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Colin 14: Being Theatrical
akascrubber commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Colin 14: Being Theatrical
I agree with CincyKris that...."This chapter had a real feeling of reflection, accomplishment, and contrast." Coil and Owain found that they could discuss and agree on their relationship. They are eventually getting emgaged. Colin is expanding his businees to rentals after learning about renting out his place. Mhari learned Joe was very talented at writing. His family sketch was good and worth improving.His teacher praised Joe to Mhari. Joe and Mhari are getting along very well. Thanks for the notice about the impending ending. I hope the actual inheritance does not stress them out with new, unexpected pressures. We will find out soon.- 17 comments
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After an unfair admin action Will lost his internship but argued and kept his badge which he really wanted. Good for him. Will is free of his duties, but has access to anything he wanted. He rebounded and watched gynnastic events,.Will was turned on seeing a French twink in action. The twink looked Will over and saw his hard cock. He walked away and invited Will to follow. Will fucked him in a restroom stall. His flexibility impressed Will. They exchanged phone numbers. He wants Will to fuck him again. Will might do it and will want to find a better place for hot sex. After being rejected by phone by Ian, Will wants a sex partner who is agreeable and has found him. He might find more, too. Will is resourceful and hot. The ball is in Ian's court to approach Will. He might not contact him. However, he might change his mind after his events are over and he wants sex from the only gay guy he knows and can trust before he leaves the Olympics. They are living in the same building so Ian might find a way to sneak out. It is his loss, if he does not reach out to Will. Will is going to have good memories of sexy guys and stories to tell Travis. BTW, I have read that the French for this year's summer Olympics are not providing air conditioning for the athletic quarters but are providing 200, 000 condoms so the are expecting them to have lots of sex.
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A Trip, a Mountain, and a Reprimand
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Trip, a Mountain, and a Reprimand
Fred has a good handle on the impending review of Silas's cases and has a workable quarterly flow established within the office. I am glad he recieved a nice $20,000 thank you from the billionaire. Fred and Mo are going to be very happy living together, it seems. Sebastian was discharged for his failures regarding hiring and managing Silas. He will leave soon and be given 6 months severance and a positive letter of recommendation. This was a soft, gracious way to let him go. He has no basis to contest his treatment or the decision. He, however, is crushed.- 16 comments
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JJ and Kris has a come to jesus moment after facing the last rich lover of Kris who was very possessive and loud. JJ wanted to know why and how he broke up with the guy. JJ was worried it would happn to him. Kris said he was so much better and different than he last BF. Kris became so strong and direct. JJ needed affirmation. Kris gave it to him. "He gently pulled my face up so I was looking into his beautiful eyes. “Jeremy, I pledge, on my honor as a Prince of the Holy Roman Empire, that I will never cheat on you.” I so hope Kris keeps his word or JJ will be devastated.
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Boy--Granger and Calvert opened their hearts and souls to each other. They revealed thier lovers and struggles. They talked and spoke harsh words and recovered. I think they became stronger and more committed to each other if that is possible, I was struck by Granger saying he had matured and has changed his approach to his officers. “I was thinking that if I had assumed command of this ship three or four years ago, I would probably have looked at Austen and Bligh with an eye to seeing if I could seduce them,” Granger said, perhaps exaggerating that statement. “Now I really have no desire to do that.” He has Calvert in his heart and mind. Calvert has Granger to support , consoul and love him
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Chapter Nineteen: Solstice
akascrubber commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Nineteen: Solstice
Grey's mother acted in such an abnormal way in public that her husband and pack will be shocked. She will be asked to explain her behavior. I think she will be forthcoming . She can prevent a fight and potential death or injury. She sees Grey as superior to her husband. Her second son recognized Grey had grown talller. His mother saw more. -
Chapter Nineteen: Solstice
akascrubber commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Nineteen: Solstice
Grey expected trouble when they reached his pack and told the others. Clara and Chronos stayed back. Grey and Dave shifted and entered the pack land. They were found rather fast. He heard and saw disgust from his father and brother. But, his mother spoke sharply and bared her neck to Grey as a sign of submission. Why? She has to see something the others do not. She must see he is a higher being than her husband, the pack alpha. Let us hear in the next chapter why she showed submission. We know Grey and Dave are gods and have god like names that fit them. Will she speak their names? Still unresoved is Chronos's comment that supernaturals have to keep humans in check. What does this mean? -
This mountain path is so treacherous and physically challenging and unrelentingly cold that they are being tested to survive. Nathan is having a bad dream. But Brohn pulls him close in their hiding place to keep them both warm. Tomorrow will be another day to push ahead and avoid damages from the terrain and bitter cold. I can see why people might take the longer, safer route to where they are going. Might others traveling on horseback be waiting for them when they arrive?
