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Cliff hangers are not good even if can go right to the next story! This has be a most interesting read throughout, and I'm not looking for it to finish. Each book has been an adventure, so glad I took the chance to begin. A BIG THANKYOU
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OMG, what an ending! Now I feel sick, just as things get a little more settled between the two brothers. I wish I could see into the future, I hope the accident was not quite so serious and that CJ's father has not passed 😱A sad ending to this story, no matter the outcome.😥😥😥😥
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It's true what they say about not going on holidays because of the changes that happen, both away and at home. So good that the house sold with little effort. Now the hunt is on for a new place to call home. CP has a diary full of people who want to catch up. Gee, it's good to be home again. Another we'll put together chapter, thanks.
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An interesting chat between CJ and his dad about leaving Owen when they head back home. This was one of the pure magic moments of the love for ones, child as they each realise the ties that bind them together is love and trust in each other. Then the fantastic New Year evening set in the stunning harbour with bridge and opera house to complete the evening. A lovely chapter full of interest.👍
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Someday We'll Be Together
Lwj commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Someday We'll Be Together
Like the way their trip down under is developing, Cj sure is smitten with his surfer dude. Not sure getting pumped without preparation is a wise move. He will not be the first to have made that mistake sure hope it all goes well. Nice little pleased to meet you! on the top of the harbour bridge, morons, are everywhere. Like this chapter 👍 -
Another interesting day in the Hunter Vally area. A great part of NSW. Interesting and well written chapter, thanks.
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Wow, the dads have relaxed and let out the harness, CJ can, at last, enjoy the Aussie experience. Interesting church service to begin the day with. Great read.
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You Can Look, But You Better Not Touch
Lwj commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in You Can Look, But You Better Not Touch
Great start to this third book.👍 -
Young love and yes it can be one big fuck feast.👍 But the years a low us to settle down😘
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CJ is one of a kind, his care and thoughts about others who are less fortunate, are quite remarkable.
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You asked if I drink! Yes, I do about one bottle of single malt Scotch Whiskey a year. Have I ever been drunk yes once when I was in my thirties I drank whiskey while on medication it knocked me for a six was off my face and couldn't walk. I do not object to what adults do but giving drugs of any kind to 15year old's is wrong. Also when my grandsons were 12 &10, I read the eulogy at their fathers funeral, he drank himself to death. Now in their twenties, they both drink but I will never buy them alcohol and they know how I feel about them drinking to excess. And I am79 years old
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So father's now going to pull a parent knows the best card. What a hypocrite he allows the fifteen-year-old to smoke dope, but objects to I'm having sex!
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Just lost the magic, encouraging a 15 yr old to smoke dope😱.Not good maybe it's me? I never found the need to partake.😥😥😥 still can't see the need.
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A great chapter letting CJ lead the introductions to his friend's working to stamp out bullying and homophobia in schools. As the famous quote said.( It is one small step for man ) I refer to an Astronaught. However, it can also be used to change the hatred that is in it's own way bringing the the drums of war or the fore in Europe once again.
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I liked this chapter on the PP sailing down the river. That wonderful sentence, CJ imagined being in one of the Majestic Cathedrals this one consecrated to mother nature. Just perfect for setting the mood of the evening. Great writing once again.
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Oops I was wrong thinking the priest and the others with him were trying to get to the shot policeman, they were just bigots. Well done young CJ for putting them in their place. There are many comments I could make about this chapter, however I shall just say well done again,it's a great read.
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Think there are a couple of cops wishing they had decided to join the navy no offence to the navy. But they're going to feel like they spent a week in the barrel once the police shooting is set straight. Good that Tom is going to be alright. Could it be the priest and the other two are going to try killing Tom while in the hospital?
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Other writers have said all that was required. This has been one of the best opening chapters I have read. Thank you for the effort you put into your writing. You have me all churned up with the angst of the supercharged stress GREAT STUFF, thanks.
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Can't wait to begin this next part of the story. I trust you now find yourself in better headspace as you continue to entertain me, with your work. Please be well. I wish you all the best. Sincerely LWJ
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While CJ shows a very mature side to his nature, being innocent to the reality of the cynical, and fickle world of gay people, I see him being deeply hurt as he reacts to the need, to be loved and experience his own sexual being.
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How rude and it was just getting interesting, looks like I shall have to keep reading.
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Was interesting that the first friend CJ makes is straight not that is a problem. After a couple of mentions of the redhead who first appeared when CJ and his dad were at the gym. I expected CJ would be hit on by another gay guy. So glad it was different to where I thought it was heading. The phone call to his brother was and emotional time for them both.
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Have only just begun to read Summer Days an interesting beginning. How odd that a mother would have no empathy for a child she wanted and with such little care sent him to live with his gay father and partner. There are many ways this question could be answered but will leave that and move forward to living with his ( two) dads, which is possibly best given his sexual orientation which he is beginning to question and understand. While he knows of and has met most of the father's group it must still be daunting to be exposed to blatant sexual innuendo at first glance as openly gay.l am pleased that I decided to open the work and thus far I have enjoyed the read. Thanks for allowing me the chance to read your work and I shall look forward to the rest of this work.
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Jazz is not my kind of music at all,more into the romantic classical ensemble singing.( I must be old) Was an interesting awakening of first attraction, language was a little sophisticated for ones so young learning to love one another. The walk in the park and forest was magical.👍
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Wow! What a skyrocket to set off the second chapter. Like the way you portrayed the sense of remorse in Connor's relating of his feelings about being gay. A very good start to this story. Many thanks for your effort.
