SilentandBroken

Ok great chapter. I feel sorry for Davin. His plans went to complete shit. I think though he missed the reason why Joel was pissed. It wasn’t at him. It was at Joel’s entire situation. He’s pissed he has yet one more asshole who called him a faggot and that label seems to trigger him and it has essentially followed him to Fletcher. Sad thing is, Joel kind of took his frustration out more on Dav than said asshole. This seemed to maybe not scare him but definitely worried him. It was an awkward few moments between them. This almost fight however did give Joel some cred to the rest of the witnesses there however. ..everyone except the football team. Also, it’s very clear that Davin cares for Joel. A lot. I think Joel senses this. I think he senses he needs that care too. I really like how Davin recognizes when Joel is in his own head and needs a nudge out. Davin wants this to be a serious relationship between them I think and when Joel truly realizes that, it’s not going to know what to do.

To be fair, I am NOT the most patient person ever and yes. I know you have a life outside of GA. 🤗

I end up working 2 12 hr shifts in 3 days plus today’s 10 and the comments just continue. Mind you I’m not complaining in the slightest because yes, I AM entertained. But, does anybody post the next chapter anymore? lol I’m kidding Krista I mean no offense…just restless for chapter 27.

I have never seen any story comment section take on a life of its own like this.

I can see the eye roll too

It would not surprise me at all if Wesley outed him at his old school. Just imagine how his former team would treat him once the cross paths on the baseball diamond

No. Comicality has passed away

Omg I loved this. Must. Have. More. LB I love how you write with descriptive analogies that initially come off as almost come off as absurdly random and are yet are 💯 perfect. I wish you weren’t writing Danny out but I get we’re getting Kai so there’s that. I’m sure there will be new characters coming in too. Jonah and Tommy together are adorable.

Ok maybe it’s just because I’m pansexual but these two really hit it off and yeah I can respect Tyler’s decision to at least hold off messing around with her in favor of Branden but dude….if you’re looking for a compatible relationship that would be good for you besides great sex, I don’t think Branden is that person. He hates the world. This girl is trying to find a reason to hang on to it and literally basically admitted to that. You didn’t do her any favors. She sounds really depressed

Doing so and her not being 💯 totally offended you mean lol 😂

I think he just doesn’t care. Maybe be another way to rebel

First time reading your work. Chapter one was pretty hot. You definitely teased me with Brandon. I. Am. Intrigued. I look forward to the rest and more like this.

second!

.You too? At least I’m not the only one. Man where were these boys when we were in high school?

What’s high school without a little testosterone turf war? But seriously, yes the interactions need to happen. Those relationships need to develop because I feel like in a realistic scenario such as a story like this, they would be . I feel like your timing is on point here too.

The qb

I really liked this chapter. I think the tension and awkwardness of being an unknown in Trace and Celia’s home (his home now?) are beginning to slip away and general acceptance is beginning to take hold on both sides. The interactions between the boys upstairs was entertaining . As I thought in the previous chapter, now that Joel’s decision to join the baseball team is getting more attention, he is gaining more acceptance among his new classmates too. Good chapter. I am waiting for the Joel of the last party to show up now. Will he deck another dumb ass? Bullies hate it when they’re challenged. 😉

You said a lot. I’ll say a little.

Comicality passed away.

See my above comment to the comment above that.

Those are logical reasons

Thx for the early post. I do like the way you chose to write not including every thought from Joel. I think baseball will help Joel be more accepted especially if he makes a big play to win a game or two. I think Colt forgot himself there for a minute but at least the apology was sincere.

@LittleBuddhaTW

https://www.instagram.com/reel/DQ7nnOgjOio/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link&igsh=NTc4MTIwNjQ2YQ== ugh he’s so cute and talented to boot..sigh……