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More confusion and individuals pushed to their limits-But two are more likely to connect--Good News at last-- Luck was with Connor when he met the priest in the temple--Zolgrim was surprised by him knowing of Simon--We can expect he will tell where Simon is going, and Connor will search for him. Will Zolgrim better clothe Connor and prepare him for his travels? The desert will be a formidable area to traverse.
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Does the minister have a hunting or shooting outfit?
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The best news-they agreed to be boyfriends and were almost late having some initimate fun!
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Jamie--What a mess.What will you see when you wake up? Who is killed? Will you be able to see a pattern now?
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Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
akascrubber commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown wrote---"THIS WAS SO HARD TO WRITE OMG IT FEELS LIKE THE WHOLE WORLD IS JUDGING MY—THE AUTHOR'S—ABILITIES IN BED." You should not worry--you passed the test easily. Grey and Dave connected on many levels and you told a powerful, hot tale. You can feel their pleasure. Now , please let them keep on making love. -
A New Friend and Another Trip to Rosharon
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A New Friend and Another Trip to Rosharon
Great News--Fred was notified his two appeals were successful. This was fast action. The son of the billionaire is going to be released and Mo will be released. The court was most upset at the performance of Silas and wants disbarment proceeding started. The firm had already fired him and that was well received by the court. But, The firm is now required to review all of Silas's failed cases to see if there were errors and if new fillings will be needed. The court wants a quarterly report on the progress. This is very serious and a black mark. Somone may be punished at the firm. Fred likely will be in charge of the review. Tomorrow the partners will react and somone will review the files to see the volume of what needs to be studied Fred is getting a rental car to go to the prison to bring the freed men back to society. The son will be taken to the law firm to meet his dad. Silas intends to take Mo to his place. I hope the get along now as equals. Mo likely needs to unwind and learn to adapt to his freedom. It might not be easy. But, Fred will help him.- 26 comments
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Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
akascrubber commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
Yes--They made wonderful, blissful, mind altering, rewarding , intense love and mated. They are one. Dave killed a rabbit and shared it with Grey as a symbol of the sharing their wolf nature. Grey is helping his new wolf mate learn about being a wolf. They are so comfortable with each other. It is precious.... They still need to discuss and find a way to deal with the curse. I hope they develop a solid plan. Tomorrow will be tense--It is just a half-day to Grey's pack. You promised a cliff hanger from the next chapter. So, I am concerned. yES--tYHES -
Just as they were getting much more comfortable with each other, they are attacked by a hostile, possibly very hungry pack of wolves. This was totally scary , seriously dangerous and unexpected. The two fought bravely and several wolves were killed, but too many remained. A chance grabbing of a long branch that was run through the fire to burn at the end, gave them a longer range weapon the wolves feared. Both men planned to stay awake the rest of the night to fight off any more attacks by the wolf pack. It is going to be tense. Will they remain safe?
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So it starts slowly--with banter and using key words with River not saying no Kenji wants to be a dom and River to be his sub. He even has used contracts in the past, This seems to suggest a longer tern relationship. What does he want and will he offer River? I guess we will find out. Is this type of relationship new to River?
