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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 87

    Brilliant planning and escape. I do not think Travis is out of danger. He thinks his dad will want to keep on trying to kill him. A new contract might be already signed for a European attack , It is smart move to have a lawyer and muscle nearby. I assume they have a legal defense underway with Grand's help. A family plane can spirit them to the US in time for April 20th. The next chapter will be revealing and maybe help Travis feel much better. They need to talk after Travis wakes up. Travis can tell them that Fellowes has gone rogue and must be working for someone since the lawsuit was filed early and someone bought his company he wanted to own. Grand and Will can tell Travis , I assume, Brad et al, actually bought the company for him. They may know who else bid on the company and must be behind the kidnapping. They can tell them about any US legal defense underway. They can discuss what to do about Curtis and Brad will know about his statements after the purchase. He is hated and others maybe suing him now that he is weaker,
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    So--if the consensus is that Seth's mother--Mommie dearest-is irredeemable and a toxic parent who enables and supports and favors Stacy over Seth, what does that say what will happen at tomorrow's meeting? Is Seth the be kicked out? Or, instead, will his mother offer to put him in a form of home prison with limited outside contact ? I cannot see Stef's mother giving him any solace or understanding. Is Seth going to need a new home? Can Mr Ellis keep him safe? This next meeting is critical to determining Seth's future. I am not optimistic he will be happy afterwards.
  3. Bivon found out he made the right choice for a new home for his two bio shifts. They will be happy. But he is unsettled even though he says not. We learn he was a partner with the mystic and Theolan and they grew closer together and saw he needed to leave. He was never happier when they were a threesome When he wakes up with a good hangover, he will meet Ilya who just returned and things may be stressed.
  4. Thech and Jzuna have found a loving, accepting him. Things are looking up for them after their problems. The mystic and his partner are kindhearted, decent and caring people. Bivon made a good choice for sponsors.
  5. akascrubber

    Prologue

    Thank you, Al Norris
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    The interesting characters are defined. They are slowly realizing they have new realities to face united behind Xavier. They have much to discover--the real time, the place, the nature of magic, the culture and nature of the inhabitants of the world they now face. I bet they will be surprised soon. Xavier and Garnet can change their shape and that seems very important. The King told Xavier--"As you know, all dragons can shift, but the Dragons Races keep the knowledge to those of royal descent or those who have earned the right to be taught." This is very appealing. Love to read lots more.
  7. akascrubber

    Prologue

    This is an old friend.. Thank you for posting this expanded update. I feel for Prince Psyen-Raysyn’Xavier His world has ended and he will have to create a new one with the key friends he was able to take with himself. You are creating a compelling narrative that I want to follow. Thank you.
  8. BTW, Otis has been reading up about gay sex and watching vids. The real thing was more exciting and compelling that he thought. He wants more--lots more I can expect he will ramp up his "studying" on line and be ready try more things when he meets Hudson next. Otis was told he had to ask and stay what he wanted. Let's see what he asks for next--having his balls sucked more, having is ass cheeks massaged and having his ass hole fingered, etc. It should be wonderful to read what they do next and enjoy through Otis's innocent eyes and overwhelmed mind how happy he will be.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    It is turning out so far not as bad as possible with two of the three boys in supportive environments. No fireworks But Seth got the Full Monty of hate and pain--His mother slapped him and berated him-taking Stacy's side. Stacy went berserk and violent and had to be separated from Craig. Mr Ellis was a lifesaver and was the voice of calm reason. His home is no longer a safe place for Seth. Serh is going to stay with his a=Aunt and Uncle and come back tomorrow for a further discussion of his status. I think it is 75-25 that Seth will need to find a new home. He cannot live near his sister and his mother favors her. Unless she modifies her thinking and is more open to Seth, he will be living in hell at home. Maybe they can go to counselling and if things improved, then Seth can move home. Stacy might benefit from the right meds. Let us see what happens at the next meeting.
  10. This poor guy has so many troubles and is boxed in the real responsibilities. He needs money and is almost at the bottom or so it is painted that way. Is he going to be he is forced to accept painfully something he never expected or wanted to get the money for his family.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    The friends related well and enjoyed being naked, exercising and running. Greg gave away he could lift more than the others when they tried to joke and add extra weight. Greg handled the extra weight and the running very easily. Jake is the one who became concerned and stayed concerned. Greg will needs to be more careful and will be wrestling soon where his power will be noticed more. The families really meshed . The parents accepted how close their sons are becoming. Scott and Greg made an excellent meal. Greg's father is very interested in staying in town and not travelling and setting up his own accounting business in town with Scott's father as his first client. He is acting like it is a done deal and will give Greg his office for his bedroom and buy him larger furniture the next day. This is a fast transition. James, Scott's father, seemed to be very convincing and offered the right .solution.
  12. The three had a great, relaxing time on the island. They needed a peaceful break. They ate to their hearts content and two got nicely drunk. Mama was a delight. But they had to leave since a storm was arriving. They must have more to experience and learn on their voyage.
  13. They are naked willingly and intoxicated with each other. Hudson is in heat and so is Otis. I loved the oral sex experiences. They have lots more to experience and it will be amazing. Anything cruel or evil is not tainting them now. The future is another story.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    Valrinda is still missing and Beckett realizes he needs him as a companion. He wants them to stay together. Stressed and pushed about and hungry, Beckett now in a weaken state assumes that Valrinda is hiding in the tunnels under the desert city. Beckett does not know what else is under the city and what dangers he will face underground. But, for now he is stopped by a ugly beast who is guarding the tunnel entrance. It is never easy for Beckett. He has to come up with a new plan to get into the tunnels, Can the wisps cause a distraction to direct the ugly beast away long enough to let Beckett enter the tunnel in search of Valrinda?
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    I add my vote to others. This interesting tale is worth continuing. The two boys have lots of more to fun to enjoy. Terry can grow up to be a cook, maybe for Halan III. You have a fertile field for more enjoyable chapters
  16. akascrubber

