Flip-Flop

Quickly responding with a creative GIF is a trademark of his reactions to chapter comments also!!

Chapter opens 9/11/2001 in a fog of survival of the disaster, a mere 1400 words later, our favorite couple are in 2006, both partners in thriving successful business's, thinking: Yep, time can quickly pass in good times and bad times here in @chris191070's creative stories. Why does that always seem to work out so well? Short but concise chapters are one of the trademarks of his prolific writings. Well done.

Butterflies and memories are both favorites that flutter in the mind of this senior gardener. I enjoyed the pairing of them, well done!

My guess is not very long. We are just getting a good idea of some of the forces at play here now, and I have a feeling that much more is in store for us. Kareem remains a bit of a mystery to us still. but I'm bracing myself for many "unusual" surprises that will surely come as we proceed ahead. 😎 It is best to protect your eyes against this strong desert sun.

You got yourself out of trouble from your readers, with this chapter. Michael, Doug, Marty and the rest of the country and world are left to deal with the terrible scope of this tragedy! I have no idea how you intend to move this story forward from here, but I am sure you have things planned out. Right?

What a well written intense chapter, that revealed hidden facts and released pent up emotions. The physical conflict with Dave and Drew, and then again with Mickey, will surely have consequences for both of them. I worry about what the fallout that is sure to come from Dave, will be for Mickey and Drew? I also enjoyed the fact that Mickey showed Dave and the group of fellow players, that he is a force not to be taken so lightly. Well done.

It looks like Dave has set the battle-lines for future confrontations between Drew and himself. No good can be expected in the future from his attitude.

Again things and time pass quickly, in NYC for this extremely happy couple, but our author drops the feeling of dread in his last line of the chapter! ☹️

Nope nothing within the range of normal is going on here. They were wise not to trust "the lady in black". My question was why this group was selected by the Gods for this quest? It certainly seem this was all preordained. Why the four of them, and what could be the overall purpose of this dangerous quest? 🤔 As the lady in black, I'm burning to find out the answers. 😊

Wow. Talk about having baggage due to family concerns. It would take a U-Haul to carry around that large of a load!

The new couple have left the isolation of rural Wyoming and are now back in the spotlight and whirlwind of the NYC environment. Will their relationship grow stronger or suffer from all the new variables that the city may thrust at them? I would hope they are able to thrive and grow stronger under the pressures the "Big Apple" may throw their way. Is a HEA possible in their future? 🤔

I think they are stalling, waiting for Indiana Jones or Thor, god of thunder to make their appearance known, They had plenty of desert area to discuss what is happening, away from unwanted listeners. They also are gaining many items to keep safe. I believe that they would and should discuss the current events among themselves, even if the "lady in black" had predicted these events but they also did not trust her, at the time.

Yet again, we are being kept in the dark about what is actually going on about their visit and mission. No discussions about the small statue, the glowing Ra protection rings, and the voices directing their actions on this mission of discovery. Omar is reveling his intentions while Kareem remains a bit of an unknown force. 🤔 What is truly taking place here?

I too had read and followed this story years ago, and agree with @CincyKris's opinion, fantastic. I use to wait months for the your next chapter'. I am glad to see you brought it to GA, and hopefully there won't be any long waits between chapters,, as when you were first writing the story. Are you still planning to add more chapters to your "Lukus" story? Which is another great read, that you brought to us on GA. Your writing is special.

Wow, things always move very quickly in our author's stories! Big decisions have been made, and acted on. Next stop,back to NYC. where their future awaits.