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Wonder if a pic of a naked Cottontial gettung his ass licked will show up on Xtress soon? Wen will be so happy...
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Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
So--- Does Ray have some special magical power? He apparently was able to stop and redirect the bitch sap to the offending witch. Good for him! -
The Golden House is attacking the base of the Three Musketeers. They were sold out. Now, the Three Musketeers have just found out that a huge bunker buster rocket will be arriving soon to destroy the base. Zorro is now the senior officer. He is clearing out his area and hopefully escaping before it is blasted away. Will enough forces be left to mount an effective resistence?
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Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
Bottom Line Mother interpreted what is happening. I added some possibilities The vampires are preparing for war. They want Ray. The shifters cannot shift so they are a great disadvantage,. Ray and Gab need to make love or breed to transfer the magic power Ray holds and maybe somehow help the entire pack become stronger.. -
OMG--Red Moon--The Golden House had very convincing , powerful intel on what is happening. Your explanation is sadly revealing. The Golden House strategically carried out a key deceptive action to impair the Mane Wolves. Paul and many other fighters in the Three Musketeers must have died by his traitorist action . Paul thought saved his family and insured that Golden House got the primacy it wanted. We were told those going after the Golden House were expected to die. This could mean that the Three Musketeers are no lomger a serious threat. But, I will wait till he next chapter to find out what really happened
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Part One: At The Movies
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: At The Movies
I can see why Tyler and Brandon liked Hayden Christensen in my Life as a House. He is hot and transforms himself over time. He starts out as a rebellious teenager with a bad attitude weariing make up and black clothes and hating his divorcd parents. He is open to experimenting and has weird sexual desires.He hides practicing his auto-eroticism--hanging by a tie to the point of nearly stopping breathing while he jacks off. Needing money he learns from a friend where young guys can show up in a remote area and older guys will pay to suck them off. He proceeds to let an older guy in the closet suck him off and remembers him and this knowledge helps Hayden later when a property dispute arises over a 6 inch enchroachment. In the end Hayden turns into a thoughtful , supportive person as he realizes his father will die shortly and his dream is to finish this house. The house is eventually completed. -
The team was to hold off acting until notice was given that the Golden House system was disabled. But someone acted first because his family was held by the Golden House and the Manned Woves system was appretly destroyed.. All that bravery and a traitor, Paul, took over and seemed to destroy the system. If this is correct then the Golden House may stand in control over the Manned Wolves. But a huge explosion rocked the area. Zorro and others were knocked out. What really happened?
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Part One: At The Movies
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: At The Movies
It turned out well for the 4 on a double date. Now they are set for some intimate pleasing when the move out as pairs. They will have a warm memorys as they handle the school week. Tyler will need to keep his balance and good humor as people are shocked to learn he is gay.- 28 comments
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Those in the Three Musketeers are taking part in a two part final assault to break the total security system. Both teams face serious risks. The one attacking and disabling the Golden House sysem will die even if they take down the system. Zorro is taking part in the Maned Wolf system attack. That team shold face all powerful psychics. But for now they are having a final party before the teams leave, Those left behind, like Edwin, are expected to tell the story of what has taken place and still strive for freedom under their overlords. The tunnels can be turned into an underground railroad.
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Is a tracking device in Zorro's butt?
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Amazing--Zorro is at the front hiding looking at who was arriving by plane when he is shockingly yanked out of his spot and pulled 5 kilomters towards the enemy. He woke up naked to find his golden retreiver enemies, Michael and Smith, before him acting bored. Zorro was asked to carry a cease fire offer to his associates. The golden retreivers want peace so they can negotiate a treaty with the Senate. They will make no concessions nor free any foxes they hold. What will the group behind the three musketers decide to do? BTW, the Senate is beyond powerful. It has two psychic swords--I note the comment when two white wolves were seen leaving the plane---"Shit—it’s Qana," Neil swore. "Both of them."
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Act II - The Bitch Is Back
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - The Bitch Is Back
What mood shifts from the highs to a shocking worry..... Gab and Ray are playful and intimate when alone and move to join others Then a guard asks to touch Ray and can only partially shift. Others become concerned about Ray's effect Then they become somber as a Ray is told the wolves cannot shift and are traumatized Finally, Gab is shocked to see an elegant witch enter and command the room. Gab searches his memory and realizes this woman is his long lost mother. Who is the witch and why has she appeared now? I Are Ray and Gab in danger? -
Beyond all Misunderstandings
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Beyond all Misunderstandings
Yuck--Dannyand Ryder keep talking past each other. This situation has gone on too long. Now, Danny told Ryder he will help him connect with Pembrooke who hated his guts and has a bounty on Ryder's head. Ryder will have many going after him. This is very likely not going to end well and Ryder's pack looks like it will face the curse head on. This lack of progress with no realistic plan makes me very pessamistic- 31 comments
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Chapter 3 - The Cottage
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 3 - The Cottage
Muji has changed her mind. She will still be careful but, is coming with them to Yellow City. They will look for the library and seek out protective magic to defeat the humans -
Zorro burdened by guilt for his brother's role in killing vigilante style those Aramis was protecting led him to seek out Edwin for consoling. Edwin helped him see that he had to keep Leo's role hidden to allow Aramis to connect with him,Zorro. Aramis was so upset by the firefox attack that he had kept Zorro away from him and had judged him poorly due to the other firefoxs' crimes. Zorro surprisingly asked Edwin for a new comfort. Edwin let Zorro spend the rest of the night in his bed only as a way to help him sleep.
