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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    Two people are not truly understood Tommy and Peter Will brought Harper Blaine to the ice rink to see Tommy skate. He was magical and wonderfully talented. She saw Olympic material. Will told her to throw away her old narrative and present a warm close family with a world class figure skater and hockey player. It will appear to the heartland. Blaine saw all the media possibilities. Wil saw a way to promote him and his sons to win public support and maybe his election chances. Poor Peter. West asked him to visit Graves and steal a map showing listening pots and other critical data, Peter was terrified as he entered Graves' home, Graves was touchy feely and pinched his butt, Peter created a distraction and quickly stole the map. Graves acted like he wanted to seduce him and Peter struck Graves' jaw. Graves laughed and said he hit like a hamster. Peter left rapidly. Peter returned to West and told him what happened and reported why he was upset. They proceeded to have the kind of sex that Petter wanted The resistance has the key map. But, Graves will connect the map loss with Peter, I expect he will not be laughing the next time he sees Peter. He could be very upset. Graves did not see Peter as the threat he was,
  2. akascrubber

    Best Friends

    I cannot imagine having that discussion in my biology class. We had fetal pigs to examine.
  3. Lyn was totally miserable after he returned. He would not take Brad's calls But, finally he listened to Brad's voicemail and Brad spoke honestly. He apologized for hurting Lyn. "Gosh, I have no idea how to say it… but the three of us, we’ve always been so misaligned." Brad asked Lyn to meet him and he promised to speak truthfully I hope Lyn meets with Brad
  4. Interesting--You introduced a term that is quite provocative Hamartia is a literary term, originating from Greek tragedy, meaning a tragic flaw, error in judgment, or mistake that leads to a protagonist's downfall, often stemming from an inherent imperfection like excessive pride (hubris) or a poor decision, but sometimes from a seemingly positive trait. Derived from a Greek word meaning "to miss the mark" or "to err," it encompasses failings, sins, or a fatal misstep that sets disastrous events in motion. Does it not apply to all three?
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    But, for now Ned's location is stated and CIA agent can be targeted to go after him and pick him up
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Yes, but Satan or the devil is the one to really fear.
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    I wonder if Ned's encrypted diplomatic mail got through to Will and encouraged him. Did the USA NSA read the message and inform other agencies--like the CIA--who will go after Ned and try to capture him in order to increase the US control of Will? Enrico is ready to protect Ned.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter3

    Tarquin the Proud (Lucius Tarquinius Superbus) was overthrown in 509 BC due to the outrage sparked by his son Sextus's rape of the noblewoman Lucretia, which, combined with Tarquin's tyrannical rule, led to a revolt led by Lucius Junius Brutus, resulting in the abolition of the Roman monarchy and the establishment of the Roman Republic.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Well, you are indicating there are two competing love interests, so it sounds like 4 people--maybe Finn and Oliver and Orel and Lydia? I am just guessing so we will find out the truth as your story progresses
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Orel thinks Finn will be good for Oliver. “Ollie,” Orel looked up again. “I like Finn, he’d make you smile if you let him. I’m okay, if you want to… I can loan him to you, if you want to.” The awkward way of Orel’s, trying to give him permission."
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 37

    The boys are excited and happy be here. The tension is drawing Adam and Right closer. But, for now Rick has to leave them to work with the police,' Rick knows g he is the bait. He thick Corcoran will show himself on a side street and lure him to give chase so Cocoran can kill him That is only one dangerous option. I bet Rick will be surprised.
  12. akascrubber

    "Pure Love"

    I hope Liam can devise a brilliant retort for the media and blame their trip as an action by an agent who wanted more money from him and more control over him
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Are you saying Orel is gay? Does he like someone other than Finn who he was forced to fuck years ago?
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    Orel is surprising. He turns out to be very perceptive. He knows Tarquin is controlling Oliver by using him or threatening him. Orel also knows Oliver likes boys and has since he was nine years old. He tells Oliver to go to Finn and he will help him. Finn helped Orel. He said he would loan Finn to him so he will not worry. Maybe, Finn can help him be safe, too. Orel knows Finn is gay. Orel is not. Finn leaves for the garage to see Finn. Will they be able to connect on a personal level. Will Oliver open up to Finn? Will Finn bring up Lydia liking Orel? I think Oliver needs to find out some way that Lydia is a financial mastermind. Maybe if they talk, she might be able to help him with his financial issues.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 7

