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Wow--I am even more interested in find out how you resolve the Josh/Caleb duality in book 2. I know you will create another compelling story.
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Josh Quinn wakes up injured in a hospital bed from a serious car rash was no memory of his past. He begins to learn fragments of his life, but his full life remains encrypted. He gradually exhibits uncommon fighting skills and shows he has a brilliant mind beyond his years. He is fortunate to find a loving, supportive family to build a normal life and help him finish high school. What may seen a normal life tuns out not to be one. Josh is tested and only lowly learns who he is and what he faces. Read on and prepare to be fascinated by a substantial, exciting mystery story.
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Thank you for this story and he final chapter. You ended book one at a convenient breakpoint. Please keep book two in mind. You answered my main questions for now. What impressed me how good and decent the main characters were. I expected at least Walter to be the evil Dumbledore and he wasn't. He told Greg all he possibly could about Josh who was born by a single mother and artificial enhancements to create a brilliant, skilled sleeper agent. He was the 10th and last effort over the years and the only successful person. Josh was only to go undercover for about 90 days as Caleb and it is not known what will happen to him after90 days Greg agreed to keep what Walter told him secret from anyone else. Both he and Walter will monitor Josh. What they do not know is that Cerberus is also monitoring Josh or Caleb. His status is considered not active but pending executive review. Will Caleb be again targeted for killing or given a dangerous assignment? As for Josh he is being strengthen by the support of a loving family. He tells them he knows he has another side. Caleb and he is angry about the deaths of the people he knew. Caleb took over Josh and asked James if he would support him if he was a test tube, semi powerful superman and James said he, He was his brother no matter what. Josh is going to helped by his new family to live fully. But, Josh does not know about the possible 90 day limit and how he will adjust when he crosses the limit. So, we have key questions to answer and some reasons for others to monitor Josh. Josh does not know his real origin but Caleb does. I can see Josh can be destabilized by the 90 day time limit, a Cerberus intervention or a threat by a bad actor which will mobilize Caleb. How will Josh and Caleb eventually come to peace with each other? Can Josh be able to have a boyfriend with an honest relationship or will he scare guys off?
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So, they still tell each other they hate each other. But, they hard kissed and fucked again in the garage. They agreed to meet at Garret's grandfather's cabin for more sex. They cannot get enough of having sex with each other. Finn works through the pain of the rough sex. Both he and Garret have a terrible outlook on their lives. Their sex is the one addicting and brief rewarding action. Kyle goes to Garret's place. He learns Garret's knee has problems that mean he cannot get a knee replacement. He feels limited and stuck because he does not want to fail again like he did on the football field. He has a very negative attitude. Having sex with Finn is a brief thrill and is not--yet-therapeutic or aiding his burned-out hopes.
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Dyson seems to know more about Riley and Lee than simple knowledge, He knew their roles and where to pick them up without difficulty. I have not heard Kier talk with such specificity about Dyson's top men. He only was told Cuff who met them in the shortcut and is now part of the 4 man team who roughed up Lee and Riley, It appears the effort to anger and divert Dyson's attention away from Kier and his efforts by revealing some of his funds are being skimmed off by some of his men failed. Dyson did not mention the skimming. Did Cuff even tell him? Does Dyson have a spy or spies among Kier's people? Maybe, Matty's surveillance of Dyson's men drinking can reveal how Dyson knows about Kier and his court, among other key information. Kier needs to be able to keep his plans secret.
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I thought this would happen . Dyson would respond to the van attack by hurting one or more of his people when they were isolated Only Dyson fumbled. Lee and Riley banded together and did not turn in each other by using the knife he left for them They did get badly beated up They made is back to Kieran and he and Tez took care of them. Kieran was so proud that they stood up for him He will make Dyson pay. . "Heal. Tomorrow, we finish this." Matt watched Lee and Riley injured return to Kieran. He wanted to prove his worth to Kieran. Matt is going to were Dyson's men drink and listen for intel he could give Kieran I expect Dyson and Ben will be surprised tomorrow.
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Learning about Colt's songwriting experience and goal to connect with the music scene at Nashville is surprising. A counselor at his school could give him some useful advice on how to ease his intro into his career. Middle Tennessee State University at Nashville has a path for him. "Middle Tennessee State University (MTSU) offers robust recording education through its Recording Industry Department, part of the College of Media and Entertainment, with undergraduate majors in Audio Production, Commercial Songwriting, and Music Business, plus an MFA in Recording Arts & Technologies, focusing on hands-on experience, industry-standard equipment, and preparing students for careers in the Nashville music scene"
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Wow--so many things revealed Gavin knew about his brother and Joel and told him to not fuck him up Lorraine knew he was gay and wrongly thought Roy was his boyfriend Celia and Trace strongly backed him when mother wanted him gone Davin told him he loved him and Joel thought he was beginning to feel that way about Davin. He promised Davin he was not going anywhere. Davin felt very comfortable. " I know what living felt like. I could know myself now, I could forget ever having to learn how to lie."
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Zal has learned part of a dangerous puzzle. He heard snippets of a prophecy about the red comet and oblivion. He saw the death of all the seers and a faceless dead body. He did not realize they were killed to hide the prophecy and that something more powerful than the small faceless killed him Zal know FRenn was a traitor and now worried if Zdain was one, too. The others in their party were missing. He intends to go to Dimalos. Can his old friend Aden help him?
