Flip-Flop

I like Andy but his actions reveal that unless he is willing to change his author's ego and selfish ways, any meaningful relationship does not seem likely. Matt's relationship with Ahmet is an attempt to escape the reality of his situation and contains nothing but danger for both of them, and he is wise to that fact. Matt and Ahmet, and Andy and Tony's relationships were/are for all the wrong reasons. Until situations change for both characters any thoughts of a true relationship seems to be nothing but a folly to me. Andy controls his actions, where Matt can not. I feel that the time leap of this chapter reflects the helplessness of Matt's situation.

Neither can I. Reading this story is nothing but pure fun and is the high point of my day. Of course, that could be because I have been sleeping late, and napping, since I can't wait for the next chapter, which drops on this site in the middle of the night. I am lucky to hit the sack by 4 or 5 AM. I am willing to pay that price. It also helps to be retired and not wanting to do anything on these 90 degree days. Love ❣️ this tale.

Happy to see Kevin was fortunate to survive the spectacular accident with only minor injuries. The car was destroyed, but he was very lucky,and should recover quickly. Eric's actions and concerns revealed a lot to an unsure and shell shocked Kevin. We move on to Vegas, where the new base player should take over. This drama may be over but the next chapter's title reveals the @Lee Wilson roller coaster keep rolling on.

I would love to see Bzup included in Jem and Nico's visit to Til. They need introduced anyway and it may help to relieve Mister Majors's boredom, and fears. Who knows?

Bzup reminds of a Swiss army knife in the way he can adapt and produce so many different and useful tools. Snorkel, adjustable legs, mouth with tongue attachment, pseudopods with suction, no problem. He would probably be handy on a camping trip. I can envision Bzup, Nico and Jem sitting around the campfire swapping stories. 🤠

There is still so much to learn about Bzup and his creators/controllers, and his/their capabilities. It is obvious we have been set up to expect drama and a possible conflict of interest with our expected visitors. I believe the crew still have a few days before their arrival to learn what they are able from Bzup, and suspect there will be more interesting surprises ahead for the crew and us readers.

No, I think Nico wants to attach himself to Jem. He saw Jem first. Why would Bzup have to be attached to Jem? He was attached to the outside of the hull of the ship when they thought he was spying through ironwood.

The blob was the focus of all of our attention in this chapter, and how could it not be? The orx hunting was exciting with Jem and Nico's successful joint-effort first "catch", but did you see blob's snorkel come out of nowhere? Jem correctly predicted the orx's next move, but blob and Jem were communicating verbally with each other. Jem and Nico are now showing their relationship in front of the crew, but have you seen the relationship that blob and Jem share. Do you think Master Terpin will continue our orx hunt? Don't know, he just left to go down to talk with Jem and Bzup!

True. I am afraid of how he now views his own reactions, and how he not only feels he has let down the band, Eric, and whether he realizes it or not, himself. Kevin was put so far out of his wheelhouse, the shock was just too much for him to face. Now he will have to face the fallout from his actions. I feel for the guy.

To me this comment sounded so shocking. There is such a vast difference between their realities now. We have been caught up with the risk and danger that Andy took and so concerned about how it would affect him, but now i feel almost guilty about about that, after viewing Matt's new reality. The fact that Matt's whole future and possible chance to continue living, is completely out of his hands, has sunk in, for me, and it is so very disturbing and distasteful, that it will take time to process it all. In the light of day, the reality of being under the complete control of a monster such as Kanaan hit me like a brick wall. A powerful chapter and skillful writing about such a nasty and dark topic.

Well we know on thing for certain.............. Out of the four people that blobby has been "hanging" out with, it definitely finds Jem the most appealing! This reveals another trait. Blobby also has good taste, in humans. 🥰

Until we understand blob communication, it's singing could just be a distress call or a location beacon. It was suspected of being a spy towards the ship and crew, and Jem thought that it had sounded a bit sad to him at times. It also could have stopped singing because it is wary of Jem, for some reason, unknown to us. At this point in time, I have no insight to it's reaction to Jem's touch of the tank. I guess we will learn when it is the right time (in the authors opinion) for us to understand what may be occurring between the blob and Jem.

Beg to disagree. The blobs did appear to use the orx to lure the ship into a trap and was boarded by orx. That is how the blobs were discovered. The ship was also very lucky to escape the vast horde of orx approaching in a very threatening attack maneuver. I will stick with that theory until shown differently.

