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A Wizard and a Wet Sock
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Wizard and a Wet Sock
Morgan now has a young sidekick, Kyle, who talks too much. They are going to Bristol tomorrow to find the relic at Bristol University, Somehow Morgan feels a historic connection to Kyle. -
I wonder if Will rather soon goes on the air to object to the US drone attack and the evidence that US military units are invading Canada Hecan state Canada responded to the attacks He can lay the blame on Trump and tell him he must stop his aggression Will can win the psyop war and turn more US public opinion against Trump.
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A Good News chapter Adam fit in very well with Rick and his adopted parents. Rick and Adam are becoming true boyfriends. Rick felt the presence of Martin guiding him and approving of his Adam Helen is looking into the hateful teacher. Adam suggested Corcoran could have lost weight and cut his hair to appear like the guy Rick saw recently Some more of Jarvis's goons were arrested and the famous book of clients was found There is still danger. Not all the key people have been arrested. I can see Rick might be targeted to drag out the location of the lost boys from him.
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The world has turned upside down. Jolanda has found she lwd the way to the upheaval. Her fsther and the grand Duke were killed by the dreaders. " Then the dreaders continued their soundless speech. They issued commands to Jolanda and Doptus - how the pair must obey and rule the Shadow Cross for the sake of the Darkness. And now the Darkness no longer meant the Black Flame and the duranejs, but R'vhepka and Kirubzahh - those destined to lead weak humanity " True evil has overtaken the Shadow Cross and those they rule. They are not going to stop.
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A powerful, graphic morality tale cloaked around a classic Western environment. Good does fight evil. You will learn about the struggles to exist in a dying mining town. Two people arise to its defense and bring others along with them as they face fierce battles and corruption and well-armed men who do not give up. There are compelling, interesting people and a powerful, smart horse who joins the fight. Love is found, earned and kept strong. You can read on and see that what is past in prologue.
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Well Done! You let us see the strength and determination of the key people and towns folk after the final battle. They left one dying place and moved on to build homes in a vibrant new location 1000 miles away. Then in a welcomed conclusion you showed us their decedents who we know and like \. They learned about their history in real, meaningful terms.
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Do not forget Russia and China are watching. Will they take action to seize land that cannot be prevented by an injured US. China might take Tawain. Might Russia move troops and take areas in Eastern Europe with weaker armies--one or more of the Baltic states. etc. China will try to gain control of the international financial system and throw out the dollar as the standard currency. The US markets are frozen and down
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OMG-I did not see this level of trauma and destruction' Trump ordered a drone strike to blow up a runway at the main airport which has Dutch forces encamped nearby. The Dutch shot the reaper down with its own missile. Will ordered in response a surge from the hydro system to the US through the electric grid which has blown transformers down the East Coast, including blacking out Washington, DC There will be widespread chaos. The possibility of war is now real. Are there enough calm heads to not escalate?
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I hope Enrico gets the information through MI5 to CSIS that Andrew Carter is free from US control. Will Carter can inform Trump his threat on his husband is no longer valid. Silas Abernathy will face Trump's ire and be dismissed
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Wow--Noah has a bounty on his head. It is thought his mother or someone close to her is behind the plot to kill him. This is serious and way beyond what Noah expected. Suddenly Noah and Shiloh are teleported away to the Blackhawk headquarters. He is surprised. His immediate family pop in soon thereafter. They will develop a plan to handle the bounty threat. Life has gotten very unsettling.
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Sounds like the painful torture Dr Hale experienced destroyed both of his kidneys. I hope he revealed all he knew. His yellow color is not a good sign. He will need to be tied to dialysis machines for the rest of his short miserable life. This is a fitting end to a man who enjoyed torturing others.
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You see the real strengths of character that has been tested and met the tests that Will and Andrew faced. Will is doing when is required to lead and save his nation. Andrew has survived medical trauma and moved on from captivity. He is beating the limits imposed by the powerful drug meant to disorient and limit him. Will has another scene to play as he responds to Trump after he reads the material left on the bridge. He is going to assure Trump that Canada will do what is needed to be independent. It is not the Duchy of Grand Fenwick and he is not a Peter Sellars character. Enrico finds a haggard, but much more alert and capable than expected Andrew Carter. Enrico is going to insure his health is much improved and he wants Andrew to join him and helps slay the dragon, Silas Abernathy. Silas is not going to arise again. Any price Andrew might pay is a matter for later discussion. Both Carters have still key roles to play to finish off this terrible drama and win victories.
