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  1. drpaladin--Google just paid a huge fine. It seems incognito was not really incognito. Users were tracked and data were gathered
  2. akascrubber

    Debrief

    It seems there is always one guy who is not on the same wavelength. Let us hope Jason really is gone and does not reappear with protestors or leak to the press. After a back and forth . the Normandy trip is sorted out to everyone's pleasure. Gordon and Brian conclude after a talk with Russ. “Think that perked him up.” “Perks me up too. I reckon a threesome in luxury might be a nice treat. Let’s see.” .
  3. Liam is on a ski trip. Apparently, he needed a break from life after clearly losing Dylan We find out Emma was beaten by her husband who can be violent. Dylan learned that Uncle Hank, her husband, was a crime lord with tough underlings. It is suggested that Liam learned how ro be violent as a tactic to get his way from his father. It appears his mother and Emma seem not to realize that Dylan can no longer care for Liam. The sustained beatings and two hospitalisations has driven Dylan away from Liam. I hope Emma stays safe. Dylan can tell Jessica about Liam if he does not return in time for school. Will Dylan explore Jake's backgrond as a supposed killer?
  4. I hope you are feeling much better. Slowly, the situation and relationships are being explained, But mysteries still are present. Mark is revealed to not be who he portrayed himself as. He leaked Grey's plan to escape to his dad. Now he tells Grey he is needed to stop a wider supernatural war and to restore the balance. What does he mean ? Shockingly, we learn Dave and Mark are twin brothers and sons of Beatrice. Mark was not born a werewolf but turned into one. Beatrice is connected, maybe to his turning, She also was a midwife to Grey's mother at his birth just 9 months before the birth of Dave and Mark. What is going on? Will Breatrice appear and explain things and tell them what must be done? Grey's former pack is getting very cruel and dangerous. Can Clara help summon Beatrice?
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter Ten

    What hapened ?We go from highs to lows---- Dylan and Jake made love for two days. Dylan was transformed and relaxed and confident afterwards. Jake was a master at sex and Dylan was made for him. Elle got Dylan to admit he was no longer a virgin and he spoke too loud in the school cafeteria so everyone heard it. Liam got upset and fled. Liam went missing for a week, No one knew why or where he was, His queen bitch girlfriend pounched on Dylan thinking he knew about Liam. He denied knowing anthing, Jessica threatened him and suggested he could get hs younger sister thrown out of her prized school, if Dylan was onvolved with Liam. Liam kept quiet about Liam's sexual desires for him. Dylan has no such desires for Liam.She stated that there is a dark side to Jake and he has done somerthing bad in the past. He is worried about what Jessica might do. She can hurt people and can no qualms about it. Arriving home he finds an injured, stitched up Emma . Liam's mom.who says Liam is ok. Wow--- Damn, what happened? It sounds like accident or some criminal attack , but I am just guessing. Why is she reaching out to her former friend and Dylan now ? The next chapter should answer the questions.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Oh--would that this is a true story! In their early to middle thirties, they connected and found true love that stood the test of time . They reached the top of their musical profession and kept loving each other and creating wonderful, well received music You feel good and happy for them. What an uplifting story!
  7. To clear up a point--I assume Curtis Buck paid someone to bug the kitchen and office in Brad's house and possibly Miranda's house, too. I don't see another player involved unless Mark wants to be laying a basis for a scandal or blackmail plot in the next story. Will had a cook fired for her homophobia among other issues and she was connected to Curtis Buck .She could have planted the listening devices. Jake is going to have Miranda's house examined and he can follow-up on any potential spy as he sees fit. “Someone bugged ours,” my father said, the fury pulsing out of him when he said that. They’d found two devices in our house: one in the kitchen, and one in his office. I’d decided that was yet another good reason to have my important conversations on my bearskin rug."
  8. Mark, You have a very significant challenge ahead. I wish you good luck and hope your creative spirit continues. I assume the title "Final Chapter" means this story has ended. You have completed two major stories , Northern Exposure--over 398, 000 words and Gap Year--over 435,000 words. I and your many other readers greatly value what you write and are hoping to read more from you when you are able and motivated. I pray it does not take a great deal of time for you to extend the two story lines in ways you believe are interesting and important. I am very grateful for the opportunity to read your substantial, well thought out and well constructed stories. You are one of the best writers on this site.
  9. I want to let you know that I remain very interested is reading your new chapters. You have written a fascinating story with great characters and a compelling story line. I want the platinum prince to succeed. I hope you are in good health and have the time and motivation to complete this story.
  10. Final chapter--Wow--The Gap Year and all our speculation ends--You tied it up easily-All the key players are on the same page Curtis committed suicide and all agreed. Taylor and Big get $50 million each in a undefined scheme that looks like an insurance( hence untaxed) payout. No one wants the real srory and Buck family soap opera to become public. Will and Travis are even more insync. Zach expressed his love for Taylor and she was thrilled, They will be together soon and he will be enjoying Taylor using a strap on to please him. Taylor wants to see Travis and apologize for being such a bitch to him. Now what is next for Will? Will you show his continuing life in CA or his new life in Cambridge? This has been a fascinating, passion filled ride and Will has grown and learned about his friends and himself and found love. Zach is no longer central to his life and Travis is. He is ready to take on new challenges
  11. akascrubber

