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Keith, I think, needs to find the right guy. He is accepting he is gay and feels naive and lost about what to do to move on his feelings. He is ready and not held back by his workmates. I am sure he is going to get tempted soon.

Until Francis Calvert arrived, I thought George would have to be very careful and selective getting anyone under his bed sheets. Any rumors or comments from someone new he would naturally charm that reached the frequently on board Royal family or even Lord Spencer's son would be very dangerous to his career on this short term for now assignment. Now George has a safer and more caring intimate focus. Bringing Francis Calvert back to improved health in his cabin might take or seem to necessitate all two months of this temporary position. Let us hope Francis does recover as best as possible after being shot twice.

Happy Times for now-Luck is with Granger and Calvert-- The King and his family are sailing in Granger's ship and enjoying it. They meet two French ships in chasing each other and notice one has on board a British naval officer, Francis Calvert. Granger tells the King his fighting history with Francis and impresses the King. Calvert is rescued and shot again in the same area as before. The trusted surgeon makes some basic repairs but more care will require better light tomorrow. The King wants to see Calvert on shore when he recovers. Let us hope Francis does recover and really improve. George's emotions must be on a rollercoaster. What an amazing day!

There is a very touching theme of kindness and generosity evoked by the treatment of the two young rhinoling slaves,Sigvat and his even younger sister, Grima. It shows the high quality of the individuals involved. This is a wonderful episode among the dangers they face. It also shows our author's ability to weave a colorful , touching tale into a complex narriative. Syth has taken the shy rhinolings to be his wards. He asked Thane and Madelyn to help them learn animal adept skills. They agree , but Thane wants Syth to teach them proper speech. Syth agrees. Syth also pays for clothing, travel gear and a tent for them. He wants them to be comfortable. Madelyn returns from Silverton with two hurt dogs. Thane heals the dogs so they can recover. "Madelyn forcefully scolded, then looked over at Syth. “We happened to find two dogs that, well, they needed rescuing. I also thought that they would be perfect for your charges. One for Sigvat to learn with, and one for Grima to learn how to take care of.” The future looks much better and more comfortable for the rhinolings.

Joe is becoming very charming and upbeat. He is stilll a young man. He showed a good side at work for Colin and Owain found a way for the family to agree and be agreeable. I like these comments from Owain and Joe about Joe's work and why Colin wanted to offer him a job---- “I think it was more that you worked hard, were able to learn and benefit from instruction.” “You mean, I did what I was told. Don’t tell Mum, she’ll expect that at home.” I am looking forward to the three males getting along while Mhari is on her holiday.

What a fascinating evolution of the history of Seandran individuals. We learned much more about them. They are taking steps to be better prepared to move and operate. Lew and Killian are going into Silverton and Lew will meet his elder to report on the green dragon and sand dragons. His report should be earth shaking. The elder might come to their camp for evidence and maybe to take the halfing/green dragon to Prince Milan Xavier had a nightmare that shocked eveyone who first went into a defensive posture till they learned what happened. Garnet was the first priest of Rovnar and knew him. Thane is a chaneler of Vindayin and can heal animals. Malichi forged two magical weapons with then help of Golan, primary god of weaponsmiths. Aegir received an enchanted black metal staff that he can guide into different shapes and has the knowleged to use it. Lew is given a magical black metal (eldwar)katanna sword also with the knowledge to use it. Garnet and Xavier honored and named Lew the First Kningt of Seandra, He was firmly made part of them. It looks like the small human, an orphan an watch member, is going to live . Garnet has asked Malachi to replace the simple basic symbol of Rovar the young one had and craft a new , elegant symbol of Rovar using Garnet's items. It is hoped this new, expensive gift will be happliy accepted and gain the favor of the watch. Will the kid want to join the caravan? Will the elder patherling come and pick up the halfing ? Lew's tales and his magical weapon may convince him to come. What will the Prince do when he learns about the green dragon dual forms and the presence of Sand Dragons.?What will Mablin think and do when he returns to a much different situation with others knowing about the presence of sand dragons?

