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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Helen and Rick met Shane, the injured prostitute beat up by Jarvis, in his hospital room. They offered to help him, but he was resistant and feared retaliation by Jarvis who said he had friends in high places. Shane was told by who he thought were two cops who visited him earlier that he was in trouble. Helen assured him he was not. Rick sat next to Shane and made the pitch that they could help him and with his testimony and one from another young man , then Jarvis could be put away. Shane agreed at the end to help. He also is going to need protection. Helen is going to be checking out who was getting into her case. It was troubling.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    OMG--Brian and Alex fought the snow, broke away from their attackers with a car ride from Kyle and eventually ended up in an Ottawa bus station finding the lost youth who was fleeing to Toronto. But, as Alex went after him, two menacing hulks appeared on the opposite p[latform looking for Julian Lawson. They were going after the target. What can Alex do? Julian sees the evil men and is scared. Time for some luck and a distraction?
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Note: It seems the plans Silas announced earlier---in the Prologue--have changed. Hesston was to have a natural looking death. The Order would not be connected. The funeral would be used to identify the new youthful conservative party leader. Prologue--"Silas walked to the phone, his gaze distant, already orchestrating the logistics. "Start drawing up the guest list and the security manifest. I will ensure the death is quiet, definitive, and seemingly natural. The Lion of Winter falls quickly, clearing the path for the new Conservative champion."
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    OMG--The brutality and direct kills so efficiently done revealing it was an assassination was shocking, This terrible act will have a powerful impact on the political leadership, the media and the public. The Order has become a terrorist organization. The two RCMP officers guarding Bob Hesston were quickly killed by men moving around the fishing boat. Bob Hesston stood tall and faced his killers as he was shot. He was confident and did not back down. He was a true hero This attacked was meant to convey a message-"The timing on the heels of his public defense of Prime Minister Carter. The messaging is clear, Director. This is retaliation. It has all the hallmarks of a reprisal execution. The objective is to terrorize the political spectrum into compliance with the Order's agenda." Andrew is directing the investigation. It was clear the assassins had military-like skills and possible experience. It will be a matter to be included in the ongoing CSIS analysis The government's political leadership was secured and protected assuming danger is still possible. Will was taken to his official residence and went to the three boys. He moved close to Tommy and sensitively and compassionately told Tommy that his grandfather had died. Jacob supported Tommy. All three boys are a solid team that will support each other. Will was a perfect healer
  5. Calm before the storm? Noah and Shi are getting closer and they like it.
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Sarah McDermot headed the Father's recovery operation to find and keep track of Ned Sanderson who was born as Ed Rawlins. "The threat is not the man; it is the unsecured vulnerability. Operation: CROWN FALL is green." Ned will be a pawn to threaten and force Will to do what the Father or Silas orders. I assume he will be directed to resign as the title of the operation suggests. "Ned felt the familiar, private shield snap into place. He liked his small life. He knew he was adopted, knew his birth parents had vanished, and he embraced the freedom of anonymity. He had no history, no burdens, and no grand expectations. He was Ned Sanderson, and that was all he needed to be." Ned saw the news about the new PM, Will Carter. He was bored and did not react. He may not know the assumption that by some others assume that he was the son of Will Carter nor have any reason to think anyone would be looking for him. He will not be on the lookout for threats or kidnapping efforts. Sarah was a traitor to Will Carter and the current government and is hide Ned's data from Will and violate her duty in the CSIS threat analysis. If Andrew and CSIS find Ned and she learns about it, then she could alert Silas who could order Ned kidnapped
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    I hope Will's select team looks at those whom are connected to Will and his office. Outside Will's inner circle hides a threat who could find a key flaw in Will's armor that could be revealed at a critical time, McLeod, S.E., BG Dr: Status: PCO Chief Medical Officer/Task Force Authorization lays in wait to research the vulnerabilities of Will and his key staff. If McLeod can gain access to the therapist's files who knows about Will's and Jacob's mental health problems, the situation could turn disastrous.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    The violence and destruction caused by the several men and their machines has to be noticed at some point by the local police and/or the RCMP. It could be hard to prevent others from noticing rooming suspicious vehicles and a menacing acting fake police car . Agridyne has overstepped and, yet, is not finished aggressively going after Alex and Brian, I believe. The massive scale of the assaults so far must be beyond the ability of local police forces who might need soon to call for more help
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    OMG--Agridyne has committed extra forces and vehicles to do Alex and Brian in as they left the school. The car chase was scary, brutal, thrilling and ultimately a disaster for their car. They were rammed and pushed deep in the woods. Brian was forced to drive it into a snow bank so they could escape, They are now on foot with the enemy looking for them. This is Brian's territory and he must be able to find their way to a safe place eventually if they are not discovered. The enemy still thinks Brian is the son of the fleeing scientist.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Will's formal PM office is up and running ready to face the pressures. Hooray! His inner staff held no moles. Peter is taking charge of the PM's home kitchen and has endured talking to Julien and being leered by him. No worries so far. But the highlight of the day was the new hockey/ice rink. Matt brought ground staff and volunteers together to create a solid workable rink that all could appreciate. The three boys will be able to play and improve their skills.
