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Reconciliation--Travis and Taylor and Zach--It seems genuine. The group sought to find who was behind the problems. The obvious choice became Guy Fellowes who originally had a Serbian name. He would have contacts with Serbian gangs. Now, what do they do with Fellowes?
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Josh saw two men on his floor late at night and knew they up to nothin good. Something inside him clicked and he used his cane three times to stop one man. The guy raised his gun and fired it and did not hit Josh. The two ran away and later the patient in he room the other entered was found dead.Eventually the police came and Hisg gave them detailed descriptions of them and their actions. Josh impressed them and one asked if he had military training. Josh went to bed knowing he had another side that was strong, confident and dangerous. Who is Josh? How did he get trained at his early age? How does he relate to the CIA? Now he has more people who want to kill him--the hospital killers and the ones who rammed his car. His world will change when he connects with the FBI and CIA,
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The Things We Can Never Take Back
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Things We Can Never Take Back
Did Wencel tell Jamie what he has to do? Sabotage Live Feed?? ” Without getting up, Wencel stretched his neck to get as close as he could without highlighting his shorter stature. “As long as LiveFeed remains live, and until the fat lady sings, it looks like you’re our bitch, Jamie.” Jamie has a goal--- "And today, I need to think of a way to fuck up LiveFeed without fucking myself up.” Hearst researched and saw LiveFeed will have a tearful reunion. He can see Jamie will meet his parents and Live Feed will expect a vocal shouting/fighting match. Hearst needs to find a solution for Jamie and go to see him. BTW--Is Anna real or a spy to get more dirt on Jamie? She could have a speaking role revealing what Jamie told her after the expected fight on LiveFeed- 17 comments
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I feel for Zdain. He is lost and feels he cannot ever be accepted by his dad or be more than a friend/associate to the male he wants. He is an outsider and remains honest and respectful. He does not try to sow division. He ,though, can see the social divisions in this country and not support them. The Redeemers scare me
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Brother Mathias has turned the people agaist Amelie and Etienne. Life was made very hard for them. Mathias’s campaign, the Cabildo’s maneuvering, the recent acts of sabotage weighed heavily on them. Brother Mathias thought the child and family ground were in need of spiritual help. He wanted Eienne to give his long held family land to Mathias's part of the church for a chapel. Things look dark. What can be done to stop Brother Mathias?
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Garrett Lindsey and Rachel Carrington are missing and could be the source of the major data disaster at the CIA.. They have been partners for 17 years. The so called Josh could be their son with a false name. We need more information. If someone tried to kill his parents, then he could have a target on his back.
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Chapter 5: At the Wolf's Table
akascrubber commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 5: At the Wolf's Table
Randy masterfully tested Liam in a public place--a comfortable bar/restaurant with tables and dark areas. Ar their table Randy methodically rause his boot from Liam's akle to Liam's iner thighs, At first Liam was nervous and said not here. but he let Randy continue. Liam was a good submissive. When they left the place they talked and Randy kissed Liam.Randy wished him a good night. Liam was surprised Ranfy did not want him to come to his place, Rndy wanted Liam to really need to come to him and know his subordinate role. For Randty..."It was about seeing who could live in the wanting. And Randy was curious to see how long Liam would last." I do not think Liam will wait long. -
What will be the effect of Marius's seed filling up Yidian? Will Wavrus recoverand fight off the evil Auren?
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[Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
We see the reasons Lyn wants and needs to succeed and find a new place to live. No father or male role model..A distant out of touch mother. Times when he lacked food to eat. A sad home not kept up that is something he would never invite anyone over to visit or to know about.. -
What was the effect of Pembrooke bitting Ryder?. What did Pembrooke mean by saying marking him for all eternity? "Ryder didn’t know how Theodore ended up behind him. He only felt the long fangs sinking into his shoulder. His entire body was transforming back, he could feel it. But he was also losing his strength. He fell to his knees, with Theodore’s fangs still latched in his shoulder. When they released him from their hold, he fell forward. “You wanted to mate with me?” Theodore taunted him. “There. I believe I have marked you for all eternity, alpha.” I hope we find answers soon....
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Chapter 7: Private Session
akascrubber commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 7: Private Session
Casper---"You've got too much tension," he said. "Something's pulling your focus." So, you need to get off , I suggest And then Casper notices Eli is hard and he needs to get off. He takes him to his office and sits down. He tells Eli to get naked and jack off. With conflicting thoughts Eli jacked and kept going. He realized he wanted Casper to be proud of him. "I jerked once, twice, and then I was spilling across my knuckles, thick and fast, every pulse a sharp wave that made my knees shake. My balls tightened high before finally easing down, spent." Eli recovered and went back to the gym to practice. But Casper again put his hands on Eli and Eli got hard again. Casper noticed Eli was hard says it has to be something in the gym--like him. Casper made the connection. Eli wonders---"What the hell was happening to me? What the fuck was he doing?" Is Eli going to figure it out or still be clueless? -
Only good news for Josh. Much better recovry . He is walking with a cane. His first meeting with his foster paremts went very well. He could be in their home by Christmas. I can see he might learn more about his past hrough flashbacks and familiar feeling experiences. I am still waiting for a shoe or two to drop and add complexity and take it and Josh in a new direction. The are many unanswered questions-why was his car attacked, is Josh his real name, etc.
