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Good--They all made it to the cabin safely. Now Drew wants to give Mickey a bonus.They are starting to have sex. What a perfect way to memorialize their stay. One time should not be enough.
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Acting as a medic, Callum restored an injured patricid and received the thanks of the group. Callum offered his compass as a guide to help them go in a new direction to find land. He gave the group hope. The others are finding how helpful Callum is. Time is short and they need to find land soon.
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Drew's fainting is a real worry. I hope he eventually gets serious medical help Meanwhile, Casey and Mickey are getting better acquainted. Casey has heard good things about Mickey.
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The last comment rocked by understanding of Marc-- "Marc is booked up with training boyfriend/girlfriends for the next three years " I began to think these two might last for more than a few month. But, now I guess Marc is modeling what will be his future practice. He is acting in ways so unusual to me. However, this is fiction and new creative ideas can develop.
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Rezak evolved from a tough camp inhabitant to eventuall a new identity---"...Marshal General Vondau to whom all Andiol bowed their heads." The MGeneral is a fraud and a person who hates all high born and senior persons. He is going to crack at somepoint and so open to blackmail. It will be interesting to see how this theme develops.
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Drew and Mickey are working out their summer plans and living arrangements.They are very compatible. Mickey dreams of them having sex.Drew threw out his alcohol and Mickey learned about it. Drew wanted to support Mickey;s dislike and anxiety. But, Casey coming down and supporting them is priceless. She welcomed Mickey they seemed on the way to be very supported--until Drew crashed. Is the result of his potential concusion? He might need to go to the hospital --fast.
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Too Close for Comfort
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Too Close for Comfort
Jamie is going to be a reality TV star?---“You’re a darling, that’s what you are,” Angus established as if he’d known Jamie his whole life. “Arthur told me what a nice young man hides behind your bad boy persona. Ah, I can see your story arc unfolding.” This could go downhill. His online sex shows might taint him. We will see-A vid of Paris Hilton giving a guy a blow job did not hurt her lifestyle Jamie meets Rusty and Matty and Matty thinks he sees his roommate-John Smith. Is he the real Cottontail? Jamie will continue checking him out and not rush his ID But, the shocking news is that Jamie Vayne uses a stage name for others and we do not yet know his real name. Why? -
George by being close to Tallyrand could gain valuable intelligence about the intentions of the leadership of France, including Napoleon. He could be a very discerning observer and understand what is really hapening behind the rhetoric and why France wanted a cessation of fighting. Senior officers can leak unofficial attitudes and expected plans. He might see the military rearming and navy continuing building ships which could mean further conflict is expected sooner rather than later. Napoleon and France who he leads could have a different attitude than Britain. Caroline might learn useful court gossip. We already learned George could buy a British warship cheap since it was not expected to be needed since peace was expected. He can report back to the right people when he returns to Britain.
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Eudald's hate could not be contained. Callum was attacked and suffered. Only Rym's intervention saved him. Eudald found out afterwards that no one shared his hate of humans. He will be a person to watch as they continue their trek to dry land. I hope his hate does not lead him to attack Callum again or place in in a position of life threatening danger. Rym and Callum became closer after the attack. Rym will be safeguarding him. The are resting together now and others better see that they are very close.
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Marc is expanding his empire.. He will have 7 ships at some point and others want to work wth him Sasha and Marc keep having passionate sex. Sasha wants more of him. They will have to carefully balance their personal and professional demands. I hope they do not crash and burn.
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Mark, I hope this chapter mean you are recovered or on the way from fully recovered from your bout with coronavirus This chapter is full of so many great themes which helps show George's mastery of the political/social environment. His contacts continue benefit his needs. Caroline will be wly and designing and George will need to be mindful of her. They both have needs and must present a careful front so a seeming later birth seems reasonable. Tallyrand wants George and Caroline with him. He must see uses and probably will charge a handsome rent. George can hope Tallyrand will promote his version of who sought out ladies at court and know it was not him. The future is promising.
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Brad and Jake worked things out. They are made for each other--for sure.
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I can see lots of intrigue and useful gossip, if they stay wih Tallyrand. George needs to set the record straight and insure that it is known that his younger male friend--now dead-- was sexually playful and not him. Maybe, Caroline can back him up.
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Drew is planning ahead. he wants 4 kids with Mickey.....and they have not had sex yet. They will get through this....
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Marc rolls with the punches and keeps on impressing, He does not take incompetence. His sex drive does not fail. He wonderfully enjoys his time with Sascha. When called early, he agrees to help take over a mining ship and again excells and outperforms. Others learn to support him.
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Perhaps Rym will continue on as a scout along with Callum and further explore the new land. When European settlers came to the new world,diseases were exchanged by both sides and deaths resulted. Callum's medical skills might well be needed
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So. will their relationship grow or wither? I guess, time will tell and the ongoing story will be fascinating.
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That did not end well.... Em could rell Fin was flirting and he got scared Em...."saw the smoke, saw golden flecks in his normally light brown eyes, felt his strong presence. And I ran." What can Fin do? Em is part of his hoard. This is so perplexing,
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Callum is ready for the trip. He talked through his issues with Rym. Callum impressed the team leader with his competence . I hope he can avoid his one true enemy as they cross the seabed.
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One understanding parent--Mickey's mom Two unforgiving parents--Drew's dad and stepmom. His inheritance is threatened and Drew said it did not matter to him Now, Drew and Mickey will need to live their lives together and face the immediate media firestorm. Can they stand the pressure and stay a couple?
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BTW, if you want to add to Will's luck investing in Facebook and Tesla, consider him becoming very addicted to Apple products and investing in the company. I just read today this company is setting new sales records and is near the top as the largest company.".... $10,000 in AAPL stock purchased 20 years ago would be worth more than $2.71 million today, assuming reinvested dividends. The same amount invested in the S&P 500 20 years ago would be worth $49,309 today with dividends reinvested.>
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All good-- Marc is transforming Sasha and his parents are pleased.... "Sasha was in his newest form. Happy, more assertive and more importantly he was showing more confidence...."
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Shocking reveal--Dave is a pig for leaking Drew's counseling records. Now, the media have found Drew with Mickey kissing. A firestorm is ready to erupt.
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Somehow Marc keeps his relationships going while being a successful businessman. He thinks Sascha is coming to know he in lust, not in love, with him and knows a separation will happen
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Dave is a total asshole. Mickey told Drew about his drunken father who burned his face with a hot poker and later killed himself. Smelling alcohol on a person's breath still upsets Mickey. Drew was asked by Mickey to not drink around him and Mickey agreed. Something intense happened and a line was crosssed. Mickey intimately barred his soul and Drew was deeply affected.
