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Act III - Anything Goes
akascrubber commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Anything Goes
Renato destroyed two armored vampires and stopped the whole vampire entourage meant to kill them. Renato and Big paws were taken to Lord Valerius who demonstrated his great power by sucking the blood out of the Queen Witch ending her life. When the vampire lord turned to Big Paws, Gabriel broke free of his silver chains and moved to protect his mate. Lord Valerius smiled thinking he would control both and have even more power. However, Mother thinks she will have the control that Valerius expects he will have. Let us see what Renato can do to upset the plans of Mother and Valerius There must be lots of being who are angry and ready to fight Lord Valerius and his forces. I cannot wait to see how the action unfolds, -
OMG--Big was forced to spill the beans. He is being blackmailed and will not say why. He is involved because a law firm is forcing him Coughlin and Arroyo is acting as a trustee for a $1 million trust set up by Travis's father to cause mischief for Travis. Big is the public face. Time to get JP, Stef, Brad and Jake on this matter. A trust even aimed as it is and has been carried out has to be illegal. The law firm will want to hide its true purposes What can be done to stop the law firm from continuing to hurt Travis?
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Brad in the restroom for a longer period of time ?? So, not jacking off---maybe getting or giving a blowjob or using a gloryhole--liking anonymous sex
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Dear Laura You will not be easy to understand along the way with lots of surprises and misunderstandings around I heard one romance writer years ago on NPR say there are two types of romance stories---- Sin, Suffer and Repent or Come to Realize
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If Brad was not taking drugs in the bathroom--was he jacking off to burn off his sexual tension?
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More repressed and half-hidden feelings. Brad got drunk by himself and stood up Lyn and Alexander Lyn found Brad drunk and stinky. He helped him get naked and take a shower--not trying to admire Brad's body Brad asked ....“You and Alexander go together like a pair of gloves. But you love me more, right?” Of course, Brad knew the answer. He wanted Lyn to keep his concern in mind.
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Ohh ----A wonderful time for two boys while it lasted. Sorry, they could not commit. One much later regrets what could have been. He misses the path not taken. It is a tale that rings true to many of us....
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Yes, I did enjoy Evan's and Lucas's story. They started as serial friends at the lighthouse talking intermittedly while Evan unsuccessfully tried to write. Slowly, they blossomed into real friends who enjoyed spending time with each other and Evan muse sprang forth enabling him to set prose to paper. They were complete sharing each other's company.
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You led us to the next cliff--now in the old city, the territory of the stalkers. Kate says she cannot protect Hugo and he is on his own, still injured but determined to save his Stoker. Kate thinks this is the only place Stoker would be--in this nest. Gulp--A perfect set up for more injury and potential death or a repeated cycle of fear and anguish. Hugo..."felt a final pang of fear, a primal terror that was worse than any physical pain." They stepped into the dark and .... Both Kate and Huge must rise to the occasion. I hope Hugo can find and save Stoker !
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Andrew is not going to be a CSIS puppy for long
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Poor Yanni....
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Hooray! The Canadian force took down the kidnappers. The kids are safe.
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Will is really going to need Andrew more and more
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Rikard is continuing to play havoc and not tell others of his intentions. Arcanis has been destroyed and upset at least Darien's plans and the effort to destroy the Asmus hedgehogs. One failure leads to more problems.
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So..."Luther’s prank that destroyed Richter’s treasured coffee beans" These civet coffee beans meant a great deal to Richter. I am looking forward to how they became treasured to Richter at the academy.
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Topher Lyndon your writing ability and speed amazes me. You seem to be able to cover widely different themes and avoid being repetitive and upsetting people with different cultural or political viewpoints. I am very interested in seeing how you advance a story with Enrico and Xue now in business for themselves. They can be very focused and deadly.
