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  1. What a fight! They almost all escaped but Golvinte who was shot and killed. They are fleeing away on ships. The destroyer is severely disabled with her cavitation engine off line and her controls blasted. Many enemy men are killed . The admiral and captain are nowhere to be found. They should be mad and disgraced.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Wow--Deathwalkers are flooding in and will be in a killing mood. Adga is leading her forces to find what is stopping the gate counterwight from acting and is now preventing the gate from lowering. They need to act quickly and finding a way to let the counterwight to act as intended. They have a massive deathwallker fight begining. Adga has to make the counerwight act and pull her forces behind the gate as it lowers and block the deathwalkers from reaching them. They still need to make sense of what Rovner wants them to do. The eggs may hold a clue and eventual action plan. What a great cliffhanger!
  3. Nathan is living in hell--tortured by sick men. They play with him and want to keep him alive as a thing to hurt for their enjoyment.No end is in sight to his pain. Will death come soon enough?
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    Alone Again

    Hannah was so jealous, She forced Connor to let her M away. She kept them separated. Now, M had a seizure. Connor intuitively knew he had to be with M to save him. I hope he is right. Will Connor take M back to his trailer? Will the strange man who contacted Connor try to take M away from him"
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    Sixteen

    So far, so good. No real sore points and the 4 are getting along. Ler us hope the time at church and later lunch are not upsetting or controversial.
  6. Quigley and Phentron found Fonith being tortured,. She was freed and all around her were killed, Fonith was especialy nasty and effective with cutting instruments. But now they have to find their friends and fight through other sailors and officers on the destroyer. It should be a difficult slog, I hope they are succcessful. The enemy must know attackers are on board and will be ready for them.
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    The Visitor

    Well, Hannah wants to be his gf. He thjinks of her as more like a friend with benefits. He seesm to be going through the motions and passively lets her explore positions from the Kama Sutra. Nice Connor has unresolved gay issues, He wants to touch and be sexually active with M. He is fightng his attraction that run deeps. "M was more than cute. Connor absolutely hated himself for thinking it, but the boy was beautiful. He couldn’t get over how smooth and supple M’s cheeks looked. He didn’t have a bit of facial hair, just lots of silky, warm skin. In the light from the TV, Connor watched M’s young face. The boy’s expressions of joy, of fear, of excitement, were thrilling to observe." Neither Hannah nor Connor see who M is. He has stated his mission, but they really do not realize what his going to do. M sees Connor as the one who can teach him about mating. It is so basic. Connor thinks he woild be a pedofile if he touched M. We do not know who Mother is. Connor thinks she is a female who kept M hidden until he escaped I think things are going to happen faster than expected. M cannot stay in the trailer for more than a few days . It can become a volitile people mix. Will Hannah be pleased or sad if M becomes close to Connor?. She is jealous now,I wonder how both Connor and M are going to change. Is Connor going to act on his gay desires? M is too innocent to know the problems he is causing. Will M stay after he mates and has compeleted his mission?
  8. They have just 4 hours to find a way to get through the barrier and be able to stop the gate from opening, After all this , they have no way in sight to stop gates of hell from opening and releashing havoc on the world. How will the get inside the barrier? Do they have the skills and firepower that can stop the gate from being opened? We will find out their improvised plan soon. Time for them to be heroes....
  9. Wow--the admiral and his clone have plans for Fonith. She will undergo converstion type therapy, lose her separate identity and work this time for an organization as its bounty hunter. "After your upcoming compliance therapy, we would like to offer you a position within the Intergalactic Covenant of Unification for the Ages. The I.C.U.A. will bring purpose to your life, spent wandering and wasted." I hope she can be freed before the therapy is carried out !
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    Arrival

    Loved it the first time I read it. Connor has human like puppy to train and tend and for now act platonically with him. Connor is very attracked to a strange being who he thinks has amnesia.
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    More new friends

