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Sam finished digging the grave for his parents and took the necessary time to cry and release his sorrow. The village healer attended to him and gave him proper healing substances The villagers helped take his parents to the grave site and bury them, It was a fitting time. The chief said some very inspiring words. “As we say farewell, let us remember Joefre and Sophie not for the tragedy that took them, but for the admirable lives they lived, and for the fine, brave son they raised. Let us carry forward their legacy of love, kindness, and compassion, and let their memory be a guiding light in our own lives.” I think Sam can move on now. What will he do?

Thank you for the happy, very revealing interlude. They arrived in Birmingham in 2010 during a joyous Pride festival. Same sex relationships were displayed as normal and welcomed. It took the two a while to accept what was going on but they the kissed and danced. Drinking some coffee and a doughnut gifted to them they soke honestly and finally called each other Hugo and Alec. They saw what was possible for two men in love with each other. But, time marches on--They were taken away to soon face the citadel, but this happy memory will stay with them.

Vargan has a new dream . He pictures himself as the new emperor. He will use Dareis Monteilon to assist him. Chancelor Berron has found his oath to the darkness has come due and he is terrified. A grotesque man has appeared and demands his help. He wants Governor Dareis Monteilon and his two boys, and then a certain boy - Josel Sandkan. Poor Zdain and Josel are in grave danger from Renn and the grotesque man.

What a very successful conclusion ! MI5 and skilled military and other actors took down the foreign bad guys with precision and stopped foreign goverments from gaining a nuclear detinator. Seeing Sir Edward smile and gloat over Defarge was priceless The foreign agents made payments to people they did not realize who would benefit. Enrico and Xue earned their significant ill gotten gain . We learned they are going into business for themselves. Enrico made sure a very large payment was made to Ezra that will insure his happy future. Sinclair landed in South America tied up by Xue. Enrico bribed the police to believe Sinclair was a pedophile and now he is destined to be placed in a nasty prison and given very bad treatment by those who hate child predators. Sinclair may well lose his life before his lawyers can try to help him. Will and Andrew and Jacob are returning to Canada. Will wanted to be certain Andrew will be taking his Navy uniform with him and maybe for some mysterious personal fantasy play. Thank you for a wonderful , well told yarn. The end was very satisfactory. I am looking forward to your next Carter story.

So painful and relentless--All seemed lost as Brother Mathias attacked. He had to get close and end them. He moved into the birthing room. But when Lucien as born--light filled the room and a new power transformed and cleansed everything--Brother Mathias failed and fell back--He was disoriented and without followers--Marie could not forgive him for what he did to her mother and slit his throat. They are free and healthy. The new Lucien shines and displays his power. A bright future lies ahead for him.

“Wojciech-cun, you’re destined for something, a destiny you have selected,” he touched the box, “and when you are ready, I know that you will take the steps you need to fulfil that chosen destiny. You are not a burden to him, but a purpose.” Hmmmm Hugo, the lore master, is on his way with Stoker. Danger awaits. He will face physical challenges in their next location. Finally, he accepted a sword to protect them. Sinjin advised Hugo and wants him to return to him when his next task is completed.

Everything happened so far--things fell into place--Andrew is safe and on land. He had great conversations with Will and Sprog. Salvage operations are underway on the sub. Templeman recovered from the shootings and talked to Enrico or now Alejando who is soon going to melt away. He gave out info on his computer and targeted as Sinclair as the big boss and Jared as the financier who knew about the money and is a target for death by Sinclair. Sir Edward with Templeman and MI5 are back in operation. Defarge is sidelined and wounded. Sinclair bought him a yacht. However the battle with Defarge for control is moving still into high gear. Sir Edward is ready. You took us through the issues with speed and did month get us lost . We are left with admiration and happiness at the outcomes. Like-life things are not resolved and details are left undone. Sinclair is removed as a cancer. Enrico is free to take on new opportunities. He will still likely target his enemy, the US. Will and Andrew also must be open to move back to Canada when the time comes holding their heads up high. Thank you.

Gabe won his game with his best friend Justin. Justin knew something was bothering Gabe. The team victory dinner did not shake Gabe who was attracted to Justion. Gabe was in the closet in a funk. But, he returned to thinking about the man he met last night at a gas station. He was unnerved by him.

People are afraid. Eitenne and Amelie had prepared a strong defense in their partially built home. Brother Matias is going to attack them and the official cannot stop him. We are left awaiting the attack. I hope Brother Mathias can be defeated

Troy severed Jace well. He gave a great blowjob and acted like a excited bottom. Troy has not told anyone in high school he was a well experienced cock sucker and loved having sex with straight jocks. Jace really liked Troy's sexual talents. One task down and won and more to go to earn his spot at the frat.

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Let's hope Joey is saved and he can begin taking care of D. Joey is a nurturer as well as very good looking and tempting to D.

Hugo found the fiddler and he was his devil."I have told you, you perceive me as the devil, and so I am, in a fashion." His devil gave him roadmap and a warning along with an encouragement to enjoy his passions with Stoker, He was warned others in the time stream do not approve of gay sex so be discrete. "You have claimed the first Aggregate, you have four more to go before you get an understanding of what’s happening here. But be warned, each one will be more difficult to claim than the last, and each will force you to face a part of yourself you would rather keep buried." So ,Hugo will have a painful journey of self-discovery before...?

What I am hoping to see in your final chapters is how you knit together the final parts and show Andrew and Will recovered and hopefully praised as things turned out along with Templeman, Sir Edward and MI5 valued, and Mason Defarge disgraced for his conspiracy efforts and overstepping what is proper. But, maybe, I am asking too much. We will see !

