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  1. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 11

    well sometimes you just got to roll up those sleeves 😉
  2. SilentandBroken

    Epilogue

    I’m ok with this wrap up. I would’ve liked to see the end when Jason screws his parents over but it’s fine without.
  3. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 12

    Well that went about as soft as I expected. I half wondered if there was more to Adam’s story than he was letting on. I don’t blame Jason for being pissed. He handled it correctly. I think I might’ve been a little harder to win back than he was however. But the again, I have severe trust issues so there’s that.
  4. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 11

    As expected. I hope Jason is truly pissed enough to do what needs doing.
  5. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 10

    I’m still waiting for Elias to become a posted story 🤪
  6. Ok confession time. Yes I still stare bc honestly why are the guys who work as transportation assistants in the hospitals always like super cute and hot?! Oh that’s be that age again sigh
  7. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 10

    As it is, I’m 10 chapters in to a 12 chapter story plus an epilogue.
  8. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 10

    That was their loss imo. Each story I’ve read has a life of its own. I don’t think it did any of them justice to compare them to each other. I’ve said before your character building is excellent. My only frustration is that, with all your stories, they end to wrap up just as I’m really getting vested in the characters and want to see the story continue but I get why you don’t. Just to write this much is a lot of work.
  9. But yes I did have those experiences early on and it was not safe to act on them in public. Not back then. Not with that school.
  10. Hell I still catch myself with a guy at work. I’m too chicken to act on it though. He may have caught once or twice and maybe suspects but we’re all waay too busy to catch each other privately to interact. Oh well.
  11. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 9

    Exactly. Like they’re beneath having someone, one of their children to have a handicap and view it as a defect. Disgusting.
  12. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 10

    Yep. I’m further convinced, although not entirely, daddy dearest is just as cold and manipulative. The trip did Jason a lot of good. I’m also glad to see that Sadie will fit in very well with Lexi.
  13. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 9

    Ok wtf. First of all, it’s bad enough to send your child off and not tell their sibling about them until they’re an adult. It’s even worse that they split twins up. I have twins 3 pairs actually in my Large family. I love watching them all interact . It’s great to see how close they are. To do this..cruel doesn’t even begin to appropriately describe it. Then let’s not ignore the fact the poor girl was born deaf. That doesn’t make her stupid. If anything, it makes her even smarter. Now I’m wondering if it wasn’t their mother’s call so much as it was their father to separate them. Could he be even more cruel and selfish than their mother? It isn’t like they weren’t able to raise the girl. In my family history there were records of having to give children up (this was in the 1800s) because they couldn’t afford to raise them. I’m angry and sad at the same time. Also, Lexi is turning out to be a great friend.
  14. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 8

    I agree on all of this. I can’t really add much to it. Hopefully Jason isn’t too consumed with the information in that envelope that the trip is more of the same stress with a new location. That said, kudos to Adam exercising patience with Jason recognizing his needs and putting them over his own. The fact heat out told Jason he’d take him to find her and scrap the coast plans says a lot. As for Jason’s mother, I’m not really surprised but I am more disgusted that she is using the news of this sister to manipulate Jason. That’s pretty low in my book.
  15. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 7

    Ok that was hot. Also, Adam is a bit spontaneous…I think it’s sexy. But he’s also a bit too carefree. His lack of maturity towards employment is a concern. Perhaps both boys can learn from each other. Jason is a bit uptight and could benefit from some of Adam’s lackadaisical attitude. Adam, could benefit from Jason’s maturity. Let’s hope the night terrors stay away tonight. However I have the feel they won’t.
  16. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 6

    Eh. She’s honest without much of a filter or tact.
  17. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 6

    Yep
  18. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 4

    Correct
  19. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 4

    Perhaps you should read it yourself…. It’s been long enough now it’d almost be a fresh read… maybe
  20. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 6

    Ok Jason you’re not a complete idiot. You played with it smart with Lexi. Even smarter with Tania. Both girls seem very perceptive of their environment, meaning Jason and his mother and Adam. The advice they gave Jason was good and he was smart to listen
  21. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 4

    Ok omg Adam is…quickly working his way past Jason’s defenses and sure Jason is barely trying but I can’t blame him. For both that is, putting up some defenses and failing miserably and maintaining them. Adam, for his part, is a guy who definitely knows what he wants and gets after it with no preamble or anything. Sigh..I just hope Jason doesn’t have a night terror overnight.
  22. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 3

    Ok I don’t remember reading this story before..yet parts are familiar..maybe it’s because Jason’s mother is incessant like mine when she’s got the mind to. Idk. Maybe that’s why i skipped it before. Idk. Sigh. Adam is cheeky. Cute. I like that. Jason needs to be more receptive to him. The rest though, as he said, can fuck off. i like both boys so far. I’m on to the next chapter
  23. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 31

    I still stand on this at the very least. Branch out. #teamCody 😆 I know I know I’m such a brat 🤣🤣
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