Not sure how a came upon this story but I'm glad that I did. It was very well done. There isn't anything that I can say that hasn't already been said in a positive way other than I agree X 100.
Thanks for writing and sharing. You did it well.
Absolutely loved the whole novel and thought the ending was perfect. I would love to read more of your writings as you have done it so well.
I myself loved the Nick story line and wouldn't have minded at all if the relationship had carried on just a little further. I felt it was written in a way that didn't make it seem dirty or sleazy but more about a close and erotic friendship. If that makes sense.
Thanks for writing and sharing your talents.
Absolutely loved the whole novel. The characterization was superb and so erotic. I really enjoyed the way you incorporated the Coldplay music throughout and I loved the part with The New Guy. Thanks for writing, you and your editor and co-writer as well.
I look forward to reading the final chapters.
There isn't anything that I can say about this story that has not already been said; so I'll just say I loved it. Thanks for writing and sharing. You did it well.
Wow, I am totally taken in with this story. Your written word is so powerful in making me feel the emotions that Robbie and all of the characters in this story are feeling. You keep making my eyes water. Beautiful story and thanks for writing and sharing it.
I realize that this story is years old I just wanted to try and come to terms as it impacted me.I have not read any of the comments to this chapter but I will say that I am thinking that you must have suffered some personal loss in your past to write such detailed feelings of pain for the death of a loved one. even If not, it was very well written. It brought back feelings of loss for myself from past experiences. As I read this I am currently mourning the loss of a long time friend. Very well written good chapter.
I read to learn, and the way that this educational material is presented, with an emotional attachment, makes it fun and interesting to learn. I consider myself better educated already with more to come. Thanks, for what so far in my reading is a really good story.
Just WOW. One of the best suspense stories I have ever read, or even story period, for that matter. I just loved the characterization and the plot from beginning to end. Thanks so much for sharing such a great talent you have. I look forward to reading on to your other stories.
What a beautiful story. I can't write anything that would add to what has already been written. Thanks so much for sharing your talents and providing such a feel good story.
This was a very good read. I really enjoyed it. I had a dog that loved to fetch a tennis ball as well so I really enjoyed Sadie being perfectly brought into the story and I could really envision her chasing the golf balls in the end.
Thanks for sharing your writing talents. You did it well.
What an awesome story. The ending made my eyes water, dammit. Living in the states I love reading stories with locations in the UK. Makes me feel as though I am visiting there as I can only dream of ever doing so. Thanks for a well written story and the journey it took me on.