For OTP--see my comment above

As for Jj 's future, JP agreed with the plan of Travis to start out acting and delay college while he found out if he was successful at his early efforts acting in commercials, etc. JJ could explore options --especially if JP wants him to find a structured path and not just lay about. Stef might have ideas of possibilities, too. Is there an apprentice type program JJ could try in some part of fashion, news, lifestyle activities? Think of Perez Hilton , the gossip columnist, who became activite in 2005. He could be a personal shopper? Could he start a website and become an early influencer? Is it too early for a Facebook page? As for Darius, if he has graduated , his ROTC program will have an extended officer training program in the summer plus additional months of any advanced education for any special program he is attempting. There maybe breaks between assignments. These military programs are likely far away from Los Angeles and he may have very little free time during training for a long while. He can still call when his traning day is done, though.

OTP One Time Password On The Phone One True Pairing--like Buffy and Angel I do not see JJ and Jacinta a true pairing--but let us see what Mark does with them

Did not JJ learn when helping Carullo that he cannot buy affection and support ? He has the money and is not too self-centered.I think JJ is just trying to help people he likes have a better life and be more comfortable. In doing so, if they look better and feel better and are more up to his standards, good for both JJ and anyone he aids. After all, Will gave Kris a Rolex and started helping him out. I am interested to see what JJ does for Kris after they have , I bet, mind blowing sex. Kris is skilled , if not predictable as Will found out. JJ is a novice and not as analytical about sex as Will. Our dear author stated..."One has to wonder at JJ's need to improve people in his own vision." Will has to be careful to not fall into this trap when he acts a a philanthropist and foundation director. Large sums of money can be a great temptation.

BTW--JJ seems to like making over and improving how his boyfriends look. He has noticed how bad and unsightly Jacinta's teeth look which has to be important to a cook. Might JJ at some point offer to help Jacinta get improved dental work ? It would be a grand, kind offer. I bet household staff are not normally provided health care.

Nicely concluded. You tied things up in a plesant, cooperative manner. All sides fit with no real problems seen. Brian and Gordon and Russ accept their happy relationship. Diedre has given up legal control of Tobey and it will be hard to get it back, Toby feels he has a good family withiout her. Denise learns about her grandson and son and their relationships and realizes they are happy and on the road to a better life. Now Brian and Gordon are going to plan a marriage and a 14th birthday celebration for Toby. Thank you for this wonderful story or growth and love with a few hiccups along the way. I want to read your new creative efforts when you bring them all back to us.

The story is titled "The Freshmen" so I think the focus is going to be on Will and the people in his life, unless I missunderstood the meaning of the title. Our author has fertile ground to compose an interesting story. Will might further develop his Travis relationship, travel to the Olympics and attend college and relate to his brother and father. We have also been told that there will be three perspectives from Will, JJ and Brad. This is not going to be a one man tale. Will , I think, is not going to be dancing with himself.

Amazing, JJ has the hots for Kris. He loved the first kiss with Kris and told him it was his signal that he wanted more than a one night stand. Good for him . JJ at least will have a chance to rebound and feel amazing and connected to a hot guy. Kris was smart to call Will and ask for advice about JJ. Will gave him an honest assessment and way to be approach and win with JJ. Kris was smooth and flattered JJ and it worked spectacularly. I bet JJ is going to be fucked after the play and their relationship will speedup more than normal. Kris , as JJ's partner, is going to get into higher levels of society and really appreciate it. Susannah will be incensed by JJ and Kris fucking and JJ taking him to the charity event. She should see it is time to move out.

Micco was a hero. He loved the wolves and has a real connection with them. He saved all but two wolves and those two are safe for now. The wolves feared something and Micco sensed it was long ears, The creature is real and scaring the wolves.Sam is shocked at the legend made real. Back in the concrete shelter Martina surprisingly appears. She willingly explained why she sought to take down the shelter and share the money. She feels victimized by the tribe after her husband died. But we don't know why Sam was killed. Did she kill him or did long ears kill Sam? There is more to learn. Will long ears appear in front of the group?

Owain and Colin are helping each other out learning new things and moving at a comfortable pace. They are aceepting the same things. The trip has been a winning success. They should be open to more trips. I liked knowing that the history of the family business is being documented and put out for the public. Let's see if anything shocking is learned. Colin wants to offer Joe a part-time inside job which sounds good and will help him out with some money and confidence building. Mhari might like it too. I can see Colin and Owain are on the path to moving in together. They are going at it slowly with no certainty it will happen. They just seem so compatible.

