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  1. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 5

    I have a feeling the hard times are not over. But man his mom is heartless.
  2. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 34

    Well if this story does nothing else, it should prove boys stop mentally maturing at the age of 12 🤣
  3. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 35

    I guess my point with the cat is 1) they bathe themselves. 2) they’re assholes with fur. 3) yeah I know there are ways and tricks to it now (my sister is a vet tech but to do so but it hardly seems worth the effort and little gain and a high probability of bleeding? The odds are not in my favor
  4. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 35

    I get it
  5. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 35

    As for the cat..use your imagination. That or trying to bath a cat who has zero use for water in a bath tub ..you’re gonna bleed.
  6. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 35

    Essentially, Jackson got all spun up overreacting when Luke got spooked by his mother starting to sub for the rest of the year and Luke essentially shut down communication and socializing at school and that bled over into after school too. Yeah Cindy is a real piece of work. Then, of course when Jackson got a chance to talk to Luke neither of them listened to what the other was saying. They heard each other, but not what was said then got stubborn when they got mad at each other because they both thought the other was being distant deliberately not realizing why it happened.
  7. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 34

    I didn’t listen when I was told something very similar a long time ago either. I think teenagers forget how to to listen sometimes.
  8. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 33

    Aren’t we all
  9. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 32

    Psssh pay no attention to them . Some dialogue is needed. You did fine. Don’t say you’re not a good writer on hanky panky. You did fine.
  10. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 29

    I don’t handle it well either..which makes me very good at being it 😂
  11. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 37

    Ha! We stolen3 golf carts from the local course in town. We literally drove them down Main Street to the school. Parked one on the 50 yard line of the football field, one in the principal’s parking space, and one on The Hill to the practice field which Coach used for team punishments when we slacked off or fucked up. A 20 yard tall hill with a 35 degree incline. The kicker of the prank, we took the batteries and tires off all the carts and took the lug nuts with us. Sigh..good times.
  12. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 35

    Boy when they’re being stubborn against each other you’d have an easier time trying to floss a cat without drugging them first.
  13. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 34

    All I can say after how Cindy treated Jackson at the door was RUDE! Her prim and proper ass would be all bent the hell out of shape if she was on the receiving end of that. Jackson ok fine you took a mental health day and that’s fair. Going to swim was probably the best thing to do in this case. I think you’re in your head too much. Luke will follow you anywhere at this point when it comes to college. YOU need to prioritize yourself. If you want to swim. Fucking swim. The rest will fall into place.
  14. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 33

    When nothing else was mentioned for a few chapters I figured this would happen tsk
  15. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 32

    At first I was like wtf ..Jack you’re in your own head stfu. And then when Luke basically attacked him I was all like YAAAAAAAAAAAA! FINALLY. And it was hot. So hot. Bravo! Now Jackson and own Districts and dominate like he has the potential to.
  16. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 29

    Ok. The girl’s passive aggressive argument at lunch was hilarious. The guidance counselor is a joke and is not to be trusted. She’s trying to stay relevant me thinks and yeah she’s totally telling Cindy. Cindy going to grandma’s is well timed. I think Luke is getting to the point he DGAF what his mother thinks and will do. Not yet but soon. I think Jackson and Ally might heal some, but never enough for her. She’s still shallow af. Heather too. They wrought this on themselves if they feel they look bad now whatever this is in their perspective. Funny thing is, it’s nothing bc it’s high school and honestly, nobody cares. Get over yourselves. Making noise and drama over it only makes them look worse. The best way for Luke and Jackson to handle being outed is to act nonchalant. It takes away any power any potential bully will have.
  17. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 28

    There are no words…just..
  18. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 9

    Yes he does. Poor Jack doesn’t know how bad he looks and quite frankly, it’s scaring Nick. It’s scaring all of us.
  19. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 27

    Ok Cindy congratulations, by making Luke a literal shut in you absolutely guaranteed he is going to ghost your ass as soon as the opportunity permits and for a while. Man, IF my mother did that to me, I’d be speaking strictly to my father but would never show up for any holiday function until she fixed her shit and even then she’s the one who’d be grounded from contact from me. At 18, I’d be looking for an apartment and she’d not know where the fuck I am. As for Jackson, it’s a good thing Tony gave him those packets when he did. He’s teetering on breakdown. Right now he’s on autopilot and I can testify that’s not the healthiest place to be. Still though, 9?! You go boy! I worry that the cellphone idea, while brilliant, will come back to bite them and hard. But maybe not. Maybe it’d be a wake up call to Cindy. Although I doubt it. At the moment however, I think it might have come in the nick of time for Luke too as I’m sure he’s doing just as bad as Jackson.
  20. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 27

  21. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 8

    Yep
  22. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 9

    1) Mark a great friend. 2) Nick’s breakdown broke my heart. 3) Noah has almost predatory tendencies which make me very nervous. To me, he’s baiting Nick and Jack can see it but can’t prove it. 4) Jack told Nick he loved him. That’s HUGE. 5) my first thought to Nick about this secret Halloween Party…Don’t go. Something is wrong)
  23. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 26

    Rather grateful for Grace
  24. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 24

    Olivia is a pistol! I love it. Well we now know what it takes to get Luke hot and bothered.
  25. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 23

    Ok wait a minute..so just randomly Luke just asks Jackson’s mom if she knows without context as if she’s going to pick up on it and then she plays it cool letting Jackson cut off the answer by completing the question as more of a way to distract? Then she whispers it to Jackson and ..nothing ? That’s it? Totally did not see that coming at all. Maybe I’ve got it wrong I don’t know. But that last scene kind of seemed like Luke gave in to his anxieties and just blurted it out to Grace for confirmation I guess and then she had the sense to keep his anxieties at bay some by not answering truthfully out loud. I guess it just seemed anticlimactic to me . anyway so she knows and now..what? Save the conversation until morning I guess.
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