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    Change cars Alex and hide your fast car, please. You have been warned
  12. Finally, the wicked witch, Cassandra, is dead Theo, Vince and Jack are safe. They are given short term housing by Ryder's pack Now what do the three do? Mate? Fight? Figure out where to go next?
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    I can see an extremist American group mistakenly believe that a right wing-controlled Canada would be a welcomed partner as a new state. But, this is a fantasy in real life. Can a right-wing , fundamentalist, Protestant Canadian group capture and keep hold of the national government without splitting the country apart? Some Provinces would rebel. The French speaking and nominally Catholic parts would most clearly rebel. would they not? Trump joked to two PM's as a way of unsettling them around potential tariff talks. He was trolling Canada like he trolled wanting Greenland as a new state. It would be impossible/impractical to happen in my view. He has done nothing to politically make it happen and he has been active on the international side. He only solidified opposition within Canada and Greenland to his desire for them to be US States. Canada seems to be looking elsewhere for tariff and trade help and not being held back by having to rely on the US. Canada as it now votes would be a heavily Democratic like country if it became a state. Trump would find at least the Republicans in Congress opposed to his expansion ideas which would cede power to its liberal opponents in Congress..
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Rick has some undisclosed trauma in his background giving him nightmares and a reluctance to move in with Adam. They seem very compatible, I think Rick needs to realize he is seeing or finding parts of a puzzle or puzzles. Could that 45 year old man who seemed familiar be following him? Why? On the way to the hospital, the cute guy who liked him is missing from his cafe work. Rick file that away in your memory. Keep awaiting for connections to be appearing. Is there trouble coming preventing getting proof to put the pimp away?
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    I am sure Brian will succeed with Alex after they save the boy and get the formula. It just needs to be publicly exposed so the company cannot use it to blackmail growers David, undercover RCMP agent, decided to help Alex and Brian with key information in order to rid his area of the corporate agents. The enemy of my enemy is my friend. The boy they want is still in school. His older relative has dropped out of school. Alex and Brian needs be careful and not be found by the Harvest Guard.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    The Good News-- Andrew and his core team know about the evil they oppose in general terms and knew they will use violence and kill their opponents "Their objective is clear: to destabilize the Canadian government through calculated violence and political assassination to facilitate a closer alignment with a Right-Wing American executive. In essence, achieving the '51st State Deal' by destroying Canadian sovereignty and moral authority from within. " CSIS also has a decent sense of the components of the leadership of the Father's operation, including have a military head element. They also reported that CSIS has a mole. The Bad News Two of the Father's moles were in the room hearing the CSIS analysis, including the long time mole, Sarah. They can alert Silas to counter any CSIS moves They also heard the following: The effort to find Rawlins is going nowhere and more effort needs to be made to find him. Also , a negotiator is going to meet with the compound leadership. Is the leader still so injured he cannot take part. Is the CSIS agent inside still alive? Andrew needs to be careful. Silas must think he is the master of all he commands to use a naval analogy.
  17. Brad is a user and Lyn is his doormat. Lyn does his homework in subjects not related to his regular studies. Alexander calls Lyn on it. Alexander cautioned Lyn...."Don’t worry; Bradley will never give up on being friends with you. At least for as long as you shoulder his entire academic endeavor while he gets to do what he calls ‘all the fun stuff’.” Lyn misses realizing Alexander and Brad competing for him and seeing who wins one small step at a time.
