ROXMILLER

I can't stop! Is it tomorrow yet?

I died when I saw this was Perry's pointofview. Wonderful. I think we're going to see things really moving along now! Yippy! xoxo Rox

Oh this was fun to read! Perry toyed Kyan around a bit and I loved every second of it, but in the end I think Kyan won with his little tease of a kiss. xoxo Rox

If I’m honest… 3. except now I will be a 1

Oh no. I did not like how this ended. I hope other commenters are correct and this is temporary. The awkward clinical feel made me cringe. I hated it. And still no kissing!! They need to kiss! It will solve everything!!!

Thought he really screwed it up here but we know what he meant. It's sweet how comfortable Kyan is with Perry. He truly believes nothing can screw things up between them. Obviously, that thinking will be his own demise.

We are doomed.

Well, minus about 9 hours lol

I agree with this and I think Jessica is admirable for knowing when to stay out of it. Kyan might need help but right now he and Perry need to be uninterrupted.

Max knew going into tonight that there was something going on with Perry and Kyan, and even if Perry and Kyan didn’t know it, Max put himself in a position of failure. IMO, he came on way to strong with Perry. There was overcompensation at the very least. I’m sad Max walked away feeling defeated, but he swung the bat knowing the pitch was way off. I don’t know what is going to happen with Perry out of the shower but my expectation is very low. I have a feeling they will pretend nothing strange happened and fall asleep side by side. This could be a major setback. Whatever happens moving forward is Kyan’s call. He’s a smart guy and a good father but he lacks the experience needed to take the reigns in this situation. Xxx Rox

You're not wrong, but like a previous commentor, I wonder what the point of this point is. For authors to not share stories because they will not get 10k views per chapter? This post reads rather pessimistically. There are a ton of newer authors, people who do this for personal enjoyment. I did take a look at some of your reviews. One rather scathing 2 star review was for an authors first story on the site. Other readers will see that review and never give that story a chance. That author will never make the 1,000 read on his story. Hell, they may feel discouraged and never even write again. But maybe that's what this is all about? I'm not sure.

Great chapters. I loved the video. brings what you wrote to life.

I think this is the case. I would venture a guess that there are some serious feelings on Perry's side of things. It would be so damn hard to share a bed with someone you pine after. How could you know hope and wish and pray that he reaches across in the middle of the night wanting you? I don't think I could do it.

Absolutely no pineapple. No excuses, no reason, no logic. I stand with Mr. Perry's Dad on this one. Pizza is meant for meat and good stuff.

I really like this story.