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Hmm--so the coyote --Enrico--will make the wolf seem to be a much smaller being, a chihuahua. Good!
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Ok--The title of the story is "Coyote vs the Water Wolf " So, our author has signaled that the two sides will tussle and compete and maybe meet face to face. If the water wolf is on top of his game, he may quickly realize who Alex and his father are. He may not want to get on the bad side of the father. We will see!
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The Right Kind of Pain
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Right Kind of Pain
I was surprised to learn that Alexander said he had previously had anal sex in the past--with a woman Alexander seemed to be carefully and sensitively trying to prepare Lyn for enjoyable anal sex. He knew what to do to Lyn. Lyn's encouragement and even demands requesting for Alexander to be more aggressive and less hesitant surprised him. Lyn had made up his mind to be fucked and he wanted to be fucked now. Alexander has a long and thick cock and he was aware he could hurt Lyn if he was not careful. Well, Alexander tried his best to prepare Lyn and used lots of lube. Lyn was stunned at the true joy Alexander gave him as he orgasmed inside him. Lyn wanted to keep it inside himself which surprised Alexander. Lyn was cautioned that his ass will hurt for a few days. This was unexpected new to Lyn.. I hope this tenderness will not be obvious to others and cause problems. -
The movie " Cruising" was about a serial killer targeting gay men in New York City. The deaths were violent. Is this plot turning into a serial killer also targeting gay men in Australia? "Cruising is a 1980 crime thriller written and directed by William Friedkin, and starring Al Pacino, Paul Sorvino and Karen Allen. It is loosely based on the novel by The New York Times reporter Gerald Walker about a serial killer targeting gay men, particularly the men associated with the leather scene in the late 1970s. The title is a double entendre, for "cruising" can describe both police officers on patrol and men who are cruising for sex. It was an international co-production between West Germany and the United States. Poorly received by critics when released, Cruising performed moderately at the box office. Pacino subsequently called the film "exploitative". The shooting and promotion were dogged by gay rights protesters who believed that the film stigmatized them. The film's open-ended finale was criticized by Robin Wood and Bill Krohn as further complicating what they felt were the director's incoherent changes to the rough cut and synopsis, as well as other production issues"
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Sergeant MacIntyre became the Gary Powers of the Order. When Powers and his U2 was shot down over Russia he spilled his guts and he knew everything. After wards the US set up specially compartmented intelligence and divided key data into separated closed out fields, Sergeant MacIntyre blew the conspiracy wide open and unmasked Abernathy, the General, the new huge drone threat and the plans that would lead to the takeover of the government. It was shocking and totally unexpected, Andrew began to plan and devise solutions. But, Sarah, the mole, was in the critical meeting. She heard what Andrew wants to happen without all the details. She was given the task to find and help secure Ed Rawlins This is beginning to look like Andrew will lead a colossal failure. Sarah will inform Abernathy of the plans. He will thwart Andrew. She will find Ed, now Ned, and turn him over to the Order to control Will and force him to resign. It could happen fast. Andrew at the end of the last book thought Sarah was likely a mole. Is he misleading her now and keeping watch on her or is he forgetting she might be a mole? This is scary......
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Alex and crew now know a well-trained group of military forces are operating nearby. They are hidden for now. Brian has confessed that CSIS blackmailed him to get them to this location. They do not know why the enemy military forces are here and what their mission is. Alex had called his father earlier and a vehicle was just airdropped to them. I assume the vehicle is intended to help them escape. But, the airdrop was easily seen by the enemy forces who should be racing to the scene of the drop. I bet they find the boys who will need time to get the vehicle out of the water and capture them. Will they be killed or taken as prisoner to the dam to be interrogated?
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The Right Kind of Pain
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Right Kind of Pain
A joyous perfect fucking for Lyn and Alexander. What a graphic and exciting time.- 38 comments
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Rick viewed the file and the pic of Alexis, It rocked him badly. The injuries were similar to those of Martin, it appears. Rick threw up. He needs to come clean with Helen. Is someone targeting him and males close to him? What should Rick do now? He needs to be very observant as a minimum.
