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Ok I’m happy Corey and Clinton are growing closer, albeit a bit quickly but it’s clearly needed for both of them. I’m angered this story because Corey’s dad’s behavior. What kind of father sells is son’s motorcycle without talking to him first and essentially kicks his dog out too in the same move?! If I were Corey I’d quit football right then and there and damn the consequences.
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I’d wager that Cj’s dad will charge a ridiculous amount on rent and pet deposit too just because he can
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Romance but of the coming of age/high school closet case variety. -
Something still feels weird about Clinton. I don’t know exactly what or why yet but there IS something ..part of me thinks him and CJ fooled around, of course CJ would deny everything. That took should ask to be adopted by Corey’s dad. They’re perfect for each other. 🙄
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Wow suddenly Jenny is more astute. And bold. And Corey sort of accepted himself
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“What did you do to it?” He asked, nudging it with his black boots. I shrugged when he turned to me.”
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I dont know what to think of this chapter. Seeing Clinton’s nicer side away from that prick CJ is nice and yeah it was a relief and surprise. But, he’s also intimidated by CJ. It sucks that Corey’s friends are away at camp. I don’t think any of this would’ve happened had they not been away. The exchange between Greg and Corey was .. annoyingly odd. Such a turbulent thing being a teenager. Greg, I think, has some soul searching to do. I’m glad at least that Corey and Jenny at least agreed to the line in the sand even though I still think she’s pretty selfish and shallow. Corey’s dad is insufferable. Holy shit does he have a massive ego.
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Still too early to tell motivations here with Clinton. Sorry but my guard is up.
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All I’ll say is..yeah right . I don’t buy it for a second Greg isn’t at least bi. Same for Corey..they just don’t want to admit it to themselves or each other.
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Yes, Nick needs to make a decision and pick Jack and be done with it.
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It already is 😆
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It was either here or the first game ..oh. And Mom knows.
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Greg didn’t waste much time in my opinion but not too quickly. Now things begin to really get interesting
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I noticed Corey wasn’t defended against either from the river dunking. That’s pretty telling if you ask me. I also noticed Jenny is pretty fucking selfish. Her sister was RUDE and gave clear signs she did NOT like Corey. I wonder why. I wonder if their parents and Corey’s have history.
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Nothing subtle about Greg‘S intentions here..not at all ..🤣 to be fair it’s cute.
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Chapter 55 - Epic-Log Part Two
SilentandBroken commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 55 - Epic-Log Part Two
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Greg feels like a breath of fresh air and a chance to escape smallville
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Chapter 55 - Epic-Log Part Two
SilentandBroken commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 55 - Epic-Log Part Two
Yw. I think you summed up adults accurately as burdened too -
Chapter 58 - Epic-Log Part Five - End
SilentandBroken commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 58 - Epic-Log Part Five - End
That’s ok. Olivia will be a handful to whoever wins her heart. She quickly became a favorite character. -
Chapter 56 Epic-log Part Three
SilentandBroken commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 56 Epic-log Part Three
I can’t disagree. He loves her as she doesn’t deserve. Because that’s what love is after all. Love is giving someone what they deserve the least, when they need it the most at great personal cost. -
I am reading many stories at once because nobody has completed everything and I’m bored and story thirsty. And, of course, I did notice the pattern. Although, I think I prefer swimmers..mmm
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First of all, Nick. You’re an idiot. I love you but you’re as dense as a concrete wall. Secondly, Jack, quit brooding a fucking kiss that idiot. Hard. Passionately and don’t take any refusal. Yes he’s that dense. Thirdly, I do like Christian, but..sigh..Nick and sports? Yeah not seeing it. Maybe Noah and Christian maybe idk. Or finally, Jonah, who’s a damn minx. The little shit. Great chapter.
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Ugh this reeks of Varsity Blues. I cannot stand fathers like this.
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Chapter 128 You're All Crazy!
SilentandBroken commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 128 You're All Crazy!
Keep going trust me
