SilentandBroken

This chapter definitely felt like learning to surf and finally getting the hang of it. Next chapter, The wave crashes ..avoiding rocks gets tricky

That water bill is gonna rival that monthly tuition if they’re not careful 😂

@Dodger any eta on when the next chapter might be?

I’m trying so hard to be patient

Oh boy…..

Cute. He’s not wrong though.

I’m ready for more 😂

Yeah I’m kinda pissed at Ollie for that. He betrayed Mack’s trust. As for Luke, maybe he’s hurt he wasn’t told waay early in private by Ollie. Maybe he’s hurt by that and feels betrayed. Idk. Whatever is up with him we got some honesty while he was drunk. . It’s a starting point at least to a sober conversation

Things got a bit careless at the party. Bet someone heard Dec through the door talking to Ollie in the bathroom. I can’t say I approve of Ollie’s behavior without Mac’s permission. Mac is looking out for you dude. Pretty disrespectful thing to do playing with him without his ok in advance especially while he’s asleep.just my .02

Like what changes? And yes, Gabe is very well mannered.

Totally how envisioned this going down 😂

I love that about them too.

Lol looks like back in July 😂 that said…I stand by what I said. Gabe is a Romeo. He may not realize it but he is. Sometimes that fleeting spontaneity is exactly what the nervous ones need. Throw caution to the wind and may the chips land where they may. You miss 💯 of the shots you don’t take. As far as a Matt side story… do it! You’re right. There’s so much potential there it’d be a crime not to take that opportunity. You’re too good of a writer not to.

Ah yes I forgot to comment on Mr. J. Gag! The fart scene would’ve been a total dad move on teenage boys and hilarious IF it weren’t for whatever the fuck he was concocting in the kitchen didn’t happen first. Since it did, his dedication seemed very…out of place but to be so makes it fit his character perfectly. It was a weird scene. Judging by the reaction of the boys, that guy has some serious gut rot going on. This dude is not creepy in a predator type of way but…more idk just weird..like unexplainably weird. Some vices and hobbies with odd ppl you can at least understand ..but this dude? Nah just straight up oddball.

I agree. I most definitely agree that Josh did the right thing by telling Dan and thus Greg. Secondly, @Jeff Burton this story just keeps getting better. Bravo!

Happy sigh… I am so relieved Jonah came to his senses and apologized outright to everyone especially directly to Danny. Maybe there is hope yet for those two to try again after a spell. Kit and Emory.. yep love that. I get Noah …tried to save face with Nick however it was for the wrong reasons. I say that because he has more to learn about himself and how he treats and views Nick. He showed his hand by using the excuse that he was just a horny 15yo (lame af that was) and then as if THAT wasn’t enough of a reason to slam the door in his face, he goes and asks Nick if he wanted to be BJ buddies after Nick already told him he is in a committed relationship with Jack. Dude! Really?! Go pound sand. Danny is waaay more mature than Noah is and that honestly is sad given the age difference.

I also stand by my prior comment how this is feeling more like D.A.R.Y.L.

Makes sense why you made Adam straight then 😂

Thank you for your service

It’s ok if they’re not open books. It gives them more depth. Frankly, I agree that Gavin already knows his brother is gay. Hell, I bet Cole knows too

I know if I were Gavin I’d have enough of this middle school dance stand off by now 😂

all I can think of is the movie D.A.R.Y.L.

Frankly, it Dav should’ve made that move last chapter but he chickened out behind beer instead. Joel needs to wake up and realize the gift in front of him. I’m waiting for Gavin to call them both out in front of each other and put them both in their place…together.

I should clarify that I was the former EMT. I wasn’t trying to say you were…unless you were? 😂

@Jeff Burton what a chapter, what a start! This is suddenly feeling like a Tom Clancy Jack Ryan novel for a minute. I love it