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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    Smith using his past assumptions about Andrew and Will hopes he can show a crippled Andrew and force Wil to give up being the PM I think Smith once again misreads Will. He will get very mad. Will knows a weak and Silas connected PM will give up Canada's sovereignty. The former moles will be brought back to control the .new PM We have not yet heard from NATO or Enrico or Peter.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 5

    The situation is bleak and will get bleaker. The Russians sabotaged consideration of the request for help from the UN. Will sees his hope for help in limbo Smith has one option to force and or break Will. His scientist torturing Andrew has not yet broken him. Smith tells him to not hold back and make him a disaster with no control. Smith wants a video tape of a simpering, crying Andrew made so he can send it to Will as threat to change or ellse..... Smith is talking to Silas Maybe a pliable new PM can be installed to renew the power to the US if Will resigns to save Andrew
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    I think Jaxon might look tough and sound tough and try to scare Joel, but prefer to have a goodtime with his girlfriend and others. He might just want to relax and drink a beer. However, if he was mad at his game performance, he might be inclined to take his anger out on Joel.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Yes, drpaladin He does need to control the narrative. Lisa and Caleb can help him. I believe Will knows he must fight and win on multiple levels. He will see what foreign actors are doing and is going to have positive .pro-Canada responses. The US and other countries are employing psyop measures to get their point to the right target audiences to destabilize and hurt Canada.
  5. Note: Given how Brad and his family took Lyn in after his mother died, Lyn must feel obligated to not hurt Brad or how he acts. I wonder since they lived in the same house and connected in college when on campus. Lyn must consider Brad had no sexual interest in him. Brad saw Lyn as straight.
  6. I am so surprised and overwhelmed. Brad has saved Lyn from despair and being lost and paralyzed. He did not know what he was going to do after his mother died suddenly. His mother's last friend/sponsor sent his chauffeur with a $15,00 goodbye check. Lyn did not want it. Brad showed up with his father. He wants Lyn to move in with him through their last yar of college. They are very generous and kind. Lyn is shocked but finally accepts this wonderful offer. This kindness adds new depth and humanitarian goodness to their relationship. Brad is going beyond what a normal college friend might do. Lyn is in his debt. Alexander will be unsettled
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    I see Will is tormented by what he has to do to save his nation, family and himself. He is finally able to act and protect. He found a new solution for his country, and we will see if his efforts succeed in the near future. George Orwell “We sleep soundly in our beds, because rough men stand ready in the night to do violence on those who would harm us"
  8. akascrubber

    A Star is Born

    Will is attending a tough, rigorous Harvard and is earning high grades. He expects to have a great, prosperous future, I have read now at Harvard roughly 60% of the grades are A's and 20% of the students are termed disabled--so they are permitted extra time on tests. Grade inflation is real and widely known in 2025
  9. What a challenging, revealing weekend. No sexual activities---even though his bodyguard expected it Hunter analyzed his male friends using his assumed pattern. "Medellín felt like an obstacle course built to watch me crash. Some people come here for adventure; apparently, I was here to see how spectacularly I could wreck myself again". I hope not. Yeison was a good boy who he could grow to like a lot before Hunter assumed he would hurt him. Miquel was danger embodied in a beautiful, hot boy who said he was in the closet deeply. Hunter thinks he is really falling for him. Yet, there is something about him that is very mysterious. Is he real or does he have an agenda to use Hunter?
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    Chapter 8

    Black and White are like characters in a Quentin Tarantino movie--quirky and deadly. The fight and chase continues. At least they have better ground, hope.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Smith has been outflanked. The three have been rescued " Will Carter had sent a kill team into the mountains and stolen back his leverage." But, Smith still has a drugged Andrew in Louisiana Both West and Enrico are going after Andrew. "
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Brilliant move by Will He is asking the UN Secretary General for a peacekeeping force to protect Canada. He is also consulting with the Nato Secretary General for help. Let us see who answers and helps.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    Damn--Joel looks around at the party after the game and locks eyes with Jaxon What is going to happen? Will he try to beat Joel up? He was pissed at Joel at lunch
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    So, you have identified the key questions that Will Carter needs to answer in the next chapter, I am not able to find a realistic solution. Will should know his time to stay without new ideas is short. "The Power Play (see what I did there) can only last for so long, Will needs to come up with something fast, that doesn't involve him selling the country to China, or surrendering the Arctic to Russia." I am looking forward to reading what you propose Will is going to do.
  15. akascrubber

    A Star is Born

    Travis is leaving Will and worries they will have great trouble staying together separated by country. Will thinks they can stay together and promotes more phone sex. The soap opera begins and we can see there will be lots of drama and sexual tension in the show. Social media using MySpace is going to spread gossip--true and false. Kendo meets Travis and they might grow to be good and maybe close friends off the set. Travis should remember the worries he gave to Will about Preston.
  16. akascrubber

    A Star is Born

    "De l'audace, encore de l'audace, toujours de l'audace" translates to "Audacity, more audacity, and ever more audacity!" or "We must dare, dare again, always dare!" It's a famous French Revolutionary quote by Georges Danton, urging boldness in the face of threats like invaders, emphasizing the need for relentless courage and action Quote-- at time of French Revolution--Urging fight off attackers
  17. akascrubber