Templeman rose to the challenge and dispatched by disabling three of the 4 professional hit men from following Sinclair's orders. Dr Reed acted decisively and threw a heavy statue at the final man and knocked him unconscious. Enrico was observing--using the internal cams ??-giving Templeman strategic advice on where to place himself to fight them really was useful. The special rifle Enrico offered Templeman was very effective and much better than his borrowed handgun. Is Ezra now joining them? “Go mum!” Ezra’s voice broke through the silence of the wrecked apartment." His mother will be so happy. I expect Enrico will blend away letting Ezra stay with his mum. Sinclair is no longer needed and is set to be killed by Xue, I expect. Templeman has the information from his passports. Will he use Andrew's phone to call Canada House to ask for help if he cannot reach MI5 or his MI5 boss?

I think the late evening when the teenagers return or begin to eat breakfast the next morning could be the scene of a firestorm. Celia and Trace seeing how messed up Joel is will demand answers from Joel and Colt. Joel will try to play his situation down. Colt might dig his own grave by saying he was not near Joel and was not a part of the fight. Whatever happens more questions will be asked by the parents and Colt and feelings will be hurt. Joel might even withdraw even more. He is likely going to be part of a wider rumor campaign after the fight. It will be soon known at his old school that Joel has left his former school.

Hmmm---"The devil fiddles." Well, then he needs to meet the witchhunter soon, I suggest

“This is for your athletic performance,” he said, voice level. “You want to be loose on the rings.” “Yes, Coach.” Ha! This is for Casper's pleasure as he really train Eli to submit to him. "My only job was him. My mouth. His pleasure." "Maybe it was serving him. And maybe that should’ve scared me. But it didn’t." Eli is totally hooked and Mason is on him and wants to know what is happening to Eli

They are becoming more comfortable and attuned to each other--- “There are things I’m seein’… tis more’n I dreamed of an’ I want t’ thank you fer it. For bringin’ me here, for showin’ me all this.” Wojciech turned his head slightly, feeling Stoker’s strong arms and broader frame surrounding him. He sighed, a deep, contented sound, sinking into the comfort and safety they offered to him. In this moment, with Stoker’s arms around him, the world outside, with its looming wars and mad Witchhunters, felt distant, almost unreal. Sin be damned, there were evils in the world, and in the streams. But one thing he knew, he just knew it, was that right then, right there, with Stoker, there was nothing evil about them. Their connection was pure, unburdened.

What a great tragedy. The fourth bandit followed them and killed Sam's sleeping parents and was ready to kill him. A fight ensued. Sam was righteously energized and fiercely attacked the bandit and killed him suffering a knife stab wound. While recovering, Mr Kent, the blacksmith, came to the cabin and learned of the sad deaths. He left to get others. Sam found a wonderful site to bury his parents. He knew he had to prepare their grave by himself. Now what happens with Sam and the knight and the townspeople? I think Sam needs to get away and clear his mind and focus on new things, not the sad past.

The peaceful garden was just another way station. They returned to the transit station to be unnerved hearing a violin playing. What now?

I can see ways those who think they are in charge lose their way and are destroyed Sir Mason Defarge was to control all intel and thinks he is going to get it--But other agencies, Like MI6, will oppose him. New intel from other sources who will be looking to oppose Defarge will counter his narrative--intercepts of Sinclair's phone call to Enrico and Yanni's analysis and be useful Sinclair is blissfully unaware of Enrico's and Xue's opposition to his plans. I can see Xue killing Sinclair. Enrico has to decide if he is going to kill Jared or leave him to talk to implicate potentially Sinclair in the sub mess and give them a scapegoat to take the blame as they flee Right now, other things have to happen to show us what Templeman and Will can do. Are they at dead ends? How can Templeman find Ezea? Will can conduct an inhouse investigation and might turn up Yanni. Could Templeman call her on Andrew's phone if he needs help? Argh.....

Andrew and his crew mates are heroes, and their outstanding results will safeguard them from Lord Mason who cannot touch them. The Royal Navy will protect them and interview them. Andrew will report the involvement of the Northen Aegis Defense company which will require a heavy security move on the London company HQ. Will the PM see he has made a mistake and return MI5 to its full posture? I can see a leak to the press. The PM's reputation is on the line

Joel made a huge mistake going to the falls. Colt was hostile and was upset that Joel was with him and his family. He was not told why Joel was with them. Plus, Colt was picking up his girlfriend and they intended to be close as they drank at the falls. Joel met two people from his school who were surprised to see him. Luckily the baseball team was at practice. One loud mouth bully from his high school shouted at him and made people notice, They got into a fight and multiple punched were thrown, Joel's knuckles was bloodied and messed up. Joel moved away. Davin sought to comfort him and help him with an ice pack. He went through reasons why Joel might have moved away. He ticked off some reasons not mentioning that he was gay. Joel hesitated and realized he had to be careful. Right now he feared the answer. I also think if Colt finds out Joel is gay, he will get upset. The fallout from the fight at home could be epic. Joel better have an explanation. Colt is already mad at Joel and he is messing with his time with his girlfriend,

I am so sorry for the harassment you went through for what you have written. I hope you can put this painful experience away and can look ahead with a positive attitude knowing you are appreciated. I am glad you have largely resolved the matter. Please do take the time you need to recover. You should enjoy and feel good about what you write, and it will show through in your chapters.