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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    One wonderfully building love song. Excellent. All ends happily. The two guys are meant for each other.
  2. So, Brohm's two friends wanted the huge reward for themselves and attacked Brohm and Nathan in the early morning. The friends lost their lives instead. Now in the town, Nathan's friend is asked to help them. He knows of the bounty. But things have turned ominous. Nathan's friend asked them to stay in his room and he would seek to help them. Yet, they looked out the window and saw him running away. Should not they hide nearby and not wait for him in the room and see if he returns with guards to claim the bounty? They need to be cautious, not too trusting.
  3. akascrubber

    Thirteen

    Keith is learning and accepting the marketplace ideas and values Thomas supports. Good. Wise buying can make make difference. Keith is willing to look at the school's pop-art scuplture. It must be a disaster after all these years of negect. He even has a mate who could add essential skills if neded. This openness speaks well of the developing , positive rellationship between Keith and Thomas. They are willing to help each other out.
  4. Quigley's wife understands the reality and personal connection Phentron has with others, He is a friend, a lover and a family member, shockingly, and not an artifcial creature. Others want to save him.
  5. Quigley--Get over your anger and save your wife and daughter and run fast. Deliver your prisoner. You have no alternative and time is running out.
  6. Lyoth is healed and feeling wonderful. Stawren has some helpful background on the people and planets. I do not see how they will get the information they seek. The residents thInk it could be used for terrible purposes. But, let us see what the individuals discuss.
  7. Sebastian is a work in progress. It is too early to tell what he will be like. It seems he is struggling. Remove the curse and bring back Mark and then let his real nature come forth.
  8. Grey s acknowdged are the alpha. He knows his mother is clean and healthy without the curse. Can she explain her transformation? Grey is going to heal the pack and remove the curse. How? I guess we wll find out soon. Chronos seems to suggest he knows how to bring Mark, aka Osiris, back and that will make Sebastian very happy. Clara is helping move the discussion along and get results. She wants Chronos to be clear what can be done. So does eveyone else
  9. Finally, a story about lawyers and the law that you can like. Wrongs were corrected. The bad guys suffered significantly. Two guys fell in love and got married, Prejudice was rooted out. Hooray!
  10. They reached their destination and their shipped was controlled by another force. They see a small planetrary system. Lyoth has been injured and a form of a jellyfish has been offered to repair him. The being they talked with is going to connect with them after Lyoth is fixed and in good shape. Stranger and stranger....
  11. Wow--complcations. Morgana offered to help them change their appearamce to keep them safe, if they do her a favor. They must retrieve a magical amulet from cave under an abandoned castle way past the upcoming town. Do her a favor and them be changed when they give her the amulet --hmmm--Sounds simple, but I bet it is not. I also bet Morgana has not told them the full story--like how dangerous it really is. They have no better alternative so they take her offer. On the way the town for a drink, former associates of Brohm find them. They find out a notice has put out offering a great reward for them. The two almost robbers wisely chose not to fight them now but will likely collect more men to capture Brohm and Nathan. Brohm and Nathan will soon have guys after them and should move on fast and with slealth.
  12. akascrubber

    Colin 15

    Colin and Owain aretalking about a simple , small wedding as a fact, not a possibility. Good. It sounds like there will be family drama but they will work through it. Mhari increasingly has Miles number and stands for what she thinks is right--especially concerning Colin and Owain. She apparently has control of their large house since her father paid for it. If Miles is kicked out, he might have to live with his mother and both will not be happy living together. Joe is doing well as a painter and Colin hope she stays on this track as well as continuing his studies. Joe wants to expand his theatrical sketch. Owain. Colin and Mhari are going to help fund it. Only Colin's support will be told and he wants to place an ad for his business. Only one discordant note---Owain's grand dad's lawfirm said it had no relevant papers for the family--ie incriminating ones were burned. Owain will need a whistleblower. Maybe someone who took care of his grand dad?
  13. Justice was served. Fred worked to correct the wrongs cause by Silas and even made sure he and Fred was compensated for wrongful imprisonment. Silas died an alcoholic and poor within 5 years. Sebastian served his time and found a job as a real estate lawyer--in Fred's former firm. Fred and Mo got married. Fred's career contnued strong and Mo was hired as a chef. Both are very happy. All's well that end's well.
  14. akascrubber

