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BTW--I would love a deus ex machina solution for Tarquin at the right moment.
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I hope soon we will meet and see Tarquin acting as he normally does. It would help to learn what he did in the past to Orel and Finn. We have only briefly leaned about him and how controls others. Oliver thinks he is a spendthrift. He tells Finn he does not see him as able to get him mental health care. Maybe, Tarquin will become so poisonous and cruel that he might be disappeared with the help of someone like West Harding
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Adam and Coop are helping Nick and Brad being out in public as gay males. They know much better that they need to be aawre and on the lookout for Corcoran. The boys, I think, learned some commonsense ways to live in public around others, especially older gay males who might like young boys too much Coop goes on duty after lunch. Adam will take care of he boys who really want to be part of the festivities Corcoran is expected to make some sort of a play for Coop. No one knows his plan. I wonder if he might try to kidnap one or both of the boys and try to force Coop to come to him, warning Coop to not tell anyone else.
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So, the town is a long running soap opera with an insane cruel leader, broken souls and lots of hidden secrets, Lydia and Finn are the keys that might open up and disinfect Merrickville, Finn concluded..."The war was coming. Tarquin’s shadow loomed. But for the first time in ten years, Finn wasn’t standing alone in the dark. He had an ally in velvet, a reluctant general in a suit, and a pure soul that had not forgotten him."
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OMG--The Delorean opens a can of worms and hard memories for Finn and Orel. Oliver does not know what he is doing and what he is unleashing We will find out, Neither Oliver or Tarquin are likeable or perhaps worse in Finn's estimation. Lydia is getting what she wants. Finn thought...."the silence of the shop, and the sinking realization that he had just sold his soul to sit at a table with the family that had tried to destroy it."
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The important matter is that Enrico secured the ammo and other material equip a mighty resistance force. He put his life on the line with international threat should he not perform, Enrico followed through and saw that the material was delivered to West Harding, Now Enrico has a complication, Ned Sanderson wants to move from a one-time interlude to a continued sexual relationship. Andrew and Will Carter will not like this, I am sure West's planned psyop campaign with sound worked and the material Enrico provided were picked up for distribution and use at the right time. So far, the US does not know that the resistance is much better armed, Targeted attacks on US forces will shock them, However, Graves has figured out the deception after the fact, He forgot US forces have psyop units with loudspeakers that are used to support US forces in the attack to deceive the enemy. When the resistance shows its teeth, Graves' failure to foresee this might see him sent to study the non-existence enemy in the dismal rainforest around Sitka, Alaska, Graves knows he was played and is focusing on West and Petter to solve his puzzle and stop the resistance.
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I have worked inside a SCIF. It is set apart and isolated to protect compartmented intel at highest level for decision making and planning. Google-SCIF means Sensitive Compartmented Information Facility, an accredited, highly secure room, building, or area where U.S. government agencies protect top-secret intelligence (Sensitive Compartmented Information, or SCI) from espionage and unauthorized access using strict physical, acoustic, and electronic security measures. SCIFs are vital for handling classified intelligence derived from sensitive sources, ensuring information is only accessible to authorized personnel under strict need-to-know protocols, like those used in the White House Situation Room If there any leaks, they will be the result of someone in the SCIF talking to the wrong person when they leave the room.
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Two very different college athletes room together as freshmen. BTW, the are both sexually inexperienced and in the closet. As they spend more time together, they become more attracted to each other and feel compelled to act and share learning how to enjoy each other's body. They fall in love. Read on to learn about this happy tale.
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Cory and Ray, new roommates at college, gradually find they are attracted to each other but hold back expressing their feeling. They are both deeply in the closet. Their path to expressing their love and making love is glorious and heartwarming, They decide to become open and honest and find acceptance. They do become much closer and very happy What a wonderful love story. Thank you
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Gabriel is in a no win situation. Is someone already tagged to kill him? We know from two highly prominent people being shot, it can happen. One had better protection than a senator and only survived by turning his head at the right moment. It's the intensive manhunt afterwards that could do Gabriel in. His handler must want him dead.
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[Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
What a mess. I can see why Lyn left hurt, shocked and not willing to forgive Brad or Alexander Brad called him a whore like his mother for being bought by Alexander's money and Lyn was destroyed because he trusted Alexander not to tell his secret. Alexander denied it but Lyn was not listening. He was crushed. Lyn did not know Alexander saved him after his mother died. Lyn was not bought. Alexander has not had any sexual relations with Lyn. Brad thought they were sexually active and only came on to him because Alexander must have kicked him to the curb So many misunderstanding that turned rancid and ruined their relationships. Lyn flew away and gave up on them. -
Freedom Comes With a Cost
akascrubber commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Freedom Comes With a Cost
Hunter is messed up. He did not end his way of relating to guys as he hoped. He has one bf who he likes, but does not love. Plus, he has one friend, Miguel, who intrigues him and excites him. He finds himself turned on by other guys. Is he going to disappoint them? Rory analyzed him perfectly. Rory: “You didn’t want something stable. You wanted chaos. Excitement. You still do. And you jumped into this thing in Colombia way too fast. Probably just because you were lonely and you’d already been through all the cute boys in D.C.” Rory told him to not lead a guy on and break up with him before he cheats and moves on, I fear Hunter is not going to follow Rory's advice and things will get messy. -
Leo learned his purpose and what Silas wanted him to do when he returned to the mortal realm. He would seduce and perform every secret desire with the people he knew. He would corrupt them for Silas. Silas fully captured him and he would do what he wanted. It should be shocking.
