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The two feel like almost orphans. One dad is supposedly dead. The other is hidden away from them but they know he needs them to be able to carry on. They felt compelled to run the gauntlet to reach him and care for him. They were foolhardy, young boys who truly cared for Will.
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Hooray! You have the right guy for Finn, the plot line and conflict. I am glad you are getting enough coffee to help you create a new story
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You say you think Finn needs his own love interest."The potential love interest is fun, sweet, and a doofus..." Is this a semi-version of Kyle? I like your idea of a guy from a new family to town. He could be tough, masculine and in need of his car being repaired. Or maybe he could be a male nurse or physician's assistant for the town's doc who went to high school with Finn and liked him and came back after getting his training. He could meet and help Finn when he came in for care from his battle with Kyle. He would be a caring, soothing person
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Wow--Josel is the son of Mocvann Gravenhild and she is one cruel, vicious mother. He is shocked tol earn that she is his mother. She scares Josel. The Duke of Gravenhild also scares him. His friends are thrown out and away from him. Mocvann orders her guards to kill Danae, a member of the family of her hated enemy Bartos sensed might in the palace. Who possesses it?
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Lydia confronted Garret in his office. “Here’s some free advice, from one natural disaster to another: clean up your own toxic spill. Before someone else gets chemical burns trying to contain it for you. And they will get burned.” So , Garret did clean up what Lydia called his "toxic spill." He and Kyle are on to a healthy relationship. Kyle has to find his own solution when he is ready for a change.
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Do not rule out Corcoran as the killer ! Check the tapes. The guy is wound up and ready to get Rick. I noticed Rick has finally realized this situation is going to come to a head tomorrow and he was focused. He is the target. Rick thought....'‘I have a feeling that this time he wants to go out with a bang,’ I replied. ‘He’s got nothing to lose, especially now he knows we’re onto him and can tie him to at least three murders, plus another serious assault, so why not?’
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I assume the decision on what to do will be given to the officer in charge of the night shift. This likely junior officer will not want to fuck up and make a mistake. He would not want them hurt. He would know the mission was to keep the Governor controlled and supportive of US policy. The boys here could be a new way to keep Will Carter in line. The safest choice would be to send them to the Governor's office and his protective detail.
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Finn and Kyle fought and did not know who Garret would choose. Finn unsettled Kyle and they fought. Garret discovered the two fought about him and were clearly hurt. He went to see both of them and heard what happened and realized he needed to make a choice and make it known Garret told Kyle ...."You’re who I text when I am having a good day. Who I think about when I smile, when I cry, when I am scared I’m not enough… you, always you.” He kissed Kyle’s forehead. “Do I look at you? I can’t stop looking at you!” He made his choice and felt so much better now the Kyle was no longe worried about their relationship. Garret told Kyle he loved him. What a change for the good.
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Andrew read the feed from Miamai. Trump wants to quickly end the resistance, He will not let the British stop him in the Atlantic or anyone in Ottawa. He realizes he needed to start the resistance that is in wait. He will protect his family. Trump...."When I’m back in the Oval in January ‘25, we liquidate the resistance assets. We finish the integration. I want it clean. I want it fast."
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Andrew humbled the best US submarine. He knows more will be back to taken on the sub he is occupying, But, Andrew is reframing the war. He is moving his sub in a new direction. He will get near the shore and release a two man team to send the spark the will begin the Canadian insurrection Wow!
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Leo was pulled through his computer screen to be with Silas, a very powerful demon. Leo had sex for the first time with Silas, Leo was asked if he wanted to go back and he said "no" Will Leo keep staying with Silas? Will Silas send him on a mission back to his old world?
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Yes, the US beat off he VietCong. I met a former Army MP Lt who help fight off the attackers at the Saigon embassy. The VietCong lost. But, the critical point was that the US media turned against the war. They no longer saw the US as invincible. Their negative drumbeat , lead by Walter Cronkite of CBS News, turned the public against the war. President LBJ was forced withdraw his plan to seek another term. The US military learned they would need public support for any future wars. In terms of the Canada situation. another Tet like attack on a major Canadian city when the country was supposedly pacified might well shock US citizens and the media in the lower 48 and cause them to lose support for Trump and the GOP. The media may not like that the Canadian state is no longer pacified
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In the Viet Nam war the US gave up the countryside and sought to control the cities. It was called a "Strategic Hamlet" method You could tell how successful that strategy was by the success of the Tet Offensive in Saigon. The media cratered in shock and the US public turned against the war.
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How soon is this connection along with a larger strategy be explained? Will we know in the beginning chapters of the next book? Kieran is in the dark, I assume. He must be a pawn.
