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I loved this line. Totally busted out laughing out loud
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🤬🤬🤬🤬 that fucking asshole! Nearly 18 or not you don’t lay hands on children like that! Spanking is one thing. THIS?! This is abuse. I hope she divorced his ass and the hospital must report this and charges must be pressed and there goes everything . oh and now we can see just how well a nurse ..I mean a murse (IYKYK 🤣🤣🤣😘) Clinton can be to Corey.
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Ok I laughed out loud multiple times at what I’ll call Jackisms..his overripe tomato blush to his being eaten by a squirrel comment. I love it. I feel that this was what Nick has been lacking. Quality time with Jack without distractions or responsibilities to attend to. Now Nick can really see what is with him he’s not getting with Noah. Speaking of Noah, to me, I think his true colors are beginning to show. Great chapter
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Maybe.
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Yeah I do be getting frustrated 😂
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Are you messing with us? Ok things developed rather quickly between Corey and Clinton. I mean they haven’t even talked about how out they want to be, only that Clinton is still going to be CJ’s friend. It’s a good thing Jenny knows because if she links up with CJ, she can keep him in line. I HOPE Clinton sticks up for Corey against CJ which of course will cause a huge rift
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Ok I’m happy Corey and Clinton are growing closer, albeit a bit quickly but it’s clearly needed for both of them. I’m angered this story because Corey’s dad’s behavior. What kind of father sells is son’s motorcycle without talking to him first and essentially kicks his dog out too in the same move?! If I were Corey I’d quit football right then and there and damn the consequences.
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I’d wager that Cj’s dad will charge a ridiculous amount on rent and pet deposit too just because he can
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Romance but of the coming of age/high school closet case variety. -
Something still feels weird about Clinton. I don’t know exactly what or why yet but there IS something ..part of me thinks him and CJ fooled around, of course CJ would deny everything. That took should ask to be adopted by Corey’s dad. They’re perfect for each other. 🙄
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Wow suddenly Jenny is more astute. And bold. And Corey sort of accepted himself
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“What did you do to it?” He asked, nudging it with his black boots. I shrugged when he turned to me.”
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I dont know what to think of this chapter. Seeing Clinton’s nicer side away from that prick CJ is nice and yeah it was a relief and surprise. But, he’s also intimidated by CJ. It sucks that Corey’s friends are away at camp. I don’t think any of this would’ve happened had they not been away. The exchange between Greg and Corey was .. annoyingly odd. Such a turbulent thing being a teenager. Greg, I think, has some soul searching to do. I’m glad at least that Corey and Jenny at least agreed to the line in the sand even though I still think she’s pretty selfish and shallow. Corey’s dad is insufferable. Holy shit does he have a massive ego.
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Still too early to tell motivations here with Clinton. Sorry but my guard is up.
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All I’ll say is..yeah right . I don’t buy it for a second Greg isn’t at least bi. Same for Corey..they just don’t want to admit it to themselves or each other.
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Yes, Nick needs to make a decision and pick Jack and be done with it.
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It already is 😆
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It was either here or the first game ..oh. And Mom knows.
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Greg didn’t waste much time in my opinion but not too quickly. Now things begin to really get interesting
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I noticed Corey wasn’t defended against either from the river dunking. That’s pretty telling if you ask me. I also noticed Jenny is pretty fucking selfish. Her sister was RUDE and gave clear signs she did NOT like Corey. I wonder why. I wonder if their parents and Corey’s have history.
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Nothing subtle about Greg‘S intentions here..not at all ..🤣 to be fair it’s cute.
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Chapter 55 - Epic-Log Part Two
SilentandBroken commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 55 - Epic-Log Part Two
Makes sense -
Greg feels like a breath of fresh air and a chance to escape smallville
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Chapter 55 - Epic-Log Part Two
SilentandBroken commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 55 - Epic-Log Part Two
Yw. I think you summed up adults accurately as burdened too
