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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    A heartwarming Christmas time story-- Two boys meet and feel an instant connection. They began to spend more time together, At one point they hey touched innocently and liked it. Finally, after a brief separation they admitted they liked each other and had their first kiss. They realized they were going to be very good friends, What a touching easy going story that left a good feeling in your readers' minds. Thank you
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 29

    Finally, alone they play around and achieve orgasms. Davin has a one track mind. He wants to play with Joel's ass kiss it, finger him and get to the point he can fuck Joel. Joel hears him but it really does not register, Davin kisses Joel's ass hole and gets to the point he drives a finger in his ass, He finger fucks him and hits his prostate and enables Joel to shoot out a huge amount of cum. They are fumbling along and having rewarded orgasms. Davin might expand his education read some gay fiction or watch gay movies to learn how to prepare Joel for anal sex. Joel is not saying no. Davin needs some lube and condoms maybe get a dildo to use on Joel. They both need to keep talking and agree on their next steps. This is really the start of a process, Next time they might get more into sexual playing and be more at ease.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    What an intense sexual session and overture to much more. Santa claimed Claus stripped him, ran his hands and lips over his body, brought him to a glorious orgasm and made him compliant and excited. He knew Claus was now open and ready to be trained by him. He placed a great leather trap over his eyes to keep Claus from seeing what will happen to him and not realize what toys he will experience .Santis's full bag of toys are available for Santa to use on Claus Claus is going on a wild ride and is going to be tested and greatly surprised...."Need to train you in the right gear, boy… ." I cannot wait to see what this master does with Claus,
  4. Alex and Lyn asked what was next for them. With Alex's advive, they will see what happens after they met on weekend Then they had sex with Lyn being the bottom, Lyn's ass needed to rest. Things got worked out when they are alone Maybe, adding more people will make tough complications. We will land out soon...
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    The boys and Adam and Rick got tested for A STD's and peace of mind, Corcoran continued to upset Rick, Reading Martin's old journal he read that he creeped him out around the time Martin was killed and had asked Martin to see him before he left the school. Corcoran is more and more the assumed killer. Now a man that may be Corcoran is nosing around Rick's place. This serial murder case is coming to a conclusion when Rick and Adam return.
  6. Mix old Christmas fantasies and new tales of an apocalypse and add a mistaken Santa and elf in costume with almost feral boy scouts who are very hungry and jaded in a potentially explosive situation. See what happens when luck and dreams wonderfully come alive. Merry Christmas!
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  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Awesome--Santa and his elf survived without being eaten by the scary boy scouts and the dream of Christmas survived. The kids kept hope and their lives improved. Everyone was very lucky and lived for another day.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 21

    Only one more chapter--You are going to leave so many loose ends with Will, Andrew and Enrico still playing key roles for Canada survival. Is Canada still going to be under US rule as the chapter ends? BTW, the CIA does not know Andrew did the killing in its SCIF. He is not going to have a CIA team assigned to kill him We are going to want and need to the next book when you are able to begin publishing it,
  9. akascrubber

    Unseen Hands

    You kept the momentum going and brought the key characters into play, Josh is in his old hospital recovering in pain. He told his backstory to his new brothers who relayed what he said to the adult Kincaids. Walter showed up to the team's leader debriefing. He realized that Cerebus had ordered the killing automatically. Walter thought that the car crash scene had to replicated to induce Josh to know the code word to unlock Cerebus. Now, an injured Josh is likely going to be put in a dangerous situation. He and his new foster parents will have to agree. Even if he is put in the crash recreation, his second persona is still hanging over him. Who is this second guy who can act like Matt Bourne? Is he going to continue to be a part of the normal Josh ?
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 21