  18. Solid concept, good characters--looks like this will be finished and be impressive
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Brian took Alex to his home and lair in the basement. He proceeded to strip himself and Alex and taken then down to the floor and helped to give each other handjobs, Alex was mesmerized by Brian, his hot naked body, his kisses and his powerful sexual appeal. Brian loved everything he saw about Aklex and was very impressed by his large cock. This was all new and so exciting for Alex. They recovered and got dressed. Alex wore some of Brian's clothes. Brian said now they are really boyfriends. I am sure they will do more later. Alex called his father and was told the team after him and Brian and the hidden boy are assassins who are going to kill, not recover. Alex will get more equipment soon from the quartermaster. Alex needs to find the boy and save his life. Then what does he do? Kenny came into the basement angry at the violence and bad guys chasing Alex and Brian. He did simmer down what Brian told him what they sexually did--embarrassing Alex. Can Kenny help them find the hidden boy?
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    There are some possible missteps or weaknesses by the Father's and Silas's plans that might help Andrew sees problems and find evidence of a greater and currently as yet unbelievable in scope conspiracy. As book one ended, only Sarah was considered and targeted for investigation as a possible mole. If she is revealed as the mole, what will they do with her? The late Jane who was killed in Louisiana transmitted information about the electronic link used by the Father's parents/relative. Information from this source might give insight into the Father or Silas and what is going on. Silas is going to have Bob Hesston killed. If the killing is in any way suspicious and Andrew or perhaps West investigates, then the true, cruel, un-Canadian like seriousness of the attack the government and Will are facing might become more evident. Also as book one ended the Canadian Army was going to attack the compound. Will any result of this attack as it filters through the military and its command structure suggest a problem evolving with the new General commanding the capital area? A military assist to support an opposition government side does not even seem as expected or credible at this time. Killing is going to be seen as a choice by the Father's people. They are ultimately fanatics. It is going to be initially unconceivable that any opposition movement would be so cavalier moral unbound about killing a major political figure. Andrew has to accept he is facing a vicious, the ends justify the means force/movement that is larger in scale than expected.. Jane was killed by them so more killing would be easy. The people in the compound killed the attacking RCMP.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    So it begins. The level of planning to take over the government is extraordinary. At this point I cannot expect Will or Andrew to conceive of how extensive and serious the threat to Will's tenure as PM and how religious zealots will seek to control the people. At least the traitors have been identified for the readers. Three key people have been placed in critical positions to destroy Will. Moles are now connected to the PM's office, CSIS and the area military. They are committed to act to see Wil Carter goes down, They want a Christian Nationalist government, This end goal might well shock the Canadian people when it is made known.
  22. akascrubber

    Prologue

    The Order's commentator on CBC defined the situation in his eyes....."No, the problem isn't William Carter. The problem is his party. The Liberal Party committed political suicide to support one man's ambition...." Meanwhile, Silas will insure Bob Heston dies supposedly naturally, A new Conservative Party leader will rise and be attuned to the Order. Silas also worked so that the new Commanding General of the Army in the Capital region is an Order man. How soon will Andrew and Will realize how dangerous their situation is? Scary--very scary
  23. akascrubber

    Preston Brooks

    Interesting, complicated issues The one situation that could be the most dangerous is the upcoming meeting the Serbian gangster wants with Brad. He said that the some unspecified problem is terribly dangerous. Brad will meet him with Jake providing protection. is dangerous. So, we await what Brad learns and considers what to do next. On another matter, Will is playing a therapist with a straight student who has to attend a campus LGBT meeting as punishment for gay bashing, I think Will is on track to have oral sex with the supposedly straight guy.
  24. Noah is surprised to learn he is worth billion since his recently deceased grandmother left her all her money. She hated his mother and ignored her and his Uncle Mark in their will. These two have shown up hoping Noah would give them some of his money His other grandmother told him this story Then, Noah was again surprised to learn these grandparents were also worth billions, He is going to need family counselling and wise financial management advice. Life has gotten more complicated for Noah.
  25. George is surrounded by family, friends and acquaintances at Brentwood, but feels lonely. Happily, Calvert arrived and they coupled helping uplift George's spirits. George is very selfless helping others and not feeling contented. My Gosh, he willingly gave Davina 2000 ponds to pay off her gambling debts. He feels bound to stay in country through August to cover for the birth of his and Caroline's supposed child. I think he needs an important short-term assignment to give purpose to his life. Peace must mean there are no ships needing him to command for now.
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