Good riddance to Chris, deal with him any way you wish. Danny is still on probation with me and his father. It appears that Kevin will get a chance at joining the group as a possible last minute fill-in for Mike. A bit far fetched, but moves us closer to a HEA result. He needs a lift after being dealt with what life has thrown at him.

Nita, picked up on the blob's reaction to Jem's touching of the tank and quickly ran the "touch test" with the other crew there. No reaction was shown. Jem's second touch, confirmed that the reaction had appeared to be exclusive to Jem, out of the four shipmates. Lucky for us that he is the main character of our story, and we will get first hand knowledge on his feelings about this strange blob connection. It may take a while to understand what this connection is all about or what it may entail. but still an exciting surprise development.

How true. As readers of Charlie Boone, we have seen frighting new characters who after further study and understanding of their motives, have become good friends and allies. I can only hope that would be the case here, but that outcome looks very bleak at this time. @Geron Kees is sure to surprise us all, at the time of his choosing and until then, enjoy our comments and reactions, as we try to make some sense of the unknown in his created world. And this chapter just adds more fuel, but not enough, to find the answers that we seek. Clever, are the traits of this author.

This meeting was held two days after the attack on the Vespris. Nita with the help of her shipmates had learned a surprising amount of information about the green blobs, under difficult conditions, during this time. Master Terpin was wise to keep the crew informed and to welcome any input, theories, or speculation in this controlled meeting, to keep possible panic in check, and the crew informed as to what their new mission will be. This is no longer just fishing orx, but the front line on this battle that could affect all settlers. What might the other vessels or scientists be doing now? The more that can be learned now, the better they will be prepared in the future.

Who actually governs Benteen society? If this is actually an alien attack who is in charge of making security decisions? Are the scientists in charge or do they just make rules to follow. I doubt that they have a military or navy. Who will rally a defense if this is an attack on their society?

The unequal class structure between roadies and artists is clear but complex, and leads to gossip and infighting. Danny has his own "get out of trouble free card" from his dad. Chris was viewed by Jason as hard working, but was also trouble, and now was being seen as a vicious and dangerous queen. The job is hard work, long hours, and at times unforgiving. Not the glamorous lifestyle that some may assume. It would be best for Kevin to travel and hang low with Joe, for the time being, and try to avoid as much trouble and drama, if at all possible. On with the show, is what must be the group's focus.

The thrill of the hunt was replaced by the unusual ease of the capture of two of the creatures,which was unlike what anyone had experienced before. It appears that they had not captured the orx, but simply had taken the bait of a complex and coordinated attack plan. This was not a plan to gain food, but a mission to destroy the hunters, The prey had now become the predators. What caused the first two orx to be the willing bait in this game? What and how has this occurred? They are moving to safer open waters where they can better defend themselves and get a better idea, as to what is causing this major change of behavior of the orx. Jem's natural instinct and logic has been noticed indeed, I am also astounded by the advanced technology and tools that this ship possesses. They will need every bit of it to survive this change in the battle of the sea. Could this also lead to a change in the battle with the land creatures? We shall see.

Progress is being made. but it may take a while for my desired outcome to happen. With Phil living in the ground floor mother in-law suite. Colin and Jason in the master master bedroom, with Stanley and Susan in the other bedrooms. Hopefully this house could regain its once happy life again , with visits by friends and families. A fellow can only hope. Now where can we fit in Gary with this plan? 🤔 Yes, my plan is now in motion, but will @Ronyx be able to fulfill my desire? ,,,,Get that pool ready for therapy and fun.

Being a bit of a night owl and retired, I appreciate restful naps and power naps at my leisure. Enjoy yours. With the hot and humid days of late, a siesta is often required. Enjoy it guilt free. PS----I have really appreciated your current stories, they are excellent writings.

This chapter left me with a mix of emotions, with the only good ones being that Andy made it back to shore safely and has the reliable and experienced force of Robert to assist him. It will take time to try to emotionally recover and learn how to properly deal with the aftermath of what he experienced. He is very fortunate to have a man like Robert as support. Matt's experience leaves me with nothing but despair for his current situation. This dark side of reality will take such a heavy toll from him.

Looks like @Paladin and I posted similar opinions a minute apart. 😀 I knew he was a wise man.

I get the feeling that this is no more than a lack of communication, and roadie gossip. I didn't detect any deceit from Eric. He went out of his way to make Kevin his personal roadie assistant, and made sure Kevin was hired on, for the full tour. He also made sure to introduce him to the other band members and tried to control their teasing of Kevin. They both had a long and busy day and this should get cleared up after a bit of unnecessary drama.