    Will rose to the moment ! He owned the camera speaking to the citizens of Canada and the US. His speech was masterful, explaining why peace was needed and sending the right messages and proper guidance to his fellow Canadians. He did not surrender or say the words of surrender when he got down on one knee and looked Trump in the eye. He fooled Trump but not his very worried chief of staff who saw the problems Will has caused. Trump superior attitude only changed and he did get very worried when he found out Abernathy was killed inside the CIA headquarters. He thought Will directed it, but Will denied any knowledge of the killing, Trump was not mollified. Did he begin to feel unsafe? Trump expects Canada to turn into the 51st state and Will is going to be his puppet. I bet Trump will rue the day he started on the path.His military is unsuited to run the 51st state, With Abernathy gone, he does not have access to willing collaborators or the funding Abernathy was going to use to buy allies inside Canada. American is not financially solvent after the power disaster and cannot afford to pay for ruling Canada. Resistence inside Canada will make US ruling tough. If the US tries to strip assets from Canada for US use, then public opposition could become painful.. The example of the separation by Newfoundland and Labrador could inspire pockets of strong opposition in Canada. Attacking the newly separated lands and British forces protecting them is not likely to win US public approval who will not want to see more fighting with our longtime ally. The US does not have enough military forces to impose martial law fully across Canada. Will is not going to back Trump beyond mouthing soft words. If the occupation and efforts to establish a proto 51st state become unsettling and rocky, opposition in the US to Trump will pick up. People will smell blood, if Trump's plans falter. It takes a vote of approval by both houses of Congress to admit a new state. Trump could lose the vote due to strong opposition, .A real mess could call for invoking the 25th amendment and an end to absorbing Canada.
  11. These two were made for each other--until they were not They rebounded and kept sane and loving in new ways. I enjoyed the tickling and feet play and all connected to them. You wonderfully started on your way to writing in a distinctive, fun sector.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    One of the great classic movies, Casablanca, has two alternate endings. The first one had the Humphrey Bogart character wining the girl and the leader of the Nazi resistance losing. The test audience really hated this ending, So, what we see now is version two and the girl is flying off with the Nazi resistance leader to continue their struggle against evil. Bogart was able to tell her before she left...."We will always have Paris,"
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    What a wonderful Christmas story. You can easily like Finn and Georgie as they struggle and survive together loving and caring for each other, You gave us a truthful, confident summary--- "Real victories came from genuine love, effort, and connections. For Finn and Georgie, they’d won their battle, the war went on, but they were better facing stuff together. Just being each other’s person, one day at a time." We want this assumption to be shown to be true, especially at This time of the year, Thank You.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    With the death of Abernathy and those in the room the whole enterprise--maybe the Order and CIA assets-have lost their head and integration with the US military plus no longer have $billions to fund their plans to take over Canada and replace the existing leaders. The impact of these killings by Andrew could be profound and seriously hurt the US effort to win the peace in Canada on US terms. The Canadian resistance can organically grow without the CIA backed quislings that might be aiding the US
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    I think Enrico can destroy the President's finances. His real estate and other assets in the Northeast must be in distress due to the blackout and maybe in default. He might have to pledge is Florida assets to cover his whole empire. Enrico can start rumors that will cause a run on Trump's businesses. Others who hate Trump should be willing to pay bottom dollar for Trump's businesses. Trump could be broke with the right actions.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    Good--Abernathy was cleaned out and broke . He found this out before Andrew Carter killed him--Now, Andrew is driving to his Royal Navy sub pick up Enrico learned of the attack and surrender. He hates the US. I expect he will get revenge.
  17. akascrubber

    Budding Artist

    What is going on? Are those suing Noah going to be killed? Noah saw a scary drawing It was my mother. My stepfather. My uncle. My maternal grandfather. All burning.
  18. This date was set up to be a disaster, Dennis gave Klebber the wrong address and he had to walk up stairs in two tall buildings. A man helped him out and directed him to the right building hours later. Dennis was worn with worry and felt he was ghosted, They had to work through anger issues when they met. Klebber stayed for a while and agreed to cuddle but not kiss and insisted they had no sex. Dennis was taken with his nature and hot body. Klebber liked his dad bod and awesome very thick cock which also scared him. Out of the box Dennis asked to go next weekend to a kids 'party, He explained why and Klebber agreed to take two young relatives with him. What can go wrong ? Everything ! These two keep messing up.
  19. akascrubber

    Team Building

    Theo willed himself to not give in He loved Vince's lips They needed to have a threesome!
  20. Looking for a Christmas story to make you cry and see love sustain the souls of two men who nearly have lost the will to live They are broken, but do not give up. They fight against the odds. What happens to them? Read on the find out.
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  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    This story was moving towards a sad, cruel ending, but you turned it around. These men deserved to be united, not painfully separated What a wonderful holiday message. Thank you.
  22. It does not matter who helped Lyn as long as the mystery donor is not identified. What matters is that Lyn was helped and he took the money and changed his life.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 24

    The police are not hesitating and have arrested more people. It could mean those still not arrested will be more pressure to kill any witnesses or those protecting them, Rick has a bullseye on his head Meanwhile he is looking for more evidence connecting Corcoran to Martin.
  24. Sy was the key for Ryan and was helped his friends to see Ryan in a new, more human way. You have set up the dance to be the next defining moment in their relationship. I am very hopeful for them. Please be merciful.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    You have balls the size of Niagara Falls to choose this shocking, dark, depressing invasion route. We will see if the next steps redeem your reputation by showing the Canadian, the US and internation reactions. I expect the scene of Will stoically on his knees being zip tied will be captured by a nearby military person and sold for a high price to the news media. Will is going to be made a Canadian and International martyr
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