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OMG--What an extended, brutal gunfight Well told with surprising twists Elas and Rourke shot at each other, Rourke died right away, Elias was hit in the shoulder and fell down, Theo from a distance hit Cobb in his shoulder and he was down but not fully out of it. Two other Pinkerton agents began firing but were taken out by Levesque and Madam Lorelei. Cobb somehow got on his horse and ran away, Elias found the strength and got on Jacjk, too. The ymet at a raging creek and collided. Both fired and fell to the water, Elias felt his hip shatter, Cobb seemed victorious until Jack charged him and trampled over him. Elias again found the superhuman strength to get on Jack and move to town, Theo and others are going to need to help him recover. Hooray!
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The next step in the nuclear deception has been taken by Canada following the DG's plan. Will made a calculated statement to the nation. Trump is going to get the idea Canada is serious about the threat Will Carter made to him. Trump has a decision to make. His suggestion that Andrew Carter's fate was in his hands did not stop Will and made him madder Meanwhile. Andrew has been found by Enrico and will be helped by MI5/UKRoyalNavy to get back to Canada. Andrew will be medically treated now so he no longer will be controlled by the drug he was given.
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So What If We Get Hurt?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in So What If We Get Hurt?
Wow--Pure rewarding sex. Lyn gave Alexander an amazing blow job and savored all his cum. Then Lyn fucked him roughly and Alexander loved it. They kissed and agreed to continue and be boyfriends. What a big step!- 25 comments
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The Cartel Strikes First
akascrubber commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in The Cartel Strikes First
In my area in the US, school assemblies are held inside school buildings. It is a telling sign of the times, that school windows are measured by how long they will resist before being destroyed by gun fire. In our latest school levy, I read a new building would have windows that could sustain 15 minutes of gun fire before failing. -
Enrico asserted.... “The extraction is compromised, but the intelligence acquisition is now paramount. Andrew is gone, but Hale is the key to finding where he went. Forget the ghost. Secure the architect. Proceed to Sector Alpha, non-lethal acquisition only. I want the Doctor delivered to my command center, and I want him whole.” What will Enrico do when Hale denies moving Andrew Carter? There was no mention of drone overwatch. Meanwhile, Silas has just learned Andrew Carter is not under his control. However., Silas cannot give up his plan to subvert Canada. He will lie to the President and save Andrew is still under his control? Trump with the assurance of Silas can inform Will Carter he must stop and give up to save his husband. Will Trump actually threaten Will Carter? How is Will Carter respond?
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Thank God! Rick has got the evidence that appears to break the murder case. Corcoran seems to fit the pattern that began with Martin. Now, Rick needs to investigate if the teacher is in the Sydney area and can be connected to the additional murders. Having a suspect will focus the matter now. With his break Rick has decided to look inward and realizes he must commit to Adam. He tells him he loves him. They will be a stronger couple as they meet Martin's parents.
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Great, tension filed cliffhanger We are going to find out if Elias's strategy trumps Rouke's easy confidence of assured victory I do hope Cobb is shot dead right away
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More fog of war Enrico captured and extracted Dr Hale. He will personally interrogate him and use his own painful methods that will force Dr Hale to tell him all he knows. First off==Where s Andrew Carter? He thinks Dr Hale moved him. Enrico does not yet know Andrew has driven away. The site has been destroyed. Smith thinks the attackers took Carter. Smith reported into Abernathy and said he was going to DC. Silas is gut punched. His one point of leverage over Will Carter is gone. Silas is set to report to Trump. Is he going to lie to Trump? Silas is in real trouble The situation could radically change if Andrew Carter is found by the order in the near term or Enrico sends men out to retrieve him. I hope Enrico is nimble and reacts quickly
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Will not Theo acquiring the special more accurate scope lead him and Elias to take advantage of this new ability as they place themselves when fighting Cobb?
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Justice will be done. Cobb and his men will pay and die in Silver Creek. Elias and Theo will bring righteous retribution and end the terrible problems. I hope Elias and Theo both survive and make it to Canada. I want to find out what happens.
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Philippe, You are very likely right about the drone. Enrico has Alex using them in these stories. He might want a drone or drones used to cover the compound. It would make good sense to surveil the target before and during the attack. The speedy Mustang and trucks erupting from the compound would stand out to observers. When Andrew is found missing, a follow-up to the site of the Mustang would be a good next step. They will need to be prepared to handle a drugged up paranoid man who thinks he has no friends in the area. Enrico would not be high on the list of friends for Andrew.
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Summerabbacat, I love your speculation. You suggested some new possibilities. It is always good thinking to consider many possibilities and then let the evidence and "little gray cells" lead you on.
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OMG--Andrew broke out and stole a car and is driving away. I think he pushed through Enrico's men attacking the compound. Andrew is lost driving and heavily drugged up. I hope Enrico can stabilize his efforts and realize Andrew broke out on his own. He needs to conduct a quick search and find Andrew.
