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OK--what happened to the deal Tarquin offered Finn in jail? Some part of this story is missing. Finn is out working on the Delorean and not in jail or restoring historic cars at the manor

I bet,if Will was forced to decide, he would not surrender and chose his duty to his country

I hope as it turns out, Will may not have to make a final decision. Graves feeling very pleased with his good fortune might decide to threaten Will tonight Maybe, West and Peter can rescue Ned and Enrico later in the night. They will need to kill Graves, I hope they can do it silently so West and others can escape.

In the spy trade , it is called a honeypot. A good looking woman offers sexual favors and gets intel from a guy speaking too loosely or who will leave maps, war plans, etc around.

Eventually, Graves threw Peter out. He intends to fuck Ned. Ned is a younger better choice, He will feel great joy fucking Will's son and humiliating Ned and Will. Tonight, Graves will play with Ned who offered himself. Tomorrow, he intends to tell Will he must step down to save Ned Graves does not think Peter or West are able to threaten him. He has guards. Graves is an idiot and likely to be killed tonight.

Fenn was distressed at the evening dinner and celebration. Ain was getting drunk and saying romantic thing to him. Fenn did not like how Ain a was acting, He left needing a break and needing to think. A man followed him and engaged him in=m in conversation. Ain came upon him and was very hostile saying he needed to leave his future husband alone. A fight ensued and the man drew a knife and hit Ain drawing blood. Fenn went into his shadow form holding the enemy still till guards came to get him. He will be interrogated But, then a fire broke out in the building holding the grand dinner celebration . Was this attack on Ain a distraction for the main enemy effort? The real plan must have been to kill Ain and Fenn and the leaders of his country in the fire. I hope few people are killed. It would be a classic move. Take out the head of the opposing force. I agree the security was weak. I cannot wait for the next chapter and the after action report.

These two young men were surprised and faced serious trouble on their planetary cargo ship. The ship was attacked by raiders and Lt, Jonathan Vally as navigator and Vallin Sturgis, a genetically enhances pilot, needed to escape. Their cargo ship was being blown apart. Lt Vally led Val to a special area that contained a secret exploratory ship that had great speed. The two took off and their blast seemed to injure the attacking vessel. Maybe, it cannot chase them. The two escapees successfully reached Jupiter Station. Val is being taken to the medic. He is impaired since he did not complete his required bonding before he piloted the ship. I hope they can bond and begin their explorations. Interesting start with a promising future when you decide to pick it up.

Marry Me! Wonderful you tied it all together. They accepted they are in love. Lyn proposed to Alexander and they are getting married soon Alexander met him at his hotel room and they fucked three times with Lyn bottoming. They talked it all through and became closer and honest and truly connected. Well Done

Yes, it is compelling and puzzling and mysterious. I cannot picture the end yet. And no--I am not asking for any clues or breadcrumbs

You need to find Lydia a sexual partner, please.

Merrickville is turning into a gay soap opera and will be an interesting place to live once Tarquin is neutralized

Hey, Andrew Highmore had a hockey jacket and he was not weird!

Orel and Lydia can work together and help the town prosper.

So, the kids will not be called sprogs, but now chipmunks?

The squires training continued around the keep. Kaylen led them to the manor for more training. The steward of the manor would watch and test them tomorrow. This night in their room they expressed their strong feelings for each other, held hands and experienced their first kiss. A line was crossed. They became more committed to each other.

I am willing to give our good author his creative license for his passenger survivability scenario to make the plot move along. This subject is outside your normal subject area. I would not be as forgiving if this was a spy/mystery story written by Lee Childs or Vince Flynn or Brad Thor.

We got to a magnificent high point--Liam founded an agency that ethically handled stars "You've become...a proof-of-life. That someone can survive the machine and come out the other side with their humanity intact." Then Liam is asked by the interviewer for the TV show --"What did you lose"--This would be on the public record Liam said "Everything" What did Liam mean? Did he lose Hudson?

Tarquin is lying and manipulating Oliver. He is not going to resign after the Gala. He is just buying his silence and peace till it is too late to stop his plans. He will own Oliver even more since he is needed to stay now and not go to Ottawa in order to protect Orel. Tarquin says he will save Finn from jail and approve of them getting married and then staying at the manner. Tarquin expects he can control them all and push Orel to sign what legal documents he wants since he is his guardian. Orel does not know that he gave Finn the choice of staying in the manner repairing its historic cars and being with Orel or going to prison for a very long time. Tarquin said he would tell Orel about the offer he made to Finn. Tarquin will be surprised, I bet. Lydia and Ms. Patel are securing the evidence to contest Tarquin's guardianship/conservatorship. Orel may remember signing the deeds and know he owns the land and object to what Tarquin wants . Orel will now have more control if he is legally free of Tarquin's control. Maybe, the Vicker's company has great cams that show someone planting the evidence in Finn's garage. Tarquin's house of cards could collapse.

Will' political instincts and judgment are outstanding. He picked the right running mate who understands him and complements him. The ticket will be much stronger. Plus, Will has the right message. He stood up to man who lost his son and got him and the crowd to realize enough was enough. Will is the change candidate who understands them and their predicament and will fight for them not the corporate bigwigs that are feasting on them. Wil gave them and new shared enemy and he sounded right

If you are open to a suggestion--Maybe compose a small tale about a powerful mage called Kandric

Ain did not like the attention he received for his action destroying the enemy attack-and sadly killing his friend-- He told the large crowd celebrating his victory that they now have a better reason to celebrate now--" This is a completely new chapter in Lys-Akkaria's history where a lightweaver and a shadowforger are working together in defense of their nation. And Orinovo won't stand a chance."-- Let us see the reactions from the Herald and the Bulwark Ain has made his military views known. Now he has to have an honest talk with Fenn.

Caldur, the Prince, walking down the hall of his palace is surprised with painful attacks and falls down. Will , a young page saves the Prince as he fell. A wizard healer is called and he realizes what has happened, He is shocked to realize the two are wizards and have bonded There bond is requiring them to stay close. They can only separate with more training and time. The two are taken to the Prince's room and placed on his bed. Now the hard part Hostility may spring forth when the Prince brings a lower class page along to his meetings. The Prime Minister could object and cause problems. The King is gone for a month and he cannot backup the Prince Lots of open issues. I wish Will and Caldur Good Luck!

Finn listened to Tarquin in the jail. He heard the options Tarquin gave him--long term prison time with Orel destroyed or being a kept mechanic working on historic cars at the Merrick mansion and residing there with Orel He would come back in the morning to hear his response. So. Tarquin has a way to free Finn from the charges? Hmmmm Here is the pregnant sentence which may suggest an out for Finn.... "I'll give you until morning. I'll be with Orel, explaining the options. I'm sure he'll want to discuss it with you. He's so... logical." Is our author implying that Orel will examine the charges and evidence and find a logical out. I cannot wait to hear what Orel says. Maybe, he could talk to Lydia and Ms Patel with his idea?

So far, Jody is handling his sexual urges with fantasies and jacking off. He is not turning to online porn , subsituting fetishes for relief or visiting a gay glub that might risk disclosure. Young, in shape males with their bad, short haircuts near military bases are not hard to spot as being in the military, I would be most wary of the MP officer.

Graves thinks he is charge and without a challenge to his rule in his little fiefdom By his deal with West, he has given surveillance over to the resistance. The capture of Enrico and Ned will be known and Graves will also blurt it out to Peter to have leverage over him for now I suspect Graves is insuring his own demise. West will want to free the prisoners and kill him. Also, Madam Xue will realize the plane was lost and might visit or at least try to contact West to find the passengers....