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Alex said Brian led them into a live op. He asked Brian how they could get away. I assume the truth is more troubling than Alex expects. Are the people arriving shortly part of the force that attacked the dam or Canadian military/CSIS forces trying to stop those who took over the dam? The timing here seems out of line? Did someone know about the attack before it happened?
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Faith, Forgiveness and The Kiss of Eternal Drama
akascrubber commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Faith, Forgiveness and The Kiss of Eternal Drama
Father Matthew wisely counseled Sky and gave him peace and coinviction. He is looking ahead more confidently--and going to mass next week. His mother was advised Sky was fine and not damned to hell. Looking forward to finding out how Ryan and Sky related now and hopefully become more honest. -
"Audacity, more audacity, always audacity." Sounds like something a winning, lucky general of Napolean would say before a battle I do hope and pray Will is going to win--for the sake of the country
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So, the sidelined for now lawyer or a new Order connected lawyer might push for access to the RCMP prisoner and upset Andrew's plans to keep him isolated and in despair. There must be time limits on keeping a lawyer away or at least the lawyer could get a court order granting access right now. Andrew could be vulnerable for his actions hiding the prisoner away.
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Brilliant move Andrew Carter--You nailed Sergeant MacIntyre , the formerly secret pedophile. He knows he is in serious trouble. His lawyer refused to represent him. His only choice is to cooperate with Andrew Carter and tell him all he knows about the Order. Andrew needs to make sure this man stays alive. Andrew's work will begin to get harder as he tries to avoid any military entanglements,
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It will still be fascinating and great fun to read how you carry out this story. The enemy is despicable and unworthy and is going to cause great anxiety. They deserve to get all the punishment you devise. Plus, I expect you to show us heroes to arise to make a different.
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Wow--The four boys are now in a cabin near Brisay Dam where the terrorist plot is unfolding. They are currently blissfully ignorant of the danger. Brian must have signed the CSIS agreement and is under their control. He is nervous about his deception and duty. He has to have an honest talk with Alex that will redefine their relationship. Alex is misreading almost all the signs. The one he gets right is the concern about the darkened helicopter approaching the dam. Things are going to change and there will be surprises and challenges. I cannot wait to see how this drama unfolds. Are the 4 going to be asked to try to stop the terrorists? It is preposterous to even consider this option.
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Wolf commands too much of the Canadian and US power supply from this point in this dam Wolf states....“This line is the only comms link that functions. It goes directly to my chosen contact—the Canadian Minister of Public Safety, and the U.S. Secretary of Energy. They will be waking up to a ransom demand for the complete release of all political prisoners held by both nations, and the immediate dismantling of five specific intelligence programs, all to be executed within twelve hours.” The sounds like a plot from a Die Hard movie that made outrageous, impossible to be met demands which was actually a ruse and misdirection since the enemy did not care about its demands and actually was intent on stealing a huge fortune. The enemy only wanted to throw the government of the scent and get away while it was worried about the demands. Needless to say, the potential energy disruption will be taken seriously and options will be composed even if the terrorists are making insane demands.
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The military will not go after the "fictional" Order. The General has shown his true colors to Andrew who is going to look after his connection now to the Order in due course. Andrew is on guard, and the General knows he is not intimidated. I expect the General will cause trouble and we will see fireworks. Is this actually an intentional setup to sideline Andrew? We were told in the introduction..."But when Andrew makes a bloody sacrifice, stepping across the line to save his family, a trap is sprung. Andrew descends into a paranoid war for his mind...." This is going to get even more intense and momentous.
