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Alex was masterful and focused. The two enemy soldiers were taken out with skill. He opened the spillway and avoided a serious disaster downstream. You could feel his pain and unwavering determination. Injured by shrapnel he still labored unrelatedly and climbed up and out of the wrecked dam. He connected with Kenny in the otter and they were able to successfully clear the dam. Kenny knows the direction the Wolf's helicopter took., Alex sees a radio tower and says he has an idea. What is his plan? Will he contact the Wolf or his father?
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Dmytro is guard and under medical care by CSIS. He will recover and be hidden. Andrew viewed him and learned of the existence of the Father's son. He has a team investigating him. The local authorities are not helpful. Andrew realized Jane was dead and probably killed by the Father's men. No one has yet picked up on her last message about the local communications data. Maybe the CSIS can listen in on Thorne, the son. The time Andrew spent with Jacob on the ice was beautiful. The were so happy and in sync. Both were restored practicing in the cold on the ice outside the official residence. Andrew is going to have a tough and possibly brutal conversation with Will. How much is he going to tell Will? He could cove the destruction of the drone factory and plot to use drones. Sarah's betrayal, the loss of Ed Rawlins, the fact that the father has a son, too, the freeing on Dmytro and the General's collusion with Silas. Andrew needs to say there could be more moles. So far one key mole close to Andrew has not been identified: · McLeod, S.E., BG Dr: Status: PCO Chief Medical Officer/Task Force Authorization.
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Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
Jack broke out of his box and gave his first blow job and savored the tasty cum. He loved Vince's cum and wants more. He is addicted to it Theo could only hear them and was upset. Maybe, they are training to have sex with him, too.- 25 comments
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Noah's mind was flooded with facts and images. He was out for an hour. Eventually he reached home and was given a debrief by his grandma with others adding more. The family had hidden magic with powers distributed through out, Some have special abilities. Not everyone is the same. It is not known yet what Noah's abilities are. Noah learned that Shiloh is not part of triplets. There are four brothers, and one is missing, Tristan is pushing Noah to grow up fast and lose his innocence This major reveal is going to take time and support to help Noah to fully adjust.
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Did not the leaks start before Rick arrived with his BF Adam?
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Now, inviting the coach to Joel's birthday party will surprise Joel and will shake things up. I think Joel will not react well to seeing the coach. It depends how the coach acts and talks to see how Joel finally reacts. Having his brother Cody present should moderate Joel's attitude.
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Helen and Rick heard Jimmy's story and were convinced he had the goods on Jarvis, A new hidden place needed to be found for Jimmy and Shane and they need to find one that could not be found by Jarvis, They drove to the hospital to check on Shane and when they arrived, they only saw am empty room without Shane. What happened? Why is the guard missing? where is Shane? They are going to be on this now. They might ask the nurses where Shane is? Could he have left on his own or hide himself in the hospital fearing danger? Could Jarvis have him taken? Helen could ask her boss about the missing guard.
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Wow--What a serious problem and impending disaster. The Wolf has taken off by helicopter with Brian and Steve and all but two of his men. Charges are set to cause the dam to release torrents of water and ruin everything below and end the power generating of the dam and likely cascade destruction through the interconnected power system. The authorities are not expecting this and have not taken any precautions. Alex is inside the dam and Kenny has given him a possible solution which is to go beyond the two armed , armored guards left and release a manual override Is Alex going to have to successfully kill the guards in order to reach the manual override? If Alex can stop the disaster, the Wolf will be very upset and will return to the dam. Can Alex and Kenny hold them off in and by the helicopter to be able to bargain for Brian and Steve?
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What a dangerous, unsanctioned skilled infiltration into the compound and rescue of Dmytro without injury in the bitter cold ! They were noticed only as they escaped and used smoke to stay hidden until they left by helicopter, The Canadian Army surrounding the compound and the General's command efforts were not factors. They did not know Dmytro was freed. West was a brave, talented leader. Thorne will die soon in the compound. Morale in the compound will sink further. Silas will be pissed at this loss of leverage when he finds out and should not know that Dymtro knew about the Father's son. Dmytro passed on the intel to West that the Father had a son, Pierre Thorne, in Louisiana. This could lead for a trade of sons?