    Charlie-Mike

    The fleet is recovering. People are being helped and treated. Celebrations are being held. Good food is being eaten in the tradition of the military after a hard fought battle. I noted three powerful promises/implications. The fleet will not give up on seeking out the toasters and should have new capabilities.The discovered mineral will allow subspace communications and more when fully understood. Finally, the data dump about the attempted coup and expected and wanted fleet disaster should chill the leadership and give them a new purpose.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter Nine

    Just retribution --Dylan made Liam feel terrible as he laughed at him and rejected him.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    Hurricane Arlene is really adding presure and confusion and pain. Driving in the heavy rain and wind Chase and Micco find Danny wet near Micco's house. Danny wants to talk. He gives his story about Sam's death. But Danny said he was high and influenced. Danny says Micco was to be the fall guy. Sam intened to free the animals so he could get the inheritance. Danny said Sam was late carrying out his plan and Danny went after hm. He thinks he saw someone kill Sam. Micco is confirmed not to be the killer. But the killer's identity is really not clear or believable. Someone, not Micco, killed Sam, according to Danny. He then sounds crazy and said the killer was a monster-a tall, hairy, animal with claws. What part of Danny's tale is real and what part is from his off blanced drug addled brain? Did the description of the killer give Micco any ideas? Is there a legend or even a similar costume in the refuge?
  14. akascrubber

    Colin 8

    Colin is feeling better. He is not closing himself off and feeling sorry for himself. I think he has developed the right atitude.His sister in law and Auntie can useful connections to his family. I like his Auntie Anne who is very friendly and open with him. Who knows! His mother might make a visit eventually with encouragement from his Auntie. I think Jase's advice to ignore the blow up is sound.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Everything completely changed for the good for Ryan and Brian. Brian was so upset and what happened to Ryan. He began talking to him and they got very close and comfortable. He gave Ryan his unused skakeboard which broke the ice. Ryan tried to get Brian to not go to the rave with the bullies. Brain would not agree since he promised to go. As his dream related, the car did crash and all were killed. But Brian was not inside. He said to Ryan that when the people arrived the car smelled of booze and weed and he decided not to go. Ryan at first thought Brian was killed and was so upset until he learned that Brian refused to go at the last moment. Brian showed up at Ryan's house. When they met, Ryan was so very happy Brian was not killed. He proclaimed to his parents that Brian was his bf. The boys talked and Brian told him about his dreams and the warning from his late father. Since the warning and views came true, they believed the tale was true. They spent the rest of the day and slept overnight in Brian's house. His parents also approved of their close relationship. Things kept getting better and the boys enjoyed some easy sexual play in bed. Ryan became so happy and so improved in just a few days. Brian and he no longer faced the bullies. The boys are good for each other.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    The stage is being set. The Sura clan is small and the chieftain encourages marriage to keep the clan strong. We learn about the Sura leadership clan dynamics and who and where the robbers live. A next ore shipment is expected. The Sura clan is worried it will suffer and be blamed. The ore could be used to forge coin whch is treason.. The robbers are greedy and want more profit from gaining the valuable black ore only the clan produces. They will not stop stealing the ore. They know another ore shipment will be sent, The robbers will attack the expected next shipmen eventhough they have met the goals of their masters. The robbers just needed six shipments of ore to meet their goal. The uses of the ore are not disclosed. Also, the persons really behind the ore theivery are not yet identified. The robber leader agrees to discard the distinctive stolen Sura ore carriages behind the Sura wearhouse. It might make it look like the Sura were involved and aiding the theft. Azula , the energetic, trusted young son of the clan chieftain, will lead the transport of the next ore shipment. He needs a good plan and a strong force to keep the ore safe.Marius, the cheiftain trusts Azula with this critical task. Alise, his sister , is slated to be the next cheiftain. They make a good pair.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 104