    Just Perfect and Powerful William Carter stood up for his kids. He will not have them threatened and bullied. Then he stood up for his family and Canada speaking unfiltered to his citizens on TV. Hooray! "Je m'appelle William Carter. Je suis fier de qui nous sommes. Vive le Canada." (Translation: "My name is William Carter. I am proud of who we are. Long live Canada.") Let us see what happens next in Canada and Washington, DC.
  16. Things are still unsettled. Grandma found out she was sideline The Senator is on the run Tristan and Little B are here for now. The elders have questions for them Noah and Shiloh are together and safe. Danger seems to be around the corner.
  17. akascrubber

    "Pure Love"

    OMG--What beautiful, sensuous love making. They finally expressed their love for each other. Meteo saw Liam and choked but promised Hudson he would not tell anyone But, things got tense. Paparazzi flooded the outside street. TMZ showed up with cams. Liam knew what happened. His agent told the press to punish him and ruin Hudson's life What will Liam do?
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter3

    I think Tarquin has to be done in. He could fester and get more poisonous, if exposed. I expect a person will come forth to take him out and the murder will be unsolved.
  19. Now that Cavendish and Elizabeth are on a honeymoon in the south of France, any child that results from their coupling can be attributed to their sexual play without any hint that the father might be Granger. Cavendish needs an heir, too. George is very lucky with his sexual partners. It appears the handsome Spanish captain who is his escort is going to be receptive to a mutual time of passion. He could have a private area for them away from Daventry. Plus, the captain might well open up about the Port's ships and Spanish navy plans. Sex can open loose lips. George is a very exciting lover.
  20. akascrubber

    SCENE 2:

    What a tough unexpected complication
  21. What a wonderful, happy chapter Thank you George quickly handled his affairs in London before he left for Spain, Cavendish and Eizabeth were married. He enjoyed their foursomes as planned and learned he was very pleased to have sex with Elizabth and she learned much from their interludes It was a cautious joy to transit on the Belvidera. He found he had to bolster Weston who he found out was nervous he would make a mistake before his former captain. George assumed his usual teacher/ counselor role and helped Weston to regain his confidence and forcefully took command of his ship The Spanish port call was a bit out of kilter. They were not expected and the officer greeting them was put out by their appearance until he learned who they were. They were taken to the port's commander who was rude and uncooperative until George produced a letter from the Spanish King asking him to accommodate and help George. They will stay for a few days so George can study the port for his country's intel uses. Daventry will work on improving his Spanish with his tutor and a convenient reason for a few days stay. George will have a handsome Spanish captain to guide him. He thinks they might have things in common but for now Daventry is cockblocking him. I bet this problem will not last long.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    I want to commend you for your text presenting exceptionally powerful, convincing, evocative graphic imagery. I felt present on the Fortress Rock, felt its bitter cold and understood better the pain and troubles and aspirations of the key players. These people are very brave and resolute facing a superpower aggressor.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter3

    And Lydia's lawyer, Ms Patel, can be effective and vicious against her opponents. Tarquin will be surprised and disoriented, not suspecting serious opponents.
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter3

    Now we know what happened and Finn began to plan along with Lydia who is all in helping Finn and Orel. She believed him. Finn told Lydia that Tarquin stole their innocence and broke them. He found them in the barn and forced Orel to fuck him against their wills. Finn became the town's problem child and he and his family were forced out by the establishment and Tarquin. Finn told Lydia--who would believe him over Tarquin, He had no evidence. Orel came to see him late in the rain. Finn comforted him and gave him a stone to keep and hold to be safe. He can come back anytime, but must stay at his home by Tarquin's demands. When he comes back, Lydia wants to be present. She likes Orel. Finn... "made a decision, there in the creeping light. He would proceed on two tracks. Track One: Fortify Orel. Create the sanctuary, brick by brick, promise by promise. Track Two: Test Oliver. Push him. Probe him. See if the Suit was just a polished shell over the same rotten core, or if he was something else—something that could be used as a tool, or maybe, impossibly, as an ally." It is a wise start. Lydia agrees with him. I think he is going to need more than Oliver to destroy Tarquin. We will see.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 6

    Andrew is being bold and very aggressive. He is tired of holding on the defense. Like his kids, he saw the tremors and felt the anguish Will displayed. I hope he stays safe through his risky flight and where he operates on the mainland. I bet he will inspire and energize the resistance. If and when he is found out by the Americans, an intensive manhunt will begin. He needs to leave instructions on the Rock behind for his people so they keep the faith and be strong. Does he have a good number 2? I am impressed by the extensive, thoughtful Canadian psyop campaign. It makes sense and should become even more convincing over time as the hurt from the occupation increases. Might the ""I.Know." message give Will hope and a renewed dedication to carry out his plans with his inner circle. I expect Will could begin his own psyop campaign messages to reflect his messages. Yani and crew are essential and formidable and might adapt what they are doing to also reinforce what Will is saying now.
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