remark!!!! Looking forward to more!!
  24. ............. Well am I lucky or not? Nice to get the chapter early (less a week) Very glad I didn't fall into the trap of the well worn ropes on the harnesses of the parasails being a new trap and danger for Trevor and Shane having a close call with the sharks. Before the run, Trevor yet again exhibits his 'distraction' with Shane, something Shane has finally caught on to and it is clear to me that Shane knows now. He is aware of the effect he has on Trevor, and displays a concern after the collapse in the run by shading him and being somewhat more intrigued with Trevor's well being. As evidenced by the Thanksgiving dinner for Trevor, makes me wonder if it was the Blakes Idea or Shane's. Hummm, Bridget has set up Joel and Lisa with the $6,000 purchase of a no-good car, she wants either Joel's or Lisa's car to be involved in the planting of the drugs. The interview with Frank should be very discovery here, I hope, Bridget's over generous 'donation' is bound to raise questions which the detective can easily figure out. We have still not figured out any action from Sanchez, nor the reporter here. Dirk and Jim need to sit tight still for almost a month, too much can happen in the ensuing weeks. A nice chapter goat, but I see a few coming up filled with great anguish and perhaps a few cliffhangers!!!
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