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  1. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 29

    I wholeheartedly agree on all points. I wasn’t too pleased Nick’s mom invited Tommy without consulting Nick first but I get it too. Tommy provided Nick with a much unrealized but very much needed change of pace and break from just Jack all week. Not that there’s anything wrong with Jack because how I envision Jack in my mind & I wouldn’t want to be apart either. I think it was just enough space apart however and it was good for all involved. Maybe Tommy might find it in his interest to ask his folks if he could transfer to HW…? Sounds like public school keeps him in the closet. I agree Noah is not going to go away either. The way Jonah essentially attacked him now has me worried. Will he reciprocate? Jonah is alone now more frequently now that Danny and him and hit the breaks for a while. Yeah. I’m a little worried for sure.
  2. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 29

    Not gonna lie I’m a bit worried about Mr. death breath back there on campus. I wonder if whatever letter Nick’s mom writes will be causing more trouble vs fixing what needs fixing
  3. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 29

    This chapter definitely felt like learning to surf and finally getting the hang of it. Next chapter, The wave crashes ..avoiding rocks gets tricky
  4. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 29

    That water bill is gonna rival that monthly tuition if they’re not careful 😂
  5. @Dodger any eta on when the next chapter might be?
  6. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 11

    I’m trying so hard to be patient
  7. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 8

    Oh boy…..
  8. Cute. He’s not wrong though.
  9. I’m ready for more 😂
  10. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 8

    Yeah I’m kinda pissed at Ollie for that. He betrayed Mack’s trust. As for Luke, maybe he’s hurt he wasn’t told waay early in private by Ollie. Maybe he’s hurt by that and feels betrayed. Idk. Whatever is up with him we got some honesty while he was drunk. . It’s a starting point at least to a sober conversation
  11. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 8

    Things got a bit careless at the party. Bet someone heard Dec through the door talking to Ollie in the bathroom. I can’t say I approve of Ollie’s behavior without Mac’s permission. Mac is looking out for you dude. Pretty disrespectful thing to do playing with him without his ok in advance especially while he’s asleep.just my .02
  12. SilentandBroken

    Part 3

    Like what changes? And yes, Gabe is very well mannered.
  13. Totally how envisioned this going down 😂
  14. I love that about them too.
  15. SilentandBroken

    Part 3

    Lol looks like back in July 😂 that said…I stand by what I said. Gabe is a Romeo. He may not realize it but he is. Sometimes that fleeting spontaneity is exactly what the nervous ones need. Throw caution to the wind and may the chips land where they may. You miss 💯 of the shots you don’t take. As far as a Matt side story… do it! You’re right. There’s so much potential there it’d be a crime not to take that opportunity. You’re too good of a writer not to.
  16. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 28

    Ah yes I forgot to comment on Mr. J. Gag! The fart scene would’ve been a total dad move on teenage boys and hilarious IF it weren’t for whatever the fuck he was concocting in the kitchen didn’t happen first. Since it did, his dedication seemed very…out of place but to be so makes it fit his character perfectly. It was a weird scene. Judging by the reaction of the boys, that guy has some serious gut rot going on. This dude is not creepy in a predator type of way but…more idk just weird..like unexplainably weird. Some vices and hobbies with odd ppl you can at least understand ..but this dude? Nah just straight up oddball.
  17. I agree. I most definitely agree that Josh did the right thing by telling Dan and thus Greg. Secondly, @Jeff Burton this story just keeps getting better. Bravo!
  18. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 28

    Happy sigh… I am so relieved Jonah came to his senses and apologized outright to everyone especially directly to Danny. Maybe there is hope yet for those two to try again after a spell. Kit and Emory.. yep love that. I get Noah …tried to save face with Nick however it was for the wrong reasons. I say that because he has more to learn about himself and how he treats and views Nick. He showed his hand by using the excuse that he was just a horny 15yo (lame af that was) and then as if THAT wasn’t enough of a reason to slam the door in his face, he goes and asks Nick if he wanted to be BJ buddies after Nick already told him he is in a committed relationship with Jack. Dude! Really?! Go pound sand. Danny is waaay more mature than Noah is and that honestly is sad given the age difference.
  19. SilentandBroken

    A New World

    I also stand by my prior comment how this is feeling more like D.A.R.Y.L.
  20. SilentandBroken

    A New World

    Makes sense why you made Adam straight then 😂
  21. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 15

    Thank you for your service
  22. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 15

    It’s ok if they’re not open books. It gives them more depth. Frankly, I agree that Gavin already knows his brother is gay. Hell, I bet Cole knows too
  23. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 15

    I know if I were Gavin I’d have enough of this middle school dance stand off by now 😂
  24. SilentandBroken

    Perturbed

    all I can think of is the movie D.A.R.Y.L.
  25. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 15

    Frankly, it Dav should’ve made that move last chapter but he chickened out behind beer instead. Joel needs to wake up and realize the gift in front of him. I’m waiting for Gavin to call them both out in front of each other and put them both in their place…together.
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