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Finn, Garret and Kyle, former high school classmates meet, battle with each other and seek ways to survive. Life is not easy for them and they carry their serious past problems to the present. Can broken , hurt souls find understanding and healing? Can they forgive themselves and the cage they place themselves in? Who will grow and who will self-destruct? This story is not for the faint of heart. Who, if any, might become more than friends? Expect lots of intense sex and pain along the way
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Thank you. This story has well earned a recommendation. I think this is one of your better stories. You constructively resolved the questions about the main characters and gave them hope for the future. Two are getting married sealing their commitment. Finn does not know it, but he is on the path to meet Oliver and his own improved life, I bet, with likely struggles along the way
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Graves wants to question Peter without him getting concerned. He wants to know more and thinks Peter can tell him about the local scene. I imagine the people are buttoned up to him, but he sees Peter are too easy to prod and give up news. He is going to ask carefully and innocently about West and maybe a yellow volvo and Peter's brother. Will Peter tell him he helped take care of certain young ones? His efforts to seduce Peter will fall flat. Graves might get intel from higher ups. He might get inquiries about the yelllow volvo and the two boys that are now with the governor. He could see a nexus of people who should be confined to help subdue the populace. Luckily, there are locals who are keeping track of Graves. Will he become so dangerous that he needs to be taken out? West has some skilled soldiers who could kill Graves and plant evidence on him implying he is collaborating with the resistance and has gotten greedy.
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Will did it. He was able to give Sky an awesome blow job. Sky thought it was the best one he had ever gotten, Will told Sky he really loved giving him a blow job. When Sky worried, he was now gay, Will told him he saw Sky liking women so he must be bisexual. Sky was so happy that he agreed to fuck Will. Travis is getting worked up arguing with his soap father. He needed to be with Will and was concerned about Kendo's advances. Will arrives in two days. Can he hold out?
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"I Know You're In There"
akascrubber commented on Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro's story chapter in "I Know You're In There"
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Who can forget the sousaphone player dotting the "I" when the Ohio State University Marching Band--the Best Damn Band in the Land----plays the iconic, powerful French miliary march Le Regiment and forms the script Ohio? The Band has 28 sousaphone players and began playing Le Regiment in 1936
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I am betting that Will is going to be stronger and more assured with these two boys around him. He is going to see daily why his fight matters.
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I cannot believe Garret went with Kyle to a cosplay convention. Talk about baptism by fire! And Garret loved it ! As a guy who needs to use a cane to get around, I would be worried about being jostled by running kids/adults and surging crowds. Since Garret fit in without complaining, he took it all in as part of his affection for Kyle. The meeting with Dr Who was a turning point. They were companions with gear and totally shared the nerd experience. Garret realized he enjoyed being with Kyle in this wonderful environment. He was very glad he was with Kyle, not Finn. This time together solidified his connection and love for Kyle and the choices they both made,
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Just as Will is telling his staff how they will handle the upcoming US election he is shocked to learn Jacob and Tommy have showed up at the gate. The US military and Secret Service are upset and want to detain and taken time interrogation them. Will says no and wins the standoff for now. Will is going to call Biden and tell him his sons have showed up and they are going to want to see him when he visits the Northern Territory. BTW, Biden liked to sniff girl's hair, not boy's hair. The kids need food, baths and clothes , They will be shown later to the press. They are going to be American hostages, too. The US is stripping assets from Canada and not liked at all by the former Canadian citizens. The Northern Territory is given 54 electoral votes in the 24 election so its votes are going to be sought. Will knows if Trump wins, he is going to be killed or disappeared. He will be an obstacle. Canada will be absorbed into the US in some as yet to be decided fashion. I am looking forward to finding out what Will's plan is for his country.
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Joel's life is destroyed or so he thinks. He arrives home to find out his older brother learned he was gay from reading his computer. His mother is told and thinks he is defective and will hurt his younger brother. His dad does not oppose his wife, Joel is thrown out with no possessions. Joel loses all hope and moves to a bridge and contemplates suicide. Before he shoots himself, a kind hearted man , Trace, talks to him and talks him out of shooting himself. Trace drives him to his home and offers him a place to stay. Joel joins a new family---Trace and his wife, Celia, have two children and two young men who help them around their farm. Joel has to learn how to handle his gay sexual nature, his current plan on being in the closet, his approach and adjusting to a new high school that was a rival to his old one and his desire to make friends. He is young, hurt and just beginning to find his way. Luckily. he has two good adult role models to help along. Life will not be easy for Joel. He is forced to grow up and make decisions I think you will begin to like Joel and hope he grows stronger. You will benefit from the author's active involvement in the comments on each chapter. Read on to find out how Joel turns out
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"I Know You're In There"
akascrubber commented on Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro's story chapter in "I Know You're In There"
What a mess. These two suffered But a critical mas =s of pain lead Lim to and chose Hudson. Liam pounded on Hudson;s door. He wanted in and shouted. Hudson kept him out until Liam made too much noise. "You don't know what it's like," Liam said, voice low. "To have people decide what you are before you even open your mouth. To have your life measured in headlines and risk assessments and..." he exhaled sharply, choking on the words, "...damage control." He hated it. Liam was ready for a change. They hugged and kissed, They will work out a plan tomorrow, I expect fireworks. These two will need to be steadfast- 13 comments
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Joel felt he had to do it, He drove to see Cody and his parents, Cody was so happy. Then Joel confronted his parents, He was very strong. He wanted to see Cody once a week and be a big brother, His mother said no over and over. Finally, his dad said yes. He saw how hurt Cody was and how their family was upset. He insisted that Joel and Cody will meet. He wore down his wife, Joel left knowing he would be seeing Cody. He did not know if his visit will shake things up with his family Joel was strong and determined, He got the connection he wanted with Cody.
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