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Great chapter. I was 1/2 expecting CJ to be in that crowd that crashed their lil’ party and catch Corey and Clinton mid lip lock at the last spin of the bottle. Thankfully he’s not back yet. I figured the storm was going to come & wondered if Corey would freak out like he did with Greg and Clinton would be the comforting soul for Corey. Now I’m wondering if Jenny already knew of Corey’s fear. Seeing Clinton’s reaction to Corey’s watching the storms from Clinton’s bedroom window, I’m really beginning to think Corey is way more transparent with his emotions that Corey is aware of.
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Not at all. Not too big a fan of Greg. He struggled at taking a hint
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Keep going it gets better.
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This part
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Makes perfect sense
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Mission accomplished then. I ride. There’s plenty of reason to be afraid of bikes given the amount of risk, BUT, that said, Corey is a very mature young man. His reflexes are at the prime of his life and that can speak for a lot. A lot of kids get dirt bikes way younger than he for his. If nothing else, riding a bike has made me a much safer and a much more aware driver period. It’s easy to feel invincible in a caged car. I think you gave the bike enough attention and it was a bike part in pushing the story into more serious territory later.
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I should say too that Mr. Bojangles is a brilliant name for a small dog
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Oooh she’s SPICY 🌶️
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☠️
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I loved this line. Totally busted out laughing out loud
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🤬🤬🤬🤬 that fucking asshole! Nearly 18 or not you don’t lay hands on children like that! Spanking is one thing. THIS?! This is abuse. I hope she divorced his ass and the hospital must report this and charges must be pressed and there goes everything . oh and now we can see just how well a nurse ..I mean a murse (IYKYK 🤣🤣🤣😘) Clinton can be to Corey.
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Ok I laughed out loud multiple times at what I’ll call Jackisms..his overripe tomato blush to his being eaten by a squirrel comment. I love it. I feel that this was what Nick has been lacking. Quality time with Jack without distractions or responsibilities to attend to. Now Nick can really see what is with him he’s not getting with Noah. Speaking of Noah, to me, I think his true colors are beginning to show. Great chapter
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Maybe.
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Yeah I do be getting frustrated 😂
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Are you messing with us? Ok things developed rather quickly between Corey and Clinton. I mean they haven’t even talked about how out they want to be, only that Clinton is still going to be CJ’s friend. It’s a good thing Jenny knows because if she links up with CJ, she can keep him in line. I HOPE Clinton sticks up for Corey against CJ which of course will cause a huge rift
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Ok I’m happy Corey and Clinton are growing closer, albeit a bit quickly but it’s clearly needed for both of them. I’m angered this story because Corey’s dad’s behavior. What kind of father sells is son’s motorcycle without talking to him first and essentially kicks his dog out too in the same move?! If I were Corey I’d quit football right then and there and damn the consequences.
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I’d wager that Cj’s dad will charge a ridiculous amount on rent and pet deposit too just because he can
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Romance but of the coming of age/high school closet case variety. -
Something still feels weird about Clinton. I don’t know exactly what or why yet but there IS something ..part of me thinks him and CJ fooled around, of course CJ would deny everything. That took should ask to be adopted by Corey’s dad. They’re perfect for each other. 🙄
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Wow suddenly Jenny is more astute. And bold. And Corey sort of accepted himself
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“What did you do to it?” He asked, nudging it with his black boots. I shrugged when he turned to me.”
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I dont know what to think of this chapter. Seeing Clinton’s nicer side away from that prick CJ is nice and yeah it was a relief and surprise. But, he’s also intimidated by CJ. It sucks that Corey’s friends are away at camp. I don’t think any of this would’ve happened had they not been away. The exchange between Greg and Corey was .. annoyingly odd. Such a turbulent thing being a teenager. Greg, I think, has some soul searching to do. I’m glad at least that Corey and Jenny at least agreed to the line in the sand even though I still think she’s pretty selfish and shallow. Corey’s dad is insufferable. Holy shit does he have a massive ego.
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Still too early to tell motivations here with Clinton. Sorry but my guard is up.