    An Ass Kicking

    Will responded well from his beat down in the park and got revenge. The guy is in the hospital with broken bones. Will has a busted pr black eye and bruises. His mood really improved when Travis showed up and fucked him. Now, Will is not going to seek out any other male sex partners during the games Will kept explaining his run in and took his dad through the scene after some delay. He is going to get passes for Marie and Travis in payment for his attack from the Olympic Committee. Good Will was very smart to call and alert JJ of the impending visit. JJ freaked out. Will calmed him down. He said Kris would by impressed by his father and grandfathers and would make a great impression on them. I bet it will be a great meeting. JJ is prepared and not going to be surprised.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    I am really interested in finding out graphically how River and Kenji have sex that excites and fulfills them. I can see how a dom enjoys control. But, River puzzles me. Will he do something new? I always saw him as the guy in charge or setting the boundaries.Have I misread him ? What will he do or let be done to him that gives him orgasms with Kenji? We will find out soon.....
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    We learned a lot more about River....... " This was a side job and it made me a decent amount of money, but more importantly, I refused to turn out something I wasn’t proud of. I’d grown up being told I was a gifted child. That I would do amazing things. It left me with quite the complex. So yes, I was posting naked pictures online, but they had to be perfect." "It’d taken me a few years, after I started living alone, to realize I craved structure." "Being the nerd I was, I spent three hours in the morning researching Dom/sub relationships. I was intrigued, but how did you have that kind of relationship with someone without also having a committed relationship? Everything seemed so intimate. Giving someone that much control seemed crazy to me." What is going to convince River to be a sub and enter into a new type relationship? He had not been sexually commited to anyone before? Since in another work we learn he becomes a sub, it will be fascinating to see how he is convinced and changes . His friends will not understand this, I expect.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    This chapter helped us better understand two key figures, Adga and Tur, and further describe nature of the guilds rather than advance the plot. Taglon evaluated Adga's strengtens and her weakness. She is impressive. "Your commands, combined and certainly enhanced by your actions, have shown me you are a natural leader. I believe you gained leadership and command skills beyond your age." But she can be impusive and quick to anger. Adga willingly acepted Taglon's advice which was a sign of her high quality. She will hold back going after the prisoner until her patrol is up to full strength and health. Adga wisely placed Talgon as her second in command giving her more needed leadership strengths. Tur woke up early and others commented about him. He reviewed his past successful fight against a dragonling. It was concluded he is a Legonnaire, the toughest type of fighter and should be guilded at the secondary level, It was a great surprise to him. Adga would love to buy him from his owner and have him belong to her patrol. But, she fears his price will be too high. Our author has a great imagination and has built a layered, interesting backstory. In this chapter Adga learns about more guilds --stressing Legonnaire, Enchanted Archer and Spirit Warrior--that existed within the combined desert realm as well as one city place outside. “A weird place not far from something called the Wastelands of Odin… Lucas the Lost. It is said all the rare fields are also found there. It is compelling to see the magical world our author has developed. I can see a connection with The Sands of Time and the skills of the individuals, The caravan is on the way to the City of Lucas the lost and, I suspect, many surprises.
  18. No--it is March 27, 2O24 --in the USA--not March 28 , 2024
  19. Oh well double post Daddydavek--???
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    OMG-the world has turned upside down. The shaddow cross attacked the governor's home. Josel's father is taking the governor and his wife to safety. Curtus is taking Josel and his former enemy, Zdain Monteilon, away to safey in the night. The two groups intend to meet up later. Josel is shocked at this huge disruption and major transition, Curtus made him scared...."The old man turned to him with a serious expression on his face. "We probably won't come back. It's better that your father's notes are not left for strangers to read. Say goodbye to Paidos, your childhood is now behind you." It is new life for Josel and his family. I hope he can find his father.
  21. Wow--Brohm and Natan's travels took them to a cursed bog that killed many travelers. They did not know about its effects till later. Past travelers had gotten violent and killed each other. Nathan and Brohm felt the despair and hatred themselves to their core. They could not thunk otherwise and fought each other. Luckly they were save by a witch who took them to safety in her home. She explained the terrible effects of the cursed bog and gave them food and a floor to sleep on. She also found out Nathan was still under the waining influence of the magical ring. She said his nightmares would end at some point and the ring's effects might help someone close know where he was. Fortunately, the only other way through the mountain pass was closed by landslides so the cursed bog should prevent others from following them. Nathan and Brohm finally admitted the need to get romantic and intimate after kissing as they lay on the floor. Brohm asked that they hold off since their lady host was in the next room. Nathan was very excited but agreed. We can expect they will get very romantic and physical the next day and night on their travels. Things are looking up with this new knowledge.
  22. akascrubber

    Twelve

    I guess it had to happen. Keith was outed --unfortunately by a homophobic work mate; Keith left feeling very hurt. Later all but one mate found him and talked askingh quextions while being supportive. The homophobe was excluded for good. Thomas and Keith taliked by phone later at nigh. Things got better andKeith being gay did not stand out with his mates. This was another bonding experience for Keith and Thomas. They liked to do simple things now-shopping, discussing domestic needs and now watching football games at the pub. It was delightful finding out Thomas liked watching male players on the field in more revealing pants and Keith only then noticed this and began to admire the guys more. Their tastes are blending in good ways
  23. Mo and Fred keep having sex and more sex--and that is very good. They are really transitioning away from jail well.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 16

    Adga received and took some good advice about analyzing and leading her patrol members. She is going to make sure her troops are healthy and ready for an attack from within the structure by others, any death walkers and now a request for help. She will put off till she is better prepared seeking out the imprisoned one who is wanted by someone in Eaglonia. However, they heard a cry for help. So, she acted swiftly. She organized her people and began to move to the need with selected others. What an intriguing cliff...... I hope next time we will find out who the valued prisoner is.
  25. Poor Otis....."Otis wanted to cry and shout and tell Jackie not to leave him, but he was lost to the world and had no means of protecting himself or even begging for others’ protection." If Otis does survive, he is going to need the love of Hudson and professional help.
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