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Jonathan Hamilton Is (Not) An Easy Lay
SAW commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Jonathan Hamilton Is (Not) An Easy Lay
I'm just reading this story and at this chapter, I am freaking laughing out loud about a dead dog!! Loving the reading. Great story thus far -
Not sure how a came upon this story but I'm glad that I did. It was very well done. There isn't anything that I can say that hasn't already been said in a positive way other than I agree X 100. Thanks for writing and sharing. You did it well.
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Chapter 33 - Coming home - Part 2
SAW commented on unilive's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Coming home - Part 2
Absolutely loved the whole novel and thought the ending was perfect. I would love to read more of your writings as you have done it so well. I myself loved the Nick story line and wouldn't have minded at all if the relationship had carried on just a little further. I felt it was written in a way that didn't make it seem dirty or sleazy but more about a close and erotic friendship. If that makes sense. Thanks for writing and sharing your talents. -
Absolutely loved the whole novel. The characterization was superb and so erotic. I really enjoyed the way you incorporated the Coldplay music throughout and I loved the part with The New Guy. Thanks for writing, you and your editor and co-writer as well. I look forward to reading the final chapters.
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There isn't anything that I can say about this story that has not already been said; so I'll just say I loved it. Thanks for writing and sharing. You did it well.
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Awesome story. I loved it!!!
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Chapter 5 Grieving and Believing
SAW commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 5 Grieving and Believing
Wow, I am totally taken in with this story. Your written word is so powerful in making me feel the emotions that Robbie and all of the characters in this story are feeling. You keep making my eyes water. Beautiful story and thanks for writing and sharing it. -
Chapter 3 The Worst Day of My Life
SAW commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 3 The Worst Day of My Life
I realize that this story is years old I just wanted to try and come to terms as it impacted me.I have not read any of the comments to this chapter but I will say that I am thinking that you must have suffered some personal loss in your past to write such detailed feelings of pain for the death of a loved one. even If not, it was very well written. It brought back feelings of loss for myself from past experiences. As I read this I am currently mourning the loss of a long time friend. Very well written good chapter. -
I read to learn, and the way that this educational material is presented, with an emotional attachment, makes it fun and interesting to learn. I consider myself better educated already with more to come. Thanks, for what so far in my reading is a really good story.
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Just WOW. One of the best suspense stories I have ever read, or even story period, for that matter. I just loved the characterization and the plot from beginning to end. Thanks so much for sharing such a great talent you have. I look forward to reading on to your other stories.
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Being Bi, I absolutely loved this. Very well written and erotic as hell.
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Wow, this was hot!!! Well written and very much enjoyed the read. Thanks so much for sharing your story telling talents!
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Epilogue - Get Your Cowboy On, All Year Round
SAW commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Epilogue - Get Your Cowboy On, All Year Round
What a beautiful story. I can't write anything that would add to what has already been written. Thanks so much for sharing your talents and providing such a feel good story. -
This was a very good read. I really enjoyed it. I had a dog that loved to fetch a tennis ball as well so I really enjoyed Sadie being perfectly brought into the story and I could really envision her chasing the golf balls in the end. Thanks for sharing your writing talents. You did it well.
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Chapter 11 - What Comes Next
SAW commented on RolandQ's story chapter in Chapter 11 - What Comes Next
Loved it. Fun to read. Thanks for writing and sharing. -
Just a beautiful read. Loved every sentence. Thanks so much for sharing your amazing talents.
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I don't know how I came about or got directed to this story but I am thankful that I did. I truly enjoyed it and appreciate that you took the time to write it and share it. You have a great talent.
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I'm years behind on commenting on this story but I'm going to because I just can't help but say that this story is fucking hilarious!!! Oh, and very erotic.
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... Forever is Never that Easy (Part 2)
SAW commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ... Forever is Never that Easy (Part 2)
Thanks for writing and sharing such a well written story. I'm going to miss following along the road of life with all these characters. -
Wow, it's nice to pick back up on this novel that I think I was reading about 2 years ago and then no more. I love it. Thanks for getting back to the story.
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Thanks for this story Eric. It was a very enjoyable read. I hope some day I can visit that part of Montana that your writings took me mentally to.
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This was a fun read, especially chapter 7- The walk of Shane. What a brilliant intro to bring in AARP. Thanks so much for writing what I found to be such a humorous drama. You do it well.
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What an amazing well written journey that this Novel just took me on. Captivating from chapter one thru thirty-three. Just fucking awesome. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.
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I don’t want to toot my own horn but I’m pretty creative, too. I suggest a photo of us playing Stratego. Surprise flashes in Loren’s eyes when I bring the box to the kitchen. It’s dirty and a little stained after finding it in the trash a few weeks ago. He avoids eye contact. This was a very entertaining chapter with lots of humor but this is what made me laugh out loud. The previous chapter was pretty somber but before it got to that part I loved the sweatshirts that Matt and Loren put on; I just hope both teams have fun