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Some Answers and More Questions
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Some Answers and More Questions
Theo thinks he only needs Vince and Jack to translate the runes and then he will no longer need them. He thinks he can avoid sex with them. He is a tough Alpha who has very rough sex which he thinks will not be possible with puny himans. Jack, especially, is too small and frail to be able to handle his extra large cock and very strong sex drive. But, interestingly, he finds himself attracted to Jack and this upsets him Maybe, Theo will find out when reading the runes that he needs to have sex with the two and needs them to help bring about his own pack. Vince and Jack will realize they need to be sexual mates with Theo for their own good. One more puzzle to solve. Danny visited Vince. He wants to know who told him and his parents he would be a guardian. We will find out in the next chapter -
It sounds like Joel will not have a choice to fight Jaxton and his crew. Joel was told this was not over. With three against one and the time and place decided by his enemies, the odds are that Joel will be badly banged up. I hope others might see any fight and give Joel an alibi and can get him help.
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Brian heard a scary, all-encompassing prediction from a total stranger he never thought possible in his small town world. "Carter folded his hands, his expression one of almost genuine sorrow. “This isn't about putting Alex in jail, Brian. It's about controlling him. And you are the only leash strong enough to hold the Coyote. You’re going to do this because it is the only way you will ever see Alex again. If you sign, your friends are safe. Your family is secure. Your charges vanish. If you refuse, I assure you, you will walk out of here clean, but by the end of the week, you will be utterly alone in this world." Brian resists forcibly Andrew Carter's cruel demands. He cannot betray Alex and it is clear to him right now. If he agrees and signs on the dotted line, his future is no longer seeking to be a great pastry chef and formidable hockey goalie, but to be a secret leash to control his Alex and bring down the business of Alex's father. He will deeply hurt Alex and could lose him. We will find out what Brian decides in Book Two.
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What a challenging story with twists and turns and surprises with Alex under orders from his father is on the hunt in his new high school for an elusive student who has a valuable formula who is fleeing a huge corporation that wants its formula back and still kept secret. Alex meets Brian, a hockey goalie and pastry chef, in class and they become romantically involved. All this emotional connection is new and unnerving to Alex who is normally a focused technician. They work together with friends to solve the puzzle Alex faces. Some very evil and brutal people with no limits enter the picture to retrieve the formula and threaten those they face. Do not expect an easy ride for the two young men who you will grow to like.
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Seeing Alexis and finding his upper body bear with multiple stab wounds unnerved Rick and Helen his partner. She saved him from the streets Finding his body far into the harbor was luck. He could have been lost easily. Now, they will try to find out what happened. Rick noticed a guy in the crowd. He will keep that image. Helen cautioned him about false images that lead nowhere. Rick went to dinner with Adam, but was not good company, He brooded over the death of Alexis. Rick told Adam about his concern and Adam was understanding and he need to process the killing. They still are reviewing their potential longer-term relationship. I am encouraged to hear they intend to have rewarding sex later.
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Oh My--Andrew Carter makes a unexpectedly great bad guy Brian can sense the charges made against his friends are excessive and likely creatively fraudulent. It will take him time he really does not have to go beyond his foul mouth statement and realize the weight of CSIS is focused on him and his new mission. It will not give up protecting Canada from its adversaries. Andrew will expect such a hurtful rebuff from a teenager in love after a traumatic experience. He is skilled and knows the stages of grief that Brian is going through. But, Brian will slowly see that he has no choice if he wants to save his family and friends. What an unexpected ending, Much more to follow......
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The attack was thoroughly devastating and brutally successful. Yuri , the prisoner, is dead. There is no proof to charge others. Andrew, West and Will do not know yet that the Order's hand-picked man in the military is now in charge and who is going to act in bad faith, How soon are they going to realize the depth and extent of the conspiracy they are now facing?
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Joel stood up for Lorianne who was dissed and knows his confrontation with the quarterback and two other football team members is not over. "All three of them had to be fuming and thinking of a way to get me back for something I didn't do." Even if he modifies his anger issues, he needs to be wary of the jocks. If they do fight later, Joel's traitor name will be reinforced if the football guys are kicked off the team.
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