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Granger will likely get little sexual rest on the frigate on his mission. He has Weston and Prince Genaro to be willing lovers.
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Thank you for asking. I think it would be helpful and focusing to name the chapter. I valued learning about the Ksingis and the depth of their character and beliefs. They are dedicated warriors but not blood thirsty. They respect life. The Dimalis overstepped by taking the princess and now they are losing the battle Rezak underestimated his adversary and l=worried about what he thought were greater threats. He will be pushed to send aid to the Eastern front. This disaster will be used by him to start the overthrow of the Emperor and his upcoming expected rule. But will he be betrayed by Temogam?
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Will Riley and Kieran become more sexually active with Riley only giving Kieran blow jobs? What might spur them to be more intimate? Will an increasing sense of danger or worry motivate them to look inward
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darn it--Cochran rtan away, but Nick stopped him from possibly hurting a young skater boynhe was eying, rick and Adam are having a fun sex life and not letting the killer ruin their relationship. Rick explained how bad Cochran was was and Wendy and the two boys are going away for a few days to be safe. I can see Mardi Grs will be a focal point to look for Cochran
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How to enable Tabby to see he is needed throughout the year? Can some one else talk to Tabby? Can he find a new project that needs him? Can they finally make love and become more romantically connected? Does Tabby realize if he leaves, he cannot come back to what he has built? The farm and house will be given to the cat shelter.
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Granger is ever the diplomat and sexual counselor. He demands honesty and speaks candidly and looks for ways to make things work for the people he cares about. He knew he had a complicated romantic relationship with 2 women and two men. He set Elizabath straight, so she saw him as an ally and eased Cavendish's and Carmella's concerns. They are going to have a foursome. This takes them in new levels of sexual playfulness. George and the others will have good memories, I expect and will be more generous and supportive to each other in private and in public
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Kieran has gotten into a new stability--He is handling his job. Miller, the policeman, is watching him. Lee had great needs and wanted KIeran to need/use him. He offered Kieran his ass and Kieran fucked him He had a comfortable family life with two guys. He showed he needed Riley and enjoyed kissing him Ben gave him a new Addidas jacket. It was his new uniform and proved Ben owned him Now, Ben thought Kieran would be challenged by outside rivals Is Kieran smart and skilled enough to win over his attackers?
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Will is aware and is setting boundaries. He only wants Travis and just told him that. He separated from Finn and Carlo. But, Travis like Kendo and is begiining to want more time with him. He cannot tell Will about his increasing appreciation for Kendro. I see trouble ahead, Kendra wants him.
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I hope Tabby realizes he can make a home here and not on the road with a willing, loving partner and become more than he is now alone. Alvin and Tabby need to talk. They need each other. Right now Alvin is the one who is feeling more distressed.
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If Luke wanted Lyn to see him sucking Brad off, who is to say he will not do it again showing off their behavior to others ? Lyn would be wise to not get entangled in this mess. He might accept Bella's view that she knows about Brad and will give him a firm, guiding hand.
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Prepare to be surprised. 19 year old Claus meets his gym crush Julian and invites him over for a creative costumed holiday BDSM experience that awakens, tests and drives him to his limits. You will understand what motivates them and what they think and feel undergoing extreme physical demands and sexual challenges. Julian teaches his willing student Claus. See how well Claus responds and if they both feel fulfilled and pleased when it is over.
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The BDSM session ended. Claus was finally fuck by Santa who enabled Claus to have one last soul pulling orgasm. "You’re perfect, Rudolph. Everything I knew you could be," Santa murmured, his hand cupping the silenced, gagged jaw with a proprietary tenderness. "Now, you know what you are capable off. Now, you can rest." Claus took a few days to recover and met some friends in the school cafeteria before the start of the Christmas break. He was wearing the antlers Julien, no longer in a Santa costume, asked to join the group. Claus and he worked well together and maybe they would continue to do so. I saw and understood how two people assume roles and follow through a serious BDSM session demanding the most physically possible showing respect and finding pleasure in giving and demanding their all.
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They need to make love--real love Tabby needs a better reason than he has as a celibate male to stay
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I feel the tension, Kieran expects Ben to push and test him and it should hurt. Kieran stood up for Riley and said no to Ben wanting him gone. He will keep Riley. Does not Ben see Kieran needs others to help him? I am thinking Ben is going to get the visibility he does not want and maybe police notice if Kieran is roughed up.
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OMG--He was totally possessed, weighed down and driven beyond what he thought were his limits. His reindeer costume with leather and metal constraints served to dominate and test him. Santa knew what to do and say to master, entice and drive Claus who now has a throat and stomach full of Santa's cum after he painfully released more cum than he thought he could. Claus is at the mercy of Sants and Santa has more in line for him soon. Talk about being in control in a bdsm experience that surprised and went beyond what Claus expected ! Santa has a plan and is carrying it out with skill.