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Act III - You'll Never Walk Alone
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - You'll Never Walk Alone
Ray traveling around the lodge learns the witches are not going to protect the pack . Ray seems to have a mind controlling power like Obi Wan Kenobi Ray leaves the lodge to find Gabriel. In the woods two vampires seek to kill him, but Renato kills them instead. Renato transforms himself into a black wolf and is going to follow Ray as he seeks Gabriel. He will be a lethal protector for Ray,Since the witches are not honoring their pledge to protect the pack from vampires. Gabriel will not hesitate to leave with Ray and Renato when they find him. -
Heran and his student will enter thr caracombs to hopefully what powerful eveil caused the destruction. Their journey is dangerous. They were counselled --- “But you make a good point, we don’t know what we’re up against. You may pursue and investigate, but do not engage! Report back to the Council and we will make an informed decision.” I bet things will not happened as hoped.
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Ryder wanted to talk. Pembrooke did not. He turned into a white wolf and bit Ryder and dropped him off the top of an unfinished building. Is Ryder alive --even barely? Can he recover by turning into a wolf? But what will Danny and the others think? Note---Pembrooke rejected Ryder's pack existence and clairvoyence power. He no longer has a pack. He is not effected by the incense or wepron. He said he is more powerful as an alfa and will gain more power when Ryder dies. Whot is he? Why is he so upset?
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Chapter 6: Heels over Head
akascrubber commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 6: Heels over Head
Eli is gay and has only had one, unsatisfying kiss with a guy, He has not practiced any oral or anal sex. He feels he does not know what to do or how to start. Caper drives him wild and turns him on so easily. "And now there was this new feeling. This slow, tight heat in my stomach that hadn’t gone away since I met Casper. Like something had been lit and was still smoldering under the surface, even when everything seemed normal on top." Eli is adrift but knows he wants to be around Casper. I think it is up to Casper to guide Eli. When will he begin controlling Eli to follow in his sexuaal feelings? -
Chapter 5: Breathless
akascrubber commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 5: Breathless
Could Mason and Casper competing to see who breaks Eli first and becomes the dominant male in his life? -
George's instincts are spot on. He left Caroline with her detestable mother upon their return to London.Then he planned on attending the opera to see his mistress perform. He was lucky enough to have time with Calvert in his baths, Calvert with George's acceptance will be staying with him when in London, The court requires he have a London address. I think it is fit he has Caroline's old rooms. next to George's. He asked Daventry to hold off giving the government with his complaints about the last minute treaty changes until Monday. Arriving at the opera, George and Daventry were asked to use the King's box. It turns out the king wanted George to tell him about the treatyy progress, George learned it was the King who added a new item. The king was told by Geoprge the treaty will be delayed but not much modified in the end. George and Daventry will tailor their criticisms Monday to the government accordinly and avoid any missteps. What I noticed is how popular George still is.When seen the King;s box the audience clapped for him. When his mistress and he exchanged kisses before the show started the crowd was pleased, George's reputation as a ladies man was reinforced.
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The plans are progressing well and faster for the moving and the inn will be ready before the first guests arrive. Different people are adding items. I like that local art is being featured. The restaurant has taken on an unexpected special quality and the famly concept with dancing has really become a delightful feature. Maverick and Randy are a solid, loving couple and Randy values how Maverick treats him in bed even more. With all the turmoil and many details to be handled, they pay attention to each other.
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Marc came down hard and fast for his kids greaking the rules. Changes were made and alternative positions were assigned. Marc and Adam explained why they made mistakes, The kids will be warched to see how they perform in their revised roles, My concern is that Marc is only holding them back for a short preriod of time. A year or more would be a useful testing time. I expect he will be monitoring them more than they expect.
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Chapter 5: Breathless
akascrubber commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 5: Breathless
OMG--Eli was so turned on during his practice and then after practice when Casper stood naked next to him after comingout of the shower. Eli was mesmerized by his body. Plus Casper stayed next to Eli talking to him and must have seen how much he was tormenting Eli. Eli returned to his room and found out he was alone. Eli began to jack off and Mason came in. He saw what Eli was doing and got on his bed as if nothing was wrong. He began to take off his shirt as if to temp Eli who must be needing to have a sweet orgasm, but cannot. If this is a deliberate plan to mold and guide Eli to be their sexual pawn, they are making great progress. Why cannot Eli find a place to jack off? Guys can use showers or maybe an empty school restroom? -
So, Luther is being zapped by Ether, the adamantine sword Richter forged for him. He thinks the sword hates him. Richter does not agree but does not know why Luther is being shocked. I hope he finds the answer soon. Luther needs a useful sword.
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Might Zach and Taylor be invited to Escorial on Friday for lunch ? They could discuss with Taylor about Guy Fellowes involvement and Zach and Travis could meet. It might be too awkward to invite the two to the Thankgiving meal.
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So our main character has a name--Joshua Thomas Quinn or Josh. He does not feel it fits him--hmmm. He was adopted. Were his parents killed in the fire? Josh underwent all sorts of tests and then physical therapy and then a needed shower. He met his social worker and learned the trooper who found him wants his family to be his foster family. It is up to Josh and he wants to meet them. The Trooper Daniel Kindcaid stopped by later. He has two sons with one Josh's age. Josh told Daniel he is gay and Daniel said he older son is gay, also. Josh is hopeful about Daniel. He is slowly on the mend. But, is there something still hidden about his past and why was his car in an accident? Is there some danger lurking?
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Clothilde professed to Brother Mathias that she failed and the two lived saved some sort of Life Tread ritual from old ways. Brother Matiss gave her absolution even though she failed. He is now seeking out knowlege to fight this evil Life Thread. He is committed to ending the mother and child.