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Marc and Adam superbly handled the Dupont aqusition.They expected problems and faced hostility. But they made a surprisinggenerous offer that was considered and finally accepted before the deadline. Marc was ready with people to move in take over and let some go and build a better business. He also made sure there was a powerful security force so no one would cause problems during the transition. The two easily and seemlessly moved into parenting and giving their kids flying instruction. They handled the kids' mood swings and demands for attention. Adam and Marc found alone time for private sessions.They seem to love dancing and disrobbing Marc has a great sense of where his whole enterprise is going. He wants it to grow and get to the point the 5 sectors and his enterprise will be internally self sustaining and constantly creative. He and Adam are impressive and carry out their roles excellently.
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So Zorro passed his physical tests and is part of the group. We learned about two matters that will become prominent later. It turns out the tunnels they were building will form the backbone of the underground railroad. It is assumed after the foxes are saved that the Golden House will go after the Manned Wolf House and those animals will need ways to escape from their overlords. Secondly, we are seeing Rationalism is being developed and seen as guidling philosophy.
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Thank you, Mark New hopeful ground was created. Brad and Jeremy reconciled, Jeremy was surprised and impressed by what Brad told him.Brad shed tears .He explained truly cared about Jeremy beginning before he was born, Brad let Jeremy's mother set the terms of their relationship and what to be revealed. Importantly, Jeremy took time to think and decided he wanted to be a Schutler not a Crampton. He told Brad he did not fail him as a father. They reached a good place as father and son. Will and Travis continued their happy relationship. Travis has made a great impact on his show and is a fan favorite, They will get together at Escorial for Thanksgiving. They talked about Finn and Travis gave Will the Ok to do what he wanted. Will was impressed with Travis. “Because it just emphasizes the person that you are,” I said. “You are such a nice guy, and so worried about not hurting other people, that you worked this all out when most guys would have basically demanded that I tell Finn to fuck off.” There are ar least two remaining family concerns to address. Will is concerned about the family discussion at Thanksgiving since the last one was brutual. The stalker backer funder has not found. Is Travis safe?
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Very tender..Paul and Cooper are slowly connecting as gay boys with no experience for now. But, what is going to happen when Conner tells his parents he showered naked with Paul?
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Cooper will be tested, I hope he is resilient and finds some compatible friends.
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I love this sarcastic comment by Zorro--“Every day’s the same—jogging, getting hit, classes, and Aramis’s constant sarcasm,” I said with a shrug. “Feels just like home.” He is undergoing very rigorous field training carrying doubts and worry and uncertanty. He hopes he measures up.
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You conveyed that Comicality was a very special person of depth with great sensitivity and care with a welcoming heart. His words will continue as a beacon for others who need understanding .
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I am sure Logan wll find a way and a safe, private place to intimately thank Ranger Finlay. They both sound receptive.
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It Didn’t Sound Corny At All
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in It Didn’t Sound Corny At All
Too much overthinking and worry, Hearst He cannot see Jamie rally likes him and accept Jamie is so grateful to him . No one else is touching Jamre like him. Jamie wants them to have sex oiutdoors. Cottontail holds back until Jamie entreats him to ask him forcefully. So Hearst finally says...“Make love to me like you mean it, Jamie.” So what can go wrong and shake things up? Hearst could lose his mask and be identified. Maybe, Wen could be following them and take pics of them making love.- 12 comments
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Otello, the disabled son of the emperor has found out that he father is being turned into a sad, unreactive man by the medicine is is being given under the direction of Marshal General Vondau. Otello feels lost without anyone to help him and his father. Reading books he decides he likes th author, A Sandkan, and writes to him for help. Troubador Karl finds the letter near Sandkan's burnedout house and decides to help Otello. He is going to free the jailed Franz and seek out Otello The book ends with a promise that things might improve if Troubadour Karl can actually help Otello. Will Karl be discouraged when he sees how handicapped Otello is? The wary Marshall will not give up power easily.