Lots going on--Hudson missed one key item, though The unknown kid badly injured in the fire 10 years ago probably was Otis. I wonder when he will learn the truth about Otis and his past? Will he be given the chance to come clean first with Otis. Hudson was wise to not take things as they appeared first to be. He suspected he was being played and he acted well. Hudson--Vegas-- became a star. Watkins (and Keres} tested him to see if he could take Angel being destroyed and painfully fall apart. Hudson did not fall apart. He took the sick pics he was asked to take.When he returned to see Watlkins he was told he passed and now will be brought into the whole scheme. Hudson is going to get the evidence he wants.

Love Etta James--The mood in the tattoo/piercing shop had to be so cool and smoothly easy. A young Asian girl and an adult walk in for help. River has found his next fixation, a hot asian male, expensively dressed--Kenji--who seems to have seen him and heard him before? River says he has not met him . Did he pay to see and hear him online acting as a gay boy best can do? Kenji, the good looking male, might be a paying customer on his online paywall guarded web site where he does shows and has pics for sale. River could try to search him out but his customers are hidden. I can see Kenji follow up if he is intrigued by River. Let us see if Kenji comes back to the shop and brings up his show or maybe during a show ask pointed questions and then might try to buy more than pics--like cum rags-- to see if River is bolder and more open to new sex play. River needs the pay from shows to support himself. He might be open to selling more things. Any interest by Kenji shoud get River willing to go out on a date with him. He is not going to be cautious,

Simon seemed to have saved himself from the control of the Orcs, We will see if he is triumphant. Simon strengthened his champion through several excangenes of seed. His chapion fought a huge Orc rival for the throne. Both were injured by the evil one clearly lost to the dismay of many. Let us hopoe Simon can repair and restore his champion d so he can served as king and dsyroy his opponents Simon and Yidian felt jointly powerful and supreme to all. They are ready to move on and leave the Orcs and and face new opponents and win. “You are power,” Yidian was breathless with pleasure, “Together we could do anything. Own this world. Just us, not Belothemid or Auren Qualls or even the fucking Wizard Counsel could rival such awe-inspiring power.”

Until the tumor diagnosis,I thought he had a form of aspergers syndrome which is a type of autism. After the surgery and career change all seems well I would caution them to not delay having fun on a good vacation or such until they retire. My dad has a very short retirement. He had a heart attack and died when he was retired at 65.

So Grey is a god, Beatrice is or was a druid--Hmm-- Mark ,Dave and Grey has an as of yet not revealed purpose or function. But Dave is the saviour for now and has created a protective bubble to ward off what/who is attacking them. Much more needs to be revealed. What will Maio say has to be done?

A rougher than normal place did not impair the great enjoyment they all created and shared. The sex had to be great. Russ fit in as a part of the family. Toby was a wonder and truly joyful. He is no moody teenager. I hope he keeps his enthusiasm and ability to see the bright side of things. They will have great memories of this trip

Thank you Al Norris--I love knowing there is going to be much more to the two stories. Please do not stop !

I enjoy the author's descriptive, story telling ability. He builds intricate, fascinating scenarios that I want to see playout I have read Kandric sevaral times and am hoping for crossovers with this story or the Sands of Time rebooted. The last chapter of Kandric is especially compelling which brings together several individuals and stories. The ending green dragon disclosure rocks the Kingdom. In chapter 12 we have hints of something significant. I am unsure if we are presented with some red herrings ( no connection) or Easter Eggs like a Marvel movie portending new battles and contests. I remain very interested to see what actually develops. Thanks for your creative efforts

We learn of many interconections and mysteries. Some may be relevant to Adga and her mission. Some relevant to Xavier--Gardagam Koladic, Prince Chark, Sprit Warrior Guild by the City of Lucas the Lost ( which might help Xavier) and serious legends of someone or some force that can restore or save the Desert. There is much not known or only barely understood about the history of the desert. An arrival of Xavier at Scorpion Falls with what is gained at Lucas the Lost could really shake things up. Adga and crew are exploring the passage they have found and are surprised by what they are finding. I am looking forward to their further searches. They are expecting the truce to end soon.