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  1. akascrubber

    Prologue

    The ground is laid. The key characters are identified, It is good vs evil Move or burn,
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    Obfuscation

    Sean was treated to a virtuoso sexual performance by Gabriel. He craved it and Gabriel took his virginity, His ass was christened by a sensitive master.. But, as Gabriel tginks about it, he is bothered by it. Why did Sean want to be fucked? Did he see something in Gabriel? But Sean left in the morning silently. No touching, No thank you kiss. Does this mean, Sean thinks they will not see each other again? Does he think they will not meet again? Sean can hide behind his security people, Will Sean spend some time and consider he wants to see Gabriel again? Will the phone data force Gabriel to need to see Sean again?
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    Chapter 8

    OMG Double Dicked. Jody went through the challenge and was sorely tested. His partners eased him into it,=. He was given a muscle relaxant and poppers I hope finds no problems arise in a day or two. He was protected and he knew no one wanted to hurt him or his ass. I can they might try other sexual ideas. The keys will be to respect and trust each other to not hurt anyone,
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    Chapter 8

    The Queen of Orinovo is a hate filled, abusive, suspicious domineering woman. She publicly chewed out New and reduced him in rank, He took his attacks and left quietly Yarima did not like her mother, but did not want to be thought of as her killer., She could not replace the Queen if she was thought to be her killer. The Queen is suspicious of the motives of Yarima. She should be, Ain and Fenn will be attacking soon. The Queen seems to not be preparing for an attack,
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    Chapter 12

    Jason suffered so much at the hands of a malignant, hateful father, I hope that neither man nor his followers hurt Jason again and he and Peter stay safe This revealing discussion explains so much. It was cathartic and can help them move ahead, Jason held nothing back and Peter cried. They are living in the moment, the glorious moment and the potential eye of a hurricane. They deserve some healthy, affirming peace right now,....don't they?
  6. What a compelling, textured political and family story full of stresses, surprises, enough evil people and more good ones. Will graphs his abilities into the US political system and decides to run for President against Donald Trump. Will assembles a strong campaign team. Andrew as head of the Free Canadian forces seeks to avoid conflict and find a way to be a positive force for Will. There are serious issues along the way and nothing is certain until the final votes. The members of the Carter family are tested and learn lots more about themselves and find helpful ways to help each other You will want to read this story all the way through.
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    Chapter 39

    Hooray! Will won, 319 to 273, The electoral count means it is a decisive win Will has so much more to do. "Because this wasn't the end. This was the beginning. And the beginning was going to be harder than anything that had come before." Biden signed a full pardon for Andrew after the votes were counted. Andrew can stand next to Will from now on The whole family met and formed a cohesive, loving unit. It is time for them to celebrate their survival and hopeful future. Thank you for this compelling story.
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    Chapter 7

    Fenn was kidnapped. Now Nev is kidnapped. Can they learn from their mistakes to find ways to better guard their important enemies?
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    Chapter 7

    Darn it. There security is so poor Yarima showed up and freed Nev. They flew sway and escaped Fen and Ain will still attack Diramisk. The enemy will be ready for them now.
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    Chapter 10

    Tomas and Ronan fought with others to hold and defend Elmsward, It was a bitter tough siege and the King;s mercenaries eventually won. Some 34 peole made a trek to Thornmere. Now, the Baron with others must decide to support or reject their suppor of the Magna Charta. They could face a powerful siege and might lose their lives. I can only expect that they will honor their support for the Magna Charta..
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    Chapter 11

    I learned to fire a range of weapons from a pistol to 50 Caliber machine gun in the US Army. You were always taught that any weapons was to be seriously treated and needed to be carefully fired and always assumed loaded. My personal weapon at first was the M16 rifle and then the Colt M1911 pistol. My pistol was a close in weapon. If my weapon not fired in the field, then I was required to fire my weapon on a proper firing range every year or more frequently. I was impressed with the training Andrew received in firing a pistol. The only matter I would add is the importance of keeping the pistol clean with the right equipment, Andrew needs his own cleaning kit with gun oil. It should always be regularly cleaned and oiled especially cleaned before it will be used on an operation. Dirt and dust and too dry surfaces inside the pistol are not Andrew's friends
  12. I learned to fire a range of weapons from a pistol to 50 Caliber machine gun in the US Army. You were always taught that any weapons was to be seriously treated and needed to be carefully fired and always assumed loaded. My personal weapon at first was the M16 rifle and then the Colt M1911 pistol. My pistol was a close in weapon. If my weapon not fired in the field, then I was required to fire my weapon on a proper firing range every year or more frequently. I was impressed with the training Andrew received in firing a pistol. The only matter I would add is the importance of keeping the pistol clean with the right equipment, Andrew needs his own cleaning kit with gun oil. It should always be regularly cleaned and oiled especially cleaned before it will be used on an operation. Dirt and dust and too dry surfaces inside the pistol are not Andrew's friends.
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    Chapter 11

    It is a wonder he was not physically abusive to his two younger brothers.
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    Chapter 11

    So what happens over the three days with the dogs and Tarquin? Is it psychological torture or more?
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    