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Is Joel going to more cautious and stay focused just to kissing and not more explorations? Will he be guilty in the morning? Will he instead find relief from his invigorated sex drive that Davin has created by jacking off himself when alone? Are you going to have Joel not be turned on enough by his first orgasm with Davin to want more orgasms with him? Might he be receptive when Davin wants to try more sexual thrills? I can see they might seek another more private location.
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Granger cannot go to Spain as Ambassador and handle/disguise the birth as belonging to Caroline, not the Princess. They will need his intervention to make things go smoothly. He is being forced to take the appointment or risk severe consequences. George wisely sought the Queen's intervention and had a successful meeting with her. She agreed he needs to be present to safeguard the birth and how it is seen as belonging to Caroline. The queen will act to see George does not leave till after the birth. Of course , the queen can say he needs to be present for the birth of his next child George knows what to do to handle the many currents of court and personal problems. He is masterful !
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Davin might suggest that next time or as soon as they are willing that they exchange blow jobs and swallow their mate's cum. They can keep the sheets and their clothing clean !
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[Memory, Junior Year, November] – Strategic Mistakes
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year, November] – Strategic Mistakes
It turns out Lyn found two guys by a gay bar that wanted to play with him. He was called pretty. Quinn and Joe were two jocks he knew from campus They teased him and seemed to know how to play him as new to any gay experience. The were fun and not cruel or wanting to inflict pain. They wanted a good time and they all got it. Lyn began kissing the two and they ended up giving each other hand jobs and blow jobs. He was in heaven and not regretful afterwards. He thought he was going to be fulfilled for months. Lyn did not fully understand at first that they knew the two he hung around with on campus. His friends were identified as " that jealous husband of yours and that handsome pre-med. " They did promise to keep his secret. Hmmm? This was an unexpected good first time and Lyn was not turned off by it. He was sexually pleased. -
He has been kidnapped by the bad guys. They must have had the house under surveillance and arrived after most left and they realized Josh remained. The one he beat up in the hospital is part of the kidnappers. He was in the hospital to kill someone who was likely connected to the encryption. They think Josh is in some way a part of the encryption of the CIA system. Do they know how Josh is connected? Is his DNA the clue? I expect he will be interrogated and tortured to find out what he knows. Josh will go Code Black for them. He was not given his cane so he will not be mobile and in pain. He will be kept alive, I expect, to insure he might help in some way Now Josh, is going to be tested. He will need all his inner skills and determination to survive. The family will be gone for a while so the kidnappers will have a good head start. The s..t will hit the fan and Elenore made a huge mistake by assuming the worst about Josh. I hope she is made to see her mistakes have cause real problems. Now the right government officials will have to take over and look for Josh.
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Petrovic wants a cartel to take them out and not his family
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Brian was very smart and his new father , Enrico, is fully alerted. The Wolf is off balance. He has a new terrible complication to add to his standoff with the authorities. Alex and Kenny are melding as a good team. The have a plan to take on the Wolf at the dam. Alex with infiltrate and Kenny will use the rifle to harass the enemy. It turns out he is a very good shot and Alex is impressed. I can see they will cause lots of trouble for Wolf and his men who might focus on them and not other external threats that might be approaching.
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The mess gets messier. Sarah kidnapped Ned and he is not aware of his role and real father yet. She and her RCMP guys are hiding him for now. Silas was made aware of her actions and can use Ned when he decides what is useful to him. Will has been trying to stitch together a coalition government and his efforts seem to be working. The Conservatives are seen to be infected by the Order are considered out of line till they purge the diseased Order. The new Conservative leader is not known yet. Brad Lapointe is working with the Order. He is leaking dirt on West to the press to hurt him and his usefulness to Andrew and Will. He thinks he is helping Sarah take down the government.