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Jacob and Tommy drive and reached the entrance to Will's well-guarded, solidly fenced in compound/prison. Now, what happens? Someone other than an American Sargent gate guard will decide. Jacob and Tommy will demand to stay together and to be with their father. Let us hope they stay safe and can support will as they planned.
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The resistance continues. It hurts the Americans plus encourages other Canadians to not give up hope. West is doing his part. as a leader The kids really care about Will who they think is cracking. He is alone and that is bad to them, He needs help. Jacob,his son , and his adopted son, Tommy, are foolishly going out to find him. Two 14-year-olds are taking an old Volvo on roads hoping they can find their way to Will. Foolhardy and determined people are not giving up.
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Finn thought Garret did not yet know what he needed---his medicine or his poison. He had thought Garret needed him most, though, But, he was shocked when Kyle said he fucked Garret and Finn never did that. Garret needed something much different from Kyle and Garret liked it. Finn was shocked and now uncertain who Garret would choose, I think.
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What will Finn do? He might still track Garret and when he is by himself approach him. He could get close and touch him again and invite him to play with him as soon as he wants. Maybe Finn could suggest Garret take him to his place to have sex. Finn knows Garret is turned on by him. He intends to better fulfill Garret than Kyle.
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Tickling away, great happy fun was had by all. Chip and Ken ganged up to have extended session tickling TL. It was all a very enjoyable time. TL got them back the next morning,
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I Needed to See How It Would End
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in I Needed to See How It Would End
Lyn is furious at Brad and Alexander after what they told him. They are no longer his friends in his mind. He could not stay, He rejected being with Alexander. Their lives were broken apart by his deceit. Bella comes to see him at the plane departure gate, She tells him she does not blame him. She may still marry Brad and be ready for a divorce later. Brad does not know it, but she tells Lyn she is pregnant Unless something happens soon, Lyn will be flying home intending to be a lonely single man. This story will turn into a tragedy.- 36 comments
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"Motion Sickness"
akascrubber commented on Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro's story chapter in "Motion Sickness"
Marina---"Her voice turned silky. "I get to do my absolute favorite thing. I get to build a star," she said. "And stars, Liam..." She paused, letting it hang. "Stars don't belong to themselves. They belong to the sky." She is going to protect her investment. He did not belong to himself. She now knows Hudson is not like any other person Liam cared about. She has to exorcise him and remove him from Liam. Has she already tried? I bet the driver reports to her. Maybe, that patron who tried to pick up Hudson and failed was her hired seducer aimed at showing Liam he had moved on Liam is haunted by Hudson. He cannot call or text him. Liam is destroying himself and notices Hudson is tightly wound. Can this situation continue? Marina will not give up. She wants Hudson to be gone. A kidnapping? A false story saying he had given up on the town and gone somewhere else less hectic? -
The way the story was written the just needed a spark or just luck for maybe two or even all three to meet at some point. I bet they would have more opportunities to get together in other ways than shown in his story. They would connect since are so close in age , attended the same high school at the same time and have no other sexual partner or close friend and are stuck in the town with limited job possibilities Garret kept looking across his workplace at his old high school classmate and he was intrigued by him. His life was full of pain and hate and Finn collected part of Garrets miseries. He did not see a mate or think about Finn in a sexual way. Any sexual playing from their meetings would be the glue that kept them in each other's mind. Garret's car broke down and Finn saw him and helped Garret to get his car to the shop late at night. Finn wanted to help this guy. They were not friends. Finn worked on the car and fixed it after a time. Getting close to one another afterwards one thing led to another and a strong sexual chemistry aroused them and made them want each other. Kyle was fucked three times. Garret was unleashed and surprised. He had never fucked a guy before. He liked it, On the way back from fucking Finn, Garret went to Tim Horton's and met Kyle who was the staff guy on duty. He was so worked up by Finn he confessed what he did to Klye who he was a gay guy when they were both in high school. Kyle had lost his BF earlier. They began a relationship with Garret asking for more advice and then to help him improving his sexual abilities. Kyle agreed to be a friend with benefits only, hopefully. These connections might happen other ways, The sex they would have will change them I am not certain what the future will be for the three now...
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Rick was too confident that he and Adam could go out to a popular place and not be followed by Daniel Corcoran. He knew where Adam lived. He was infatuated and wanted Rick. For now, he is just playing with him and has to enjoy tormenting and upsetting Rick. The large crowd size will let Corcoran escape after he got what he wanted. I expect he careful plans this Mardi Gras weekend to capture and get what he wants from Rick before he kills him. Rick should be on even higher alert.
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Who is the asset and who is the liability? Or, are they interchangeable and each share the opposite nature for each other?
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I know when the donuts are tasting the best at Krispy Kreme. The store put a special red light on to tell the customers a new batch is ready for sale. I have not found any special sauce on my donuts !