    Final Chapter

    You have given us a very compelling and enjoyable story about Will, Travis and the connected family while will starts Harvard. Thank you. I am glad you decided to reach some key transition points and are ready to begin a new story. Some issues are solved . It seems the people around the pool agreed that the story that began with Travis eventually moved on to rival cartel's fight. Brad offered his conclusion on what to do with the others accepted. Brad remarked....“Nothing,” I confirmed. “We were involved on a peripheral basis, and we have maneuvered ourselves out of the conflict. It is not our battle, and it is not our war.” They reviewed the new plans for the villa and were very impressed. Also, a mutually acceptable ownership plan was accepted The sticking point with Preston and Will and Travis was clarified. Travis thinks Prestion wants Will as his boyfriend and is going to slowly get his hooks into him. Will disagreed but said if it looks like it was happening, he is going to break it off. This is a real matter to follow. Finally, Jeremy is set to start his degree program at the Parsons School of design. He will be on track to secure his inheritance. I can expect to read from you about lots of new challenges ahead in your Travis story.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Danger everywhere--The posse is going after Cobb and his men who killed the men guarding the $10,000 federal payroll. Sawyer and others are in a canyon that is meant to be a trap with Cobb's crew setting the ambush. The odds seem to be in the enemy's favor. we will see. The lawyers are following far behind. They could pick up the any pieces. If Sawyer and Theo survive or are wounded, they intend to pick up Theo or use their supposed gay relationship to control Sawyer. Just the charge of being gay could land them a long time in jail before a trial and a long prison time or the threat at least neutralize their ability to protect the town,
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Love the insights and scheming by the heads of foreign governments seeing how to take advantage of the Canadian-US conflict. The US is in trouble with China and Russia who want to impair the US. Russia is going to send psyop to enrage the separatists in Canada. Trump at seeks to first order the US Army to invade. His national security advisor convinces him to wage and win a psyop war, Trump is to sound worried and concerned. He will fear for Carter's mental health, “Leaks about mental decline. Rumors he’s a foreign asset. Stories that he wants to be King. By the time the snow melts, half of Canada will think he’s a tyrant, the other half will think he’s a joke. The ‘insurgency’ everyone fears?” Zoran let the concept hang, worthless. “It needs a hero. We turn their hero into a clown.” I assume Trump's effort will fail. He is not trusted in Canada. Carter has already laid the groundwork showing the US began the hostile actions and he can say Trump wants us as his 51st still. Caleb Henderson can advise Will on how to respond. Can they find a way to connect the attacks on Parliament and the PM's residence to the US and connect the Order to US intel?. . As others have noted, Enrico has entered the game and is going to find Andrew Carter. He is going to find Andrew and upset the US who he hates.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 17

    They all safely made it to Tom and Beth's place--Good so far, but will it stay that way ?> Corrupt cops or Jarvis' me will try to find them and kill them. Rick staying for a few days to investigate Martin's death from new angles and give them some security I expect if anyone followed Adam, Rick will be alert and watching. He knows this area and can see if anyone does not fit in.
  21. Brandon experiences his own ribald, disorienting three-part Christmas Carol after has become so depressed and drunk. His boyfriend left him. He argues with his ghost guides, accepts no responsibility for his predicament and becomes sad and sadder. He sees himself as a miserable poor soul and victim. Read on to see if Brandon decides to accept his terrible fate or something happens to change him. Can he have hope and a different future? You might learn from his story, I think.
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  22. Brandon woke up and gave up his pity party. , “I learned that holding onto all that anger doesn’t actually protect me. It just… keeps me stuck.” He resolved to take charge of his life and be responsible for his own destiny Looking out his window he saw a hot new guy next door and he is happily going over for coffee. He is going to rewrite his sad, miserable future as he saw in Christmas Future forecast. He learned and he grew. Hooray! What an encouraging holiday tale! Thank you
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    The lawyers have arrived in town like Sawyer predicted. They will make legal trouble , intimidate the town and then leave the distraught Sawyer and Theo to be killed by follow-on assassins. No one , it is expected, will challenge the big boss afterwards.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 28

    Amazing--They heard the seer speak--"Again comes the time of dreaders, the age of new oblivion. And this time none shall remain to remember it. The dreader triumphs, mankind vanishes, vanishes into eternal night. The red star shall bring your doom, the Deathbringer, herald of death. Unless..." And they heard they needed to consult the ancient wisdom. But, what does that mean? They ran into two facelesss and one died. Mungo turned into a faceless, He was killing everywhere, His dog was a beast. too. Renn and Zdain were lucky they did not chose Mungo as a guide. Renn fired his pistol many times but did not kill Mungo. They are leaving the Misty Isles for Dimalos and Andreuz Sandkan. The living faceless is following them and will devour them later. It is not in a hurry. It has already killed many. They heard a prophecy saying the dreaders will rule again . They are bringing death with them who will seek to kill them and their friends.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Excellent brinkmanship Will is wiling to turn the power out, again The US started first and blockaded the boarder The US knows it has limits. It cannot be seen as the aggressor--especially with tech failure theme out there. The US government is being blamed for the loss of electricity Trump will flinch--for now--I bet One of Trump's aides suggested that Will could be taken out by drone--or maybe a sniper team sent into Ottawa Andrew Carter is being sent to LA to be interred. Might he be used at a critical point to get a favorable deal with Will?
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