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What a turnaround At first Axel and Jeha verbally joisted and came to an agreement. Jeha told Axel about the family and its businesses and struggles and family contests. It was a soap opera for sure. Axel learns Moon is the real bad guy who makes and sells hurtful drugs in his clubs and has police protection The the mood and relationships shift quickly. Jeha is told of more serious family dramas and potental battles. He is to attend a family meeting that will not be pleasant. He has to look fine and not injured. Jeha decides Axel should not be involved and not a target for Moon. Axel wants him to continue his training and become picked for the heart surgeon's job. Axel has him sent away and gives him little attention and is very formal. Jeha is shocked . He knows he cares for Jeha personally. He knows Axel and his injured staff need more medical help. Axel is going to bring in the family doctor. Jeha will certainly be thinking about his time with these people and might grow to miss Jeha even more. I hope Moon does know find out about him and capture him to pressure Axel.
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drsawzall asked---"The question is, if all of Silas's gay clients were deliberately underrepresented, could legal action be taken against the frigging scumbag???" Yes--Silas could be sued. But the big money damages would be sought by making the law firm also defendent. The law firm is responsible for the peformance of its lawyers or so it could be argued . The firm would hate the publicity.
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A mystery--Fred is summoned to the appeals court about his two cases. He is not told why. A partner told him he could only speculate and had no idea why he was called. Fred spent time bonding with other junior partners and really studying his other cases. He felt they were lots more interesting than real estate contacts. A co-worker invited him to a weekend dinner to meet his gay brother who could use some advice.They both had parents who gave them up when they outed themselves. Incidentally, this co-worker told him Silas, his predecessor, was strongly anti-gay but hid it from the partners Fred also is getting ready to see the appeals court. A senor law counsel with go with him and help answer any questions--and report back personally to the partners. Fred will have a watcher and needs to be on his best behavior.
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You will like everyone in this story. Two young guys have faced severe hardships and have been rescued by well meaning, decent, caring folks. The legacy of a good man is honored . A new, larger family is created .Sharp, very competent professional people apply their skills in hidden ways to make sure all the legal and offical requirements are handled quickly and efficiently. The two youths will eventually be able to move far away and have a new home, loving guardians ,an extended family and a brighter future in the UK.
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Josel's father begins to come clean and starts to tell him about the real evil in the world--the fallen --who his father is fighting with others, including the governor. The shaddow cross is on the other side and may be infiltrated by the fallen. So his world is turned upside down, He has so many questions and wants to help his father. Danger lurks. His father thinks his mother was killed to stop or warn him to not oppose the fallen. Who can Josel trust and ask more qestions? He should not fight Zdain. Does Jolanda play a role? He wants to get very close to her and do more than kiss. She lives in the shaddow cross area. Could she be trying to get information or win him over to her side--whatever that side is? In the spy trade she could be a honeypot. We will find out.
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Bonus Chapter - Going Home, The Final Leg
akascrubber commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Bonus Chapter - Going Home, The Final Leg
It was wonderful to see them arrive and settle in and see Joseph and Benamin be fascinated by their new location and the warm feelings of support. So much has changed and they are looking forward to their new life . Learning about Joseph's feelings were very encoraging.He was "excited at the idea of new friends and too comfortable in the safety of his love-filled new home." Thank you for this upbeat ending to a special story of hope and love. -
Owain and Colin really are good together. The find ways to talk things through and know how each other communucates.Owain wants Colin to move in and wants to invest in his business and offers suggestions. Colin says he will slowly move in and loves his ideas of getting an office assistant and real office space. It will be a professional statement and improve his worklife. Owain has to be pleased and even mentioned marriage at some point. Colin went along with the idea and said someone should propose at some point. Owain has a great , healthy attitude about the money from the will. He is not looking at what had been done by his dad and the church and thought nothing would be written down and the records would be non-existent. He thinks what has happened is the end of it and wants to look ahead. He wants to take his first big payment and invest in Colin's business. He will still give to charity. I think he is enabling Colin to feel better about his business. Let us hope Joe's short scene won't upset others. Owain and Mhari are not worried, though.
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Al Norris---I like your options for finding a green. Once found, he needs to be killed. If he is a very powerful dragon, they may want to wait for Garnet to recover. But, the other Seandrans took down a young green true dragon so they may feel capable. I am just guessing, though.