    Oscar has found more friends and is enjoying being busy with them.The kayaklng had to be very enjoyable. He no longer had a panic attack when describing his trauma. Good !
  12. With the help of a friend who had a unique ship, Quigley and Phentron are now armed ready to enter the huge ship take away their friends and family. They have a big task and are going to face fierce fighters.
  13. They have collected the second item and are on the way to get the third one. The last one will be hard and dangerous to collect. They need to kill 7 or more monsters to get enough of their blood. They asked for help finding the monsters.
  14. Success. They acquired the first item after some difficulty in extreme heat Their helper was genuinely helpful and honest.
  15. Jamie lived through the media minefield with disgust and unease and the support from his police buddies. His immediate superior hates him but was forced to return him to his duty protecting the minister. Jamie and Mike had a great time together and enjoyed lots of fulfilling sex. I loved seeing Jamie speak honestly and forcefully to his minister about his ability to read his mind. He told him to not do it. The minister was apologetic , but was he spealing truthfully ? Will he red Jamie's mind in the future? Now Jamie is prepared with the right firearms help, he thinks, to handle evil forces expect soon under a full moon. It should be scary and very dangerous. Given his new higher profile, should he be on the lookout for photographers tracking him?
  16. Yes--things are getting worse--Both ships have been swallowed by a much larger enemy vessel. Fonith and crew will be take prisoner most assuredly
  17. Well, thinking of the absurb--Is this upsetting and thought provoking situation designed by the author as a way of ending George's naval career? Lord St Vincent's assumptions acceting the charges will forever taint Calvert and Granger. Or is this cliffhanger a set up for a deus ex machina solution ? "Deus ex machina is a plot device whereby a seemingly unsolvable problem in a story is suddenly or abruptly resolved by an unexpected and unlikely occurrence."
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    Chapter 4

    I hope you have not given up on this story......
  19. "You were right, Thomas," Adam whispered, his lips stretching into a smile. "He wasn't punishing me," the angel stated. "He was calling me," he finally acknowledged. Making sweet, intense, wholely pleasureable love pushed out and created Adam's true angel nature--his wings were manifest. Now what--Adam said they will be together. Can he hide his nature as an angel? How will they live in this small town. Will others and both fathers see Adam as an angel and accept this miracle ? Why did Father Daniel really leave? Did he seek out his boyhood object of desire?
  20. But, is Thomas really turning Adam sick? Is he speeding up a change in Adam? Both of their fathers are like the devil. What is really happening? Is something unexpected really able to explain this at the endn the whole story is revealed?
  21. The people in the Cometskipper are not going down easily. Many intruders are killed. But, it looks like Fonith has been captured. Is there anyway out of the clutches of the invading forces? Can Quigley come to the rscue and save his family?
  22. This dream, if is one, is very vivid and painful. Nathan really suffered and is being prepared for his death in a cell. He thinks Brohm is dead and Lord Helmsley has been killed by the demon. Nathan has some serious guilt and is revealing his fears so strongly. Will we find out the truth in the next chapter? Even if this is a dream, the realistic fear and pain he senses could do him in.
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    Retaliation

    Morris -Walker handeled the mess superbly at the press conference. He told a story by ommission and carried out Jamie's insight. “I begin to see that truth is only a level of omission, Minister.” “Jamie, that is one of the cleverest things I have ever heard you say. I am proud of you!” Jamie's other key insight is that his minster can read his mind when he touches him. They will have to talk about this later. Meanwhike MIke is not pleased with him and there is to be an offical inquiry organized by a superior who does not like him. Does he have a hidden safety valve in Chief Inspector Mwangi? What can he reveal to him that is going to keep him on his job?
  24. Betrayal, murder, lies--what a disaster The evil ones won and just a few hardy souls escaped in fear and now seemed lost facing death. Instead, they were rescued and moved to a safe place, The few are going to live up to their ideals and comtemplate retribution. I am confused. I hope things become clearer soon.
  25. That charge of Calvert neing a homosexual and having a lover and making advances on an enemy of George was something out of the blue. Lord St Vincent the side of the accuser and thinks he unable to appoint him to a ship. He only has begun to see how Granger wil fight this charge that will touch on him. George knows how to work the levers of power in ways St Vincent cannot understand . BTW, if Calvert is not put on a ship, I bet Granger will not get a ship for a very long time when he gives us this one. Granger's solution for Calvert is to seduce a princess. The wild card is for the French to try to capture the King with Granger and Calvert taking a prominent role in his defense. The King will bestow honors on the oficers for sure. St Vincent cannot punish them afterwards.
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