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I am encouraged that the top corrupt officials will be facing justice and Parliament soon Cooper still has a bull's eye on his head and Cocoran will have even more reasons to make him his next trophy. Corcoran must really hate losing his sexual fetishes and mementoes and want revenge by killing Coop. The crowds in Mardi Gras could give him the perfect cover to hide and target Coop. Just a wild idea--Could Corcoran be hiding in drag as his cousin?
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Wow--Three times--after hate talk--Yes, there will be more fucking and it will not be love making. They will be working out their many issues with sexual drama, pain and releases. Garret should take lube to his next session They cannot hide what they did. Kyle saw it quickly and said he was now in a rom-com disaster that will happen again. Lydia saw Finn and discovered they fucked. She warned Finn that Garret was a landmine so be strategic. I bet they will be animalistic and primal and not calculating assets and liabilities,' Danger ahead!
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What will Dyson do? Kill and torture the thieves. Then , after handling the thieves, he will do more. I see he might kill one or more of Kier's team when they are alone. For now, Kier and his team are riding high thinking the Wolf will only lash out at his own men. Riley is supremely happy because only he gets a blow job with his cum swallowed by Kier as a celebratory statement of praise and affection.
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If I drink a soft drink, I drink a Diet Pepsi. I cannot handle the sugar in a regular soft drink or I would have to take more insulin. I tend most often to drink iced tea or ice water which I started when living in the Mid West and South in the US.
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Josh needs a love interest now that he has saved the world and CIA.
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Thank you for the suggestion. I will look for Yorkshire Gold on my way to the grocery store next weekend. I searched on line and found a store that sells it i my metro area.
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I googled knee replacement waiting times in Canada In 2024...."The national median wait was around 57.5 weeks from referral to surgery, but varied significantly by province, with Ontario often seeing shorter waits (around 23.6 weeks) and provinces like Saskatchewan or PEI facing waits over a year."
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As for tea, I prefer Earl Grey or British Breakfast tea that I can get in the US I read that the Queen drank Earl Grey tea for her first cup in the morning.
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They fucked. I will accept your artistic license that they could couple with Finn unprepared and Garret inexperienced. They both liked it and repeated it and hated each other. I understand this will not be a one-night experience. I am going to be very interested in how they treat each other the next day. Their sexual efforts could turn out to be the right therapy to help them adjust to their lives. This is described as a "spicy contemporary romance."
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The two met and did not kill each other, they are attracted to Kier and not interested in each other. There will be no three ways. They now know they provide two different sexual functions exclusively. They are monogamous and have only Kier as a sexual partner. As was stated one is the wife and the other is the mistress. Kier is surprised to find that they met in his home and must have come to some sort of understanding and way to coexist. They cooperatively planned an important attack of the Wolf's van and key asset. I see Kier is Ben's creation or his type of Eliza Doolittle who might succeed or die in fierce battles while Ben lives on. Kier has fitfully and painfully grown into his role and now it is the survival of the fittest time. Beyond being a sociopath, Ben is still an enigma to me. What does he really want for or with Ben?
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Is it time for our author to tell us more about Ben--his history and personal background, any legal tangles, his mates, his real location, etc.
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They now have photo evidence that Corcoran targeted Alexis and Jimmy and has Brad, Nick and Adam in his sights. He is fixed on Rick. Clearly, Barrett brought Rick to this city to help his friend out. I bet Corcoran wanted to fuck and kill Rick.
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What passionate, fulfilling sex beautifully revealed. They could not get enough of each other. Just reading how they felt and were so excited takes me to a dreamlike, wishful state. Then they moved about and candidly talked. They grew to like each other even more. Would that these moments were not transitory ! They have to kiss and be romantic and fuck again before Hudson has to leave. Will Liam want to see him again or will it be too risky and reveal his gay side?
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Brutal honesty and lies can really hurt Brad told Lyn he knew Lyn and Alexander were fuck buddies Also, he was upset that during college Alexander told him that Lyn was really straight so Brad did not make a move on Lyn. Brad realized Alexander had an obsession on Lyn he could not admit. Alexander agreed with Brad and Len was shocked and disturbed Suddendly, Bella entered the room expressing her hurt over Brad's sexual actions. Brad reacted by punching Lyn for telling her. But, It was not Lyn, Luke spoke up and said he told her. So much candor. How can they look each other in the eye? Who are going to leave before the wedding, if it happens? Are Lyn and Alexander going to leave soon and not be around to see the fights and break up? They need to talk and decide what to do next?
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You helped me feel sad and concerned for the two who have their hopes for a better future crushed by others' actions physically and mentally. They feel they are leading tough and tragic lives. Finn has relatives that care for him, but he keeps his pain and destructive behavior to himself. I hope something changes and I am very interested in finding out what happens for better or worse.
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Ben has to know that Kier is just one step away from being prosecuted for murder and kept in prison. Is this what Ben wants? Does he want Kier destroyed and Cradle Grove taken over by the Wolf. Has the Wolf agreed to work for Ben? Or , maybe Is Ben going to make new demands on Kier to be more brutal that might push him to his breaking point. Something seems off and more dangerous.
