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Scott was waiting when I stepped outside. As we stretched, I told him about last night’s talk with my dad. He said he was more than happy to help with the work, and before we set off on our run, I sent a group text to the guys, asking for their help. When we stopped for a break at the barn, I checked my phone and found a reply from the twins saying that their dad needed them on a job site today, but they could help tomorrow if we still needed them. Scott had just finished his first set on the be
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That is one flaw I have, stuff moves faster than realistically plausible, buy hey, it's fiction. And you've mixed up Scott and Greg. Scott is the one lifting more than he should.
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Brian and I quickly separated. We all stared at Chris as his eyes took in the four of us naked on the floor. It felt like an hour, but it was probably only a few seconds before Chris stepped inside and closed the door. He was shaking his head and laughing as he turned back to face us. “Greg decides he’s gay, and it only takes a week before the four of you are having an orgy. The least you could’ve done was invite me!” Jake was the first to reply, “It’s not like that, and you know it.”
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Doubt you're old enough to be my grandpa.... And only time will tell on the rest
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It seems I STILL can't get the hang of the system, so you get this chapter long before I planned. ENJOY!!!
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Connor Connor was still standing over Ronin’s wolf form, but something was different. He thought for a moment, then realized what it was. He was looking past the black, furry muzzle of his own wolf. He turned and looked a shocked Katty in the eyes. He then turned to seek out the full-length mirror on his bedroom wall. What he saw was both exotic and beautiful. Looking back at him was a jet-black wolf with eyes the same cerulean blue Connor’s had always been. In the reflection, he saw e
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Sorry, but I was laughing so hard at the image of smashed banana between his butt cheeks I almost choked. LOVE the story; keep it up!! Ruh Roh... I used a semicolon!
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Haha, aparantly I am doing it wrong, as I have one proofreader/betareader/editor combined into one person, a wonderful guy named Wyatt, who also helps inspire me when my brain can't find the next line. Speaking of which, I have neither an outline nor a storyboard. I write what comes out and relates to where my characters are and who they are. As to picking up the torch, you bring up an issue that I doubt many of us have considered. It is well worth examining. As to my chapters being wonderful, well, I have a hard time accepting compliments, but I do sincerely thank you for your kind words. Hopefully, what you see in the future lives up to expectations.
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I think I agree, but not enough voices heard yet.
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I'll say this, then let you decipher it as you will. Emmet is eleven and is going through puberty; the twins are thirteen and have not begun puberty. Connor and Ronin are fourteen and are now going through puberty and are shifters.
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Do you want me to post all I have, and then potentially have a month-long delay, or longer? Or should I post them once a week? I currently have Chapter 19 completed.
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Connor slowly opened his eyes. Shamus and Katty were looking down at him with concern written all over their faces. He lifted his head and looked around to find Danny in Carol’s arms with wolf Ronin standing beside them. Connor turned to Shamus and said, “Well, I guess I’m not going crazy. That, or I’m still dreaming?” Katty burst out laughing while Shamus replied, “No, you’re not crazy, nor are you dreaming.” “So, Ronin’s a werewolf?” Connor asked no one in particular as he turn
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I, too, love LWR. Sadly, because Re-Birth is a rewrite, I have a better frame to work around, and these chapters seem to be flowing from my fingers much easier. The part that might upset many is I return to work in two days, and my available time will be cut by 80%. Chapter posting will slow substantially.
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Time will tell
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I have done my job, is that what you're saying?
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Well, I TRIED to imply something else, but I think I failed... Or did I? You might be assuming too much from red herrings I've thrown out...
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Dakota Robin stepped away from the trailer as Dakota approached. When he peered inside, he couldn’t believe his eyes. On the floor was a naked American Indian boy who looked to be about four. He was asleep and using Harry as a pillow. Dakota stepped inside the trailer and gently picked up the sleeping boy. He could smell why the boy was naked. Looking around, he found the wet jeans and underwear. Robin grabbed one of the dry blankets and handed it to Dakota, who wrapped the boy in it and ca
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I'm sorry, but synonyms rhyming is just wrong... ream - cream...
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Holy construction tools, Batman!!!
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Isn't this usage an extension of the slang? Where the term 'ream out' became more standard from the more abrasive implications? Just thinking out loud, and not thinking right either, cause I'm sleepy
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When I was younger, it was often used in slang. "I'm going to ream you a new one."
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I'm a 'pollyanna' when I write... Greg and his friends are how I WISH I could have been with my friends. Sadly, it just wasn't possible in West Virginia in 1980-83
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Nah, I'm not THAT sadistic. I will give ONE spoiler... Before this book ends, someone will die. Let the bookies begin....
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Maybe he'll go nuts and kill them all?
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Hi, I'm Justin, and I'm an Andr0geneoholic. I've found my drug! I LOVE your writing!!! As I'm reading, I can SEE Tom in the bathroom, staring at the wall as he argues with himself. I can hear him muttering, then I laugh as I watch him look around, trying to see me laughing. I'd offer to edit for you so I could read things sooner, but your writing needs no edits. BRAVO!!!
