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I am betting there is a book two. It would be so cruel to let them think they beat the bastards and destroyed the game only to find out it restarts
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Was Marc or Blue ordered to give Tim money or did he do it on his own? Tim existence or livelihood is very fragile right now. Did only Marc care? If the Director owns Maya's admission file, the Director is a school administrator? Can that person be discovered? Can rumors start about that person having sex with a student to ruin their career?
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I did not realize Tim was 18. The police recognized the situation as a domestic dispute. A willing lawyer would help Tim sue on charges he thinks applies, if the father has money and might even settle to not face public awareness
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King John's weakness lay evident. His fleet to fight off the French and an invasion was destroyed by intense storms. The nation is vulnerable. Lords speak of treason. Kaylen and Ronan and Tomas will be tested. The upcoming fights are going to be defining and hard fought.Will they survive?
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The Herald tested Fenn to see if he would help hurt his former lover. Fenn was surprised Now, he tied Fenn up for their lovemaking play, The Herald got him to accept that the vines would be as tight as before. More bruises will result. Fenn's manipulation continues. He is acting like a battered spouse/partner.
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Tim’s eyes, red-rimmed but clear, met his. “We’re going to find the people who did this,” he said, his voice low and steady. “And we’re going to burn their whole game down.” Tim's resolve and new focus will upset the game. He has nothing to lose Later, he can sue his father for support and humiliate him publicly.
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This is confusing. Two 17year olds resulted from the swap and one is a zombie like eternal. How will this work out in practice? Two high school students in one house? Three upset girls who hate Charlie? Will Ellis leave Charlie and Taine and Tyler alone?
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Why zombies? I hope you do not see Taine, Charlie or Tyler to be made into zombies by Ellis !
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Things are going too fast--no time to release hormones joyously Tyler won his match as he expected. They shared a naked shower--so hot--mmmm-- with more fun intended to be happening later. Their dinner was perfect. They told each other they loved each other. But, then Taine's phone message told him he needed to go to Warwick Hospital. Is the 73 year old body failing? Ellis had to step in and ruin their moment and his life What will happen to Taine and Charlie? Will Taine be given the chance to take back his old body or left to feel guilty he lost the chance? How will Tyler cope? We just have 2 chapters to go. What kind of trade can be made?
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Pride goeth before the fall The Herald overstepped and had to lose public support for whipping a war hero Yarima and Oretski saw the whipping and could not believe what happened. Fenn help make the whipping possible. They want to know the real reason it happened. They will learn of the Herald's action to seduce Fenn and anger Ain. This soap opera tale shows great weakness in the country's leadership. Orinovo can throw off their attackers because this country will be torn apart by dissention. Ain will not be helping his country since he is in jail.
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This was very painful to read What a cruel, shocking and absolute disaster that befell these pieces and rocked the high school. These guys were punished in the most underserving, world turned upside down ways. They are going to be psychologically impaired losr They need to rethink their plans and methods. But, will they be able to turn things around ?
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Kitt needed that talk from Tom. He did need to feel a little less lost,
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Even to pay for their marriage and honeymoon? It would help them out.
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Sounds like Tyler should be selling his worn t-shirts, briefs and socks and maybe close up pics of his naked body and start an OnlyFans page.
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Working together, the three persevered and took it all in stride and finally made it through the veil However, they only see a barren land. Theo remembers the poem. He needs to find the Wisdom Tree. Theo will lead the i other two to find their goal and hopefully find out about the missing pack Do they still need to have real sex soon? The next chapter should be revealing.
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Dear author-do you want his worn, masculine smelling t-shirt?
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On to seeing Tyler beat the Mangler...and having a good date with sex afterward? So much to enjoy, I hope. Will Taine meet Tyler's father soon and what will he say to Taine? Will he be as supportive and Taine's/Charlie's father was?
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Love the sexy, suggestive dancing--Are the plyers being given ideas? Now, will some of the pieces be forced to dirty dance in the lunch room to humiliate themselves as punishment?
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Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
akascrubber commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
If Martin has a title, do his kids get one? Does his former wife as a woman who divorced him before he assumed a title not get a title? Will Martin use his title on his official stationery, business cards and in formal legal proceedings? -
Moaning Myrtle lived as a ghost in a Hogwarts bathroom which had a secret passageway opened by speaking a exotic language--parseltoungue--to a secret chamber. Marc new a special way to flee the bathroom. I suspect the archivists know ways to move about the school that regular students do not. They can be ahead in the game with their superior knowledge.
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The Herald finally got what he wanted. He provoked Ain the burn him. Fenn was shocked and had a good reason to reject Ain. The Herald can continue to hurt Fenn during their sex play like he wants to do. Fenn continues to forgive him like a battered partner who accepts the pain as due to their own failing. Ain was taken out of the way by the guards to the dungeon. I expect he will remain there until needed to fight.
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Warden of the Woods
akascrubber commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in Warden of the Woods
The confessor finds flaws in John's testimony. He thinks John is colluding with the enemy elves. The logical punishment for a traitor is death by burning. But, John only spoke the truth. He is confused and very worried. Why had he returned , if he now faced death? His elvin captor had to know this would happen -
Two big surprises--Charlie's father clearly loves him and grows to like Tyler. He is not upset his son is gay. His father knows what he stands for and who are charlatans. Additionally, The debt is paid without any drama, Taine is free.
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Maybe there are hidden passage and mazes within the high school to help the archivists get around and spy on pieces ? The addition of two new freshman pieces shocks other pieces. This game keeps getting larger and more disturbing The scale of the game is more terrifying. Cameras are everywhere. They surveille their neighborhoods. Of course, this is a complete overwatch and must be planned out. So Marc and Chloe are archivists. They have to be watched. It can be assumed there are others after the freshman had a food fight. We have a terrible new variable. Tim and Ben kissed and it opened hidden feelings. Now, will this hurt Justin? No plans were talked about next.
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Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
akascrubber commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Gay Bar and a Pool
Martin and crew are moving along in finding basic staff and likely new space for their umbrella company. Simon and Rick, as a happy gay s couple, took him out to eating and drinking spaces, Martin was not sure he was gay. Simon and Rick are in the lookout for a gay man for Martin. At one gay place, Martin ran into his son who told him he was gay and Ben introduced him to his gay date. All five went back to Martin's place to eat, drink and swim. They all stayed over and slept. Only Martin slept alone and did not have sex. Marin's wealth and business operations are still not fully disclosed. I expect his son, Ben, will be in his corner when he learns about the "new" Martin.- 36 comments
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