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I think it would be unproductive and unpleasant to try to figure out or investigate in any way Bellas's history and what she is hiding. She would not like hearing of someone checking on her. Lyn could have resources to check out Bella's background. I hope Alexander tells Lyn to not pursue Bella's and Brad's stories
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Bella changed the calculus entirely for Lyn. She suggested she knows about Brad and he knows her secrets that needed to be protected and sealed from revealing by marriage She is going into the marriage with open eyes. She knows what Brad needs. “Someone to take the lead, to be in charge, all that. Someone to encourage him so he doesn’t end up spiraling into doubt. I am that someone." Brad did not add anything else to the conversation. Bella was called away. Lyn is going to need to have a helpful conversation with Alexander. He needs his explanation of what his Bella conversation meant to him. I hope they can move on and work on their relationship.
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Darn it--Nick should not be playing amateur detective following Cochran. He may be in trouble and Cochran may realize he is being watched by a kid. A trap could be laid by Cochran to catch who next shows up. Rick should be wary when he reaches Nick. I hope he called Helen for back-up. Cochran seems to like crowds. Maybe, he is looking for his next hvictim.
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Showing that scene from American Pie was so mind blowing funny. He was told he could fuck an apple pie to be able to know how he could feel it was like to be intimate with a woman. He misunderstood what was a sensual metaphor for reality. He drove his dick into an apple pie and was embarrassed when he was discovered. This instance an apple pie became an aphrodisiac and catalyst the enabled Avin and Tabby to take the next sexual steps and cross a limiting barrier. It was in essence the fulfilling of a contract. Now, they can let male nature and emotional needs blossom.
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Alvin really needed Brian as his oracle consultant for three reasons. The pie recipe he read was woefully incomplete so he needed his baking advice. Brian also gave him a much better read on Tabby so they can better relate over the long haul. Finally, Brian will better translate helpfully Alvin to his community peers so he will be more fully understood and accepted Their romance evolved not as expected. They got naked and ready to let go for a quick coupling. Alvin was pushed back against the counter with his legs wrapped around Tabby. Tabby was to be the top entering him right in the kitchen. But, Alvin asked that instead begin a real sexual relationship in bed . So, they moved into the bed and spooned so very close to each other . Tabby gave a Alvin a sweet orgasm by his hand and Alivin helped Tabby. The bed became sticky and they have more to do. Will they complete their romantic sexual union in the morning? They had lots to do and say. They are on the right track.
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Kieran endured his arrest and 12 hour ordeal. The police were certain he killed Big Paul but could not prove it, Kieran is even more a marked man to them. They will get him if he makes a mistake, It is assumed he ruled his area. But, the police have not realized that Ben was the real boss and killer. His killing power was known to the people. Kieran thought Ben brutally killed Big Paul to clear any opposition to him. Ben ruled and Kieran realized it. The chains around him were tightening But to those around Kieran ...." He was powerful. He was the undisputed King of Cradle Grove."
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The Alpha Who Smelled Too Good
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Alpha Who Smelled Too Good
Finally, the three are going to make love. They need to do this to get beyond the veil. Theo has resisted. He thinks the two humans cannot stand up to his sexual power. The two humans want to have sex with Theo. Finally, he cannot say no and they are going to share a bed.- 41 comments
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You are saying Ben is just a distraction! This must portend a shakeup in the hierarchy and a new direction, if Ben is a side issue. I am looking forward how you move this story ahead with what you call the main event.
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Are we seeing that Kieran choosing Riley and kissing him will lead to his eventual downfall with a new boss taking over after he is killed? Ben will say he made his choices and the consequences are his alone. Am I too pessimistic?
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Now, things are getting a lot clearer, Alivin understands the garden in a new light from his designer's perspective and he is stunned He thinks it is inattentional and brilliantly designed and Tabby McCormick is the wise, skilled designer. The garden is not chaos. He sees how magnificent it is. He tells Tabby what he thinks and Tabby is overwhelmed by his insights. They agree a spot needs more blue--some lobelia. It is a wonderful collaboration. Alvin figures out he is a McCormick and asks about Tabby's living arrangements. He sleeps in the hammock and sometimes the shed--the artist studio now. Alvin asks him to move into the house and use the couch or share his bed. Tabby said he is not ready for that but negotiates a home cooked vegetarian meal from him with granny's apple pie as desert. He will pick the tomatoes and mushrooms. Alvin can easily make the pasta but is stumped by the apple pie request. He is going to search through granny's papers for a pie recipe. I bet the meal will bring them closer together. The apple pie Alvin makes might need refinement and Tabby should be forgiving. It will be time to talk and find more common ground.