    Drive

    Thanks for unraveling some mysteries Novo is the key and he will be needed more in the future as he fulfils the prophecy while aiding his fraternity brothers. Nice use of a Gatorade bottle, too. Hope life stays less complicated for you, but you must follow your own interests.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 211

    What a glorious, fun filled fishing trip, All the boys caught fish, Enough shrimp and lobster were caught to make paella twice. The hot dog cart was a good addition and was well received. Colin is planning on making the next trip an even better one. Pierre was very happy fishing. He is a bit naive and inexperienced. His time in America will help him grow up
  18. " Perry would be Kyan’s all-you-can-eat-buffet. He was going to tick every one of Kyan’s unchecked boxes." The sweet, honest joy of these two exploring great sex is fabulous and heartwarming. Henry's sickness will just slightly put off their exploration. They are taking things in stride and not getting upset,
  19. Will and Stillingford are going to be martyrs eventually. Their death is meant to take the force out of their backers. The Constable wanted them dead and spread lies to the King so he was willing for them to die. Ed believes the Sheriff was behind the attacks at Speakers Square. The King does not like the Duke. That is good news to learn and see in action He wants Gustave along with Fran to meet with him and his council to review options for new revenue if a hated tax is cancelled. I assume the King will infuriate the Duke ,if he charts his own path for revenue. Fran and Ed have more reasons to work against those who hurt their friends. Fran hopes to kill Gustave when the time is right.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 210

    It is hard to proofread your own work. Things blur or you read what you want into a sentence.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 210

    Interesting--Christain is arriving in 3-4 weeks and Pierre's status will be decided. Pierre could stay in the US with a large loving family and a dad he adores--or go back. Armand will support either choice. I think the fun and new things Pierre is experiencing will make him want to stay. The fishing trip should be a wonderful time. He seems to crave attention and love.
  22. akascrubber

    Wrap Up

    Well done, A complex, fascinating tale with interesting characters and a robust plot with amazing action with twists and turns and much violence and bold magic and confirming deep love. Thank you. These characters hopefully will live on in some form.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 86

    Assume the Evensong meeting is trap and Travis's guards know Will is going to be present to take Travis away. They read and control his emails and text messages. Maybe they might set up a plan to shoot and kill Travis and Will and place the gun in Will's hands so he seen as the killer. They might assume Will is going to be alone and not able to protect himself. With the filed lawsuit Travis is no longer needed and could rat out his lawyer for acting without his permission Stef and Will are going to need security and armed men to handle the kidnappers. They could ask Jake or Lord Granger for a way to hire some ex-SAS guys to help them save Travis. They should be ready for a firefight and have an escape plan to flee London. They should update him on what has happened and find out if he authorized the lawsuit . I bet he did not . Travis still needs a safe haven until his birthday. Someone with a great amount of money is behind this plot. I doubt Fellowes is that wealthy to bid on Buck Industries. He must be really working for this person, not Travis. Fellowes might show up to bid on the company so the real source of the money is hidden. But, I bet man with the money will be in the room when the bids are made and Brad can figure out who is the backer by his looks and moves when Brad wins the bid.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 86

    Wow--What a mess, but Will and his family are going to help Travis. Someone, possibly his lawyer, is trying to hold him hostage and maybe take over Buck Industries. They want Travis to be a pawn who loses. Brad is going to lead the bid for the company for Travis and smokeout who is the person behind the plot to against Travis Travis asked Will for help and gave him a location. They are developing a plan to save Travis and get him away from being arrested. I hope Will and Stef save Travis and his father buys Buck Industries, It will not be easy.The bad guys will not give up without a fight. Stef and Will should get serious protection.
  25. Interesting tale about Goober, drpaladin Andy Griffin played a good old boy in several roles. In fact, later in life he said he hated them and was politically left of center and looked down on country guys.
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