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    Chapter 4

    13 Hearts sounds very scary. It reminds me of a malevolent take on the Jim Carrey movie The Truman Show. Jim was born in Canada. I am also reminded of the US TV show "Person of Interest" which portrayed what terrible things *might happen in a computerized camera powered surveillance state wis everyone being watched.
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    Chapter 16

    I bet the Herald's plans will not work out. Yari and others like her might turn the battle momentum against him. Fenn might be captured in another ambush run by Yari,
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    Chapter 15

    I think Yari will try to steal Fenn's power. Fenn is still in the battle being directed by the Herald. Ain has been sent far away to the Arbiter in the palace...
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    Chapter 4

    Orel cares and wants to be a successful matchmaker. He has a great relationship with Finn and is happy, Happy people can wants to help others be happy, Sometimes , it is that simple, But people are complex. I am glad Orel will be there to assist Phase two to be successful. Axl and Oliver know Orel is around and are charmed by his influence. It must ease their conversations,
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    Chapter 9

    A glorious, unbelievably successful escape from the Fenian camp. Elias and Theo took off with the prized maxim gun shocking the Fenians and drove away shooting on a sled with powerful horses. They luckily made it to the town and drove through the hastily erected barricade at the bridge over the canal, The town is armed and ready. The maxim is on the town's side but the Fenians have arrived and command the ridge heights and have settled in,They will not charge the maxim for now but the situation is unsettling., Jack had arrived and Levesque read the note warning of the Fenians, He has a telegraph message sent to Ottawa military and police leadership warning the Fenian invasion of the capital is immanent. Levesque organized the resistance and the bridge was barricaded. The Fenians will attack Merrickville soon. They should be smart, angry, disciplined and merciless. Will the cavalry arrive in time? What a historic cataclysmic situation! This is defining moment for the town and its people.
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    Chapter 16

    Ain punched the Herald in the nose and was kicked out and sent home to be punished by the arbiter. Petre road home with him. They found people at home opposed the war and many were protesting in the streets The arbiter did not like the Herald and assumed Ain had a good reason to punch him. He sent the two home to rest and told them to return the next afternoon, Ain was very troubled and cried. I wonder if the war is still favoring the Herald. Was Yarima able to ambush and capture Fenn? Is Ain needed to return to save his former army?
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    Fog

    It maybe that John crossed the mist barrier into the elven lands John does not know why he go. His elven host asked how he got through the barrier tto the elven lands. John's mind is blank. But now John is back in the human lands injured and held prisoner. His memory seems to again be impair. His interrogator was a man of the cloth, not an elf. He thought John may be a half-elf and may not know it,
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    True Nature

    They feel so very hungry after eating. So, Theo changes into a wolf and hunts for them, He thinks they are his pack and knows he has to feed them Theo brings back a dead goat, He tells Jack he wiill help him prepare the goat for cooking--skinning, butchering. Jack assists him as if this is normal. They are transforming into his pack animals. Is this transformation a good thing? Is the evil following them manipulating them to prevent them from finding Theo's old pack ? Theo can feel his pack is near.
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    Chapter 3

    Thank you for this charming story of good people who care meeting. There are no spies or national security or high e wire financial problems that cry out for solutions You easily can feel good about these new friendships that form naturally. Marshal Lee and Aiden found each other and are slowly becoming boyfriends, Axl found ways to connect with Oliver who did kiss him. Their chemistry was right, Orel predicted it and they still went ahead with his catalytic push
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    Chapter 8

    "Elias gaped at Theo, “You… sent Jack.” Theo nodded, “There was kinda no one else.” Elias blinked, “You’re… unbelievable" So with Jack taking the warning, they are going to fire the Maxim gun on the Fenians Will they make it out alive?
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    Chapter 10

    Oh my-Jody had more sex and was sought after by many hot guys--and one woman. Jody as part of a wedding party had a different sexual experience. His female bridesmaid wanted to be fucked and initiated sex.. Jody fucked her at least twice but he was not satisfied. Jody was fucked by his first sailor and oldest officer at 42 He had intense rounds of sexual pleasure as a bottom on his first party boat cruise in the Chesapeake., He was sought after and assume positions so guys could come to him to fuck his ass and mouth. He was paced and allowed to rest before a new round began. As the boat started its final leg, Jody was shown an old-fashioned wooden stockade. Jody was asked to put his hands and head through the holes so his bare ass and mouth could be used. Wow!
  12. He has published chapter 14 today on the AwesomeDude website
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    Chapter 15

