I’ve read this story once before and excluding Chapter 10, I loved it. Great storyline and you’re an awesome author, but on my second reading, I just can’t get past how much I hated chapter 10. He stands up to the prick, and then when the prick grabs his arm tightly, he turns into a coward and says “yes sir” then cleans/replaces the pricks clothes. That’s just shite.
Thank you for writing the story, because, as I said the rest is really awesome. But, this chapter on my second reading, I just couldn’t finish.