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Good--They finally did something sexually--mutual masturbation. This was the first time anyone touched Joel's dick. They both will want more.The next time they share a bed, they will be prepared to not leave evidence after they explore more ways to get off. I will assume some evidence will be left behind. Celia likely will be discrete and not say anything unless they become obvious to others. I can see the birthday party opening a can of worms touching on why Joel is here with new people in the mix asking questions.
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So, Will thanks Preston has a crush on him and would not like to be around Travis. Preston cancelled on the Hawaii trip. On the fight back to California, Travis seemed distant. Will had to force him to tell him why he was upset, In one word: Preston. Travis was jealous of him and how positive he spoke about him, Will was floored. He offered to stop seeing Preston if Travis wanted him to stop. Travis asked him to cut off Preston, Will felt sad but agreed to stop seeing Preston The meeting of the males at Escorial changed minds. It turned out Petrovic was most likely lying to them. The flash drive had spyware and viruses. It would show the location of the reader when it was opened. This could be used to hurt them and show they had the data. In addition, Will offered that Petrovic could not have a gay boyfriend without being hurt in his crime family. He had to not be telling the truth about the boyfriend and maybe lots more. Paying Petrovic's supposed boyfriend would tie those in Escorial to what must be an emerging problem. It was considered that they are being set up and they do not know yet why. They are going to think more about this changed dynamic and reconvene.
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The game just got more interesting. Two fighters are outside wanting to rescue their friends. The enemy inside will not expect the fierce fight they are going to face. Up to now, the takeover of the dam was smooth and resistance was stopped with no problems. Now, the situation will be different. It will be fascinating to see what Alex will undertake with Kenny. For now, perhaps, the two young men are not at the top of worry list for those inside. They want something of value from authorities since they control the dam. The enemy inside needs to be wary of any impending major military force that will arrive to retake the dam. They are on the clock and they have given the authorities a time limit. Do they have an escape plan? Could Alex and Kenny trip up their plans?
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A brilliant and clean victory. What a fascinating description of an attack by a new type heavy drone that totally destroyed the Order's drone factory stopping an impending huge drone attack that was intended to wreck the Canadian government and cause its fall turning control over to the military. Checkmate. The General and is team did not see this coming and he does not know that his role as an Order asset is known by CSIS. Andrew expects the Order to panic. Let us see. Their one Order ace in the hole is controlling Ned, Will's lost son. The young man may be held by the missing Sarah. We do not know yet. The Order may use Ned to try to blackmail Will for its own purposes.
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The Word That Changed Everything
akascrubber commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The Word That Changed Everything
What an unsettling encounter ! Caleb, Noah's friend, just met Shiloh and turned and left. It appears Shiloh bothered him , but he gave no clue why? Shiloh did not tell Noah what was going on. But touching Shilo, a voice sprang forth saying Shiloh needed to learn the family secret. Is a ghost speaking to him? Did the same ghost speak to Caleb? -
Wow--The murders are 5 years apart. The killer has to be patient or nursing a serious grudge or has been away till recently, I suspect Martin and Rick promised to not have anal sex till they were both ready. If Martin was killed after anal sex, did he willingly agree? There are issues to explore. Maybe once the LiveJournal account is read, Rick will know more that can help. He has too much guilt that needs to be removed.
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Alex and Kenny --Keep your eye on the ball. Move to the dam to find Brian and Steve and who ever took them. Alex will be careful and disciplined Was Brian able to call CSIS and did Alex's father listen in? Alex and Brian have the element of surprise at the dam, but they are going to face too many skilled killers. Will Briand and Steve be disposed of after they are interrogated? Will they be kept as hostages since it is likely known they were not alone? How long are the killers going to stay at the dam? They have to know eventually a large military force will be attacking the dam, but it will take time.
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The General and Silas had more power to prevent Andrew from carrying out his plan and get real proof. Heck, He was relying on a satellite with military connections and Silas had worked for the CIA. The Order was able to block Andrew and CSIS. Sarah is off grid and she is aware that she is now known to be a mole. There are other moles. Andrew is going to fiercely try to find out what went wrong. He needs to find Ed or Ned. I cannot believe Sarah told them the boy was in India! It is encouraging to find out things will turn around in the next chapter, Hooray!