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What an ongoing catastrophe beyond Hugo's and Alec's comprehension. Sinjin at least seems to have led then far astray and set Hugo up to be killed The Bride saved Hugo and thought Sinjin was crazy. “Sinjin and his damn aggregate bullshit.” She tsked aloud. “Listen, I think the fastest way to get yourself killed around here is to listen to him. He’s a crazy old man, sweet, but nuts." There are stalkers out there and maybe going after Alec. Hugo wants to go after him. It has been a week. But he is still too injured to move. We know when he can, Hugo will go after Alec. Maybe the Bride can give him some advice. Surprises pop up and let's hope Hugo finds a way to reunite with Alec and flee the citadel.
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Things ended softly. The group of kids moved out for the most part. Only Joel, Davin and Colt were left sleeping in the truck bed. colt's girl friend left disappointing him. The fight and mention of a gun did not bring out any serious discussion. Davin wanted Joel to go to their school. Surprisingly, Joel had not thought that far ahead. But, he began to think it would not be a bad idea to get a fresh start in his senior year. Looks like Colt is straight, and Davin does not have a girlfriend. They will wake up in the morning no liking the rough time sleeping on a truck bed, But, they will have a safe time reporting to Celia and Trace with no beer breath, It may be the calm before the tough discussion when Joel's hurt knuckles are seen, He needs a story or maybe should come clean, Maybe any fallout from the fight among the schools will take a few days.
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I totally enjoyed this story. I was challenged and worried by all the bad actors with evil intent. Trying to steal a nuclear submarine, blow up innocent people, attempt to cause nuclear disasters, murderous spies, and also face bloody internal bureaucratic fights impairing national security are only some of the issues to be faced .Andrew and Will Carter are central , helpful an skilled players in the drama. It is a worthy read with suspense galore.
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I love it. Jamie and Hearst finally got together. They are going to be boyfriends and living together and making love as much as possible. Their inhibitions are being released. What a wonderful resolution.
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What a shocking intro to a blood thirsty torturer and killer and a easily seduced playboy! I am looking forward to seeing how this develops
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Sam finished digging the grave for his parents and took the necessary time to cry and release his sorrow. The village healer attended to him and gave him proper healing substances The villagers helped take his parents to the grave site and bury them, It was a fitting time. The chief said some very inspiring words. “As we say farewell, let us remember Joefre and Sophie not for the tragedy that took them, but for the admirable lives they lived, and for the fine, brave son they raised. Let us carry forward their legacy of love, kindness, and compassion, and let their memory be a guiding light in our own lives.” I think Sam can move on now. What will he do?
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Thank you for the happy, very revealing interlude. They arrived in Birmingham in 2010 during a joyous Pride festival. Same sex relationships were displayed as normal and welcomed. It took the two a while to accept what was going on but they the kissed and danced. Drinking some coffee and a doughnut gifted to them they soke honestly and finally called each other Hugo and Alec. They saw what was possible for two men in love with each other. But, time marches on--They were taken away to soon face the citadel, but this happy memory will stay with them.
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Vargan has a new dream . He pictures himself as the new emperor. He will use Dareis Monteilon to assist him. Chancelor Berron has found his oath to the darkness has come due and he is terrified. A grotesque man has appeared and demands his help. He wants Governor Dareis Monteilon and his two boys, and then a certain boy - Josel Sandkan. Poor Zdain and Josel are in grave danger from Renn and the grotesque man.
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What a very successful conclusion ! MI5 and skilled military and other actors took down the foreign bad guys with precision and stopped foreign goverments from gaining a nuclear detinator. Seeing Sir Edward smile and gloat over Defarge was priceless The foreign agents made payments to people they did not realize who would benefit. Enrico and Xue earned their significant ill gotten gain . We learned they are going into business for themselves. Enrico made sure a very large payment was made to Ezra that will insure his happy future. Sinclair landed in South America tied up by Xue. Enrico bribed the police to believe Sinclair was a pedophile and now he is destined to be placed in a nasty prison and given very bad treatment by those who hate child predators. Sinclair may well lose his life before his lawyers can try to help him. Will and Andrew and Jacob are returning to Canada. Will wanted to be certain Andrew will be taking his Navy uniform with him and maybe for some mysterious personal fantasy play. Thank you for a wonderful , well told yarn. The end was very satisfactory. I am looking forward to your next Carter story.