    Yarima and Denie met privately in his rooms. He was worried about his boyfriend Nev ho was sadden by his emotion from general of all generals Denir told her he had innate magical powers. It cannot get out, Having magical power will be a scandal. The Queen will be upset. Yarima told her b rother she might haveFenn and later Ain. so Yarima can first ty to ambush to fight both Fenn and Ain to take their powers. She thought it would be impossible since they team up. If things do not work out, she will take her bother and Nev to live in the enemy lands. Well, Yarima might get her wish. The Herald forced spilt between Fenn and Ain might mean they will not fight together. The Herald thinks he only needs Fenn to fight. Yarima will try to ambush Fenn and steal his powers. Ain will be needed now to fight Yarima and recover Fenn.
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    Chapter 2

    Marshall Lee and Aiden are adorable, sweet and fumbling to a stronger relationship. They are drawing closer and now kissing cheeks and finding hings in common, Axl is acting as the parent making up for missing adults, He is caring and realizes he will not leave home for higher education since he knows he has to take care of Marshall Lee Axl was told by Orel that his brother ,Oliver, is lonely and likes boys, Orel wants Axl to deliver a pizza in his new uniform and try to find some appealing mutual chemistry. Will it work? Oliver does not know about Orel's pan.
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    Chapter 7

    Elias and Theo have to survive a blizzard. At least they found an old place with some cover. Nature's fury is deadly and relentless, When the weather breaks, they will be able to move to the enemy's camp. They will not be expected, But, they learned the bank robbers were tough, ideological driven, anti-Canadian/British Fenians. They will be fierce fighters. The odds are stacked against Theo and Elias. They want to get the deeds back, if they can
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    The Makeover

    I wonder if Julian has been neutered from his harassing Travis off the set as he did in the past, Stef called him to account's and said he could ruin Julian Stef r told Julian he knew what he was doing, “I learned because I have owned a number of studios, including this one,” Stef said vapidly, and picked a piece of lint off his sleeve. “If you talk to me like that again, I will destroy you. Perhaps you can understand that?” I hope Travis has one less person on the set to worry about.
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    Chapter 14

    What a mess. the Herald had to have created this situation by drugging Fenn and keeping inside his tent. The Hearld knew Ain would blow up ads say things that would also upset Fenn. Ain would not leave the military and hurt his country. Ain will be disgraced by not helping. The Herald has won for now. The situation might turn out badly without Ain and he may need to come to the rescue.
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    Chapter 1

    Darren has had a very troubled painful childhood. He is so far apart in thinking and properly acting in Danae's world, Things may soon unravel.
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    Prologue

    How can humans stand against all they will be facing again?
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    Chapter 12

    Kaylen and his two squires met the King's scouts on the road, Kaylen told the scouts that Beaumont took silver and grain and moved north, He has not seen afterwards, Back at the keep he told the Baron what he said and he was pleased. He also said he looked over the site for Beaumont and reported the fen had taken them all without evidence of their existence. Beaumont's disappearance will remain a mystery Let us hope the King does not seek to punish Thornmere,
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    El Ferrol

    Daventry has started to see the benefits of George's history with Spain. They are riding in comfort and with great security. When in Madrid he can help him know about the Prince of Peace who may still run things and of the need to survive the boring court. George's friends at court may also become his friends and advisors.
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    Chapter 1

    Marshal Lee and Aiden are adorable and so enjoying hand holding and not noticing how obvious they are. Axl is always being responsible and a caregiver. But, he is lonely and feels he needs a guy to complement his life. Unknown to him, Orel intends to fix Axi with his brother Oliver. Will it work or be a disaster?
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    Prologue

    Two boys just starting to really know each other. The first kiss was charming
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    Chapter 6

    Happy Birthday! I hope you are enjoying this day and understand you have many readers who appreciate your creative voice and interesting story characters.
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    Chapter 6

    Valance is happy and thinks he has won. His men broke into the bank and stole the deeds. The townsfolk have no proof of ownership He is going to show up tomorrow and smile and tell them they are squatters and must leave. Valance thinks it is over and he did not have to pay for the land and property, Will the towns folk act beaten and leave? Will a few resist and shoot the railroad goons and Valance? Bobby is going to be incensed by the shooting of Timmy. He is near death's door. Bobby might shoot Valance and more..
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