    Some wealthy do not pass all or even most of their wealth to their families and create charitable foundations. The Queen of Mean directed most of her and her husband's wealth into a foundation after they died. It has grown to $ 8 billion in assets. The Leona M. and Harry B. Helmsley Charitable Trust is a global philanthropy committed to helping people live better lives today and creating stronger, healthier futures for individuals and communities. We partner with people and organizations to invest in new ideas or research across six program areas: Crohn’s Disease, Israel, Rural Healthcare, Type 1 Diabetes, Vulnerable Children in Sub-Saharan Africa, and New York City.
  18. Ok--Shock Therapy for Jackie and Otis You found a way to save Hudson but ..... Hudson forced Jackie to look at young men he knew and really liked who "graduated" and then never remained in contact. His boss paid them off. Jackie throws up when sees them dismembered. He wants the to know who did it and then vicious killers found and finally agrees to be a snitch on his boss and the ones who serve him. This is a dangerous path for Jackie and Hudson. Can they keep their new intentions and purposes hidden from the boss? Otis , meanwhile, is traumatized by Hudson's too long absence and his inability to talk to him. He worries he is being abandoned and remembered the painful times his mother locked him up. He has demons and overthinks and was counseled to have happy thoughts. He still dwells on Hudson;s absence. Otis ,the good soul, worries about Hudson and does not think bad about him. I hope Hudson's brief text later has calmed Otis down. Hudson needs to comfort Otis soon,..
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    I stand corrected on the number--Kandric killed Great Green dragon Princess Golassera and 2-3 breeders remain Chapter 23 of the Kandric Saga--"Since the last Dragon War, the reds and greens were known to be very short on females. This was simply because each race had lost at least four during the war. The greens overall leader was a female and there was two or three other breeders, and the reds were thought to only have two or three great females. " Chapter 24---“ Prince Millen’s gaze moved to focus on Anex, “The boy your uncle warned me to keep an eye on. Words I did not heed seriously enough. The greens are now down to two or at most three great females because of this mysterious child. " BTW, In the Kandic Saga, King Wyhrem and his immediate party faced at separate times two of his guards who shifted into green dragons. Many more green dragons are hidden " in plain sight." At the very end of Chapter 33--As a green dragon is dying near the King--“Me…I am the True Dragon… Gohimnendin… we, the Greens did not forget the old ways… nor old magic.” It spit up a huge amount of blood. Its head stopped moving but it managed to continue. “More of us survived than you could ever imagine… You… You dare… to challenge us? This is the Green Dragon Homeland… we are everywhere… walking in plain sight… Just like I was… just as our ancestors did… Your court, your… royal Healthman… access to your very children… who do you think took your son? Kept him… traded him out… so we could get our claws into both…"
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    Killian with his magic sight can now see dragons after Lucas explained what the auras he was seeing meant. Now he and a few others in Xavier's crew can see dragons if they look for them. This ability takes on major significance now. They have learned apparently all or almost all green dragons are taught to hide their form. Then they will need to be on the look out for any green dragons in any new beings they meet. Mablin is bringing back new guards and drivers. They should be examined to see if any green dragons are among them. The horns kept by Xavier are still wanted by the green dragons who fear that the knowledge they contain could by learned by others. Xavier and his followers have time to make rings from the horns to see what is revealed. I think it is the location of the Bloody Rock green dragon egg hatchery of the female great dragon killed by Kandric. There is only one other female great green dragon left so these eggs are critical to the survival of the green dragons.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 32

    After too many challeges and too many strange beings, Beckett has found a human like mage who said he will take him to a portal to get home. However, Beckett does not trust him, He thinks he must have an ulterior motive. He sounds too good to be true. Heck, his evil twin might show up anytime and steal the star. Beckett and Valrinda need to be on their guard when they meet the mage. We will find out soon what happens.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Amazing. The fates conspired and Brad and Cal found each other. A magical cat connected them and caused Brad to notice Cal. Everything seemed to fall in place quickly and without complications. They were enchanted with each other, had great sex and eventually got married. What a romantic, best of all possible worlds solution for both.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 104

    It is not clear that the camera system was turned off and it might have a visual record, Perhaps, Mark A could clarify . Does the security system include just the guard or also include the camera system.? Jake might not know about the camera. I do not think outsiders knew about the cam system in office ofCurtis. ..."It needed to be visceral,” Jake said, sounding almost psychotic. “I planned it out. I figured out how to defeat the security at the Buck Mansion and timed it for when his guard went on his break.” “So no one knew you were there,” I mused. “I really don’t think so,” Jake said, Am I nitpicking?
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Jeha made the right decsion to bring in Axel to treat his gunshot wound. But a traumatized Axel was earlier woken up in his bed by severe men and taken against his will to an unknown location to find out Jeha was his patient . He saved and treated Jeha and now both are secretly leaving to hopefully safe place. Jeha is weak and still needs Axel. Jeha know Axel has a week off and expects to need him all this time, I bet. They are trying to not be found and killed by Moon, Jeha's cousin. Axel has not enough time to think but he realizes Jeha is a gangster or delinquent. He did not want it to be so. He was very attracted to Jeha. They are going to have time to talk and learn more about each other.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    Optimistically, Mablin will be gone a week to sell all of the true green dragon, less horns. Xavier paid him very generously for the horns and promised to answer Mablin's questions when he returned. Mablin has to respect Xavier's privacy or face severe retribution. Mablin has no real idea yet of the danger he faces. if he breaks his word to Xavier. There is still time for another green dragon to seek out the camp or infiltrate the new crew Mablin is hiring in order to steal to horns before they move out. The horns turned into rings will reveal something important under Bloody Rock. Well, the egg cavern for the Great Green Dragon queen killed by Kandric is located in that place. The greens would not others to know where it is since that would want to destroy the eggs.This egg location is something all enemies of the greens would want and might pay well for it. Or, Xavier might use the knowledge to trade with the enemies of the greens to help him re-build Seandra I hope the so far invisible small being spying on the camp is not a threat or might possibly make a mistake and be found by Xavier and his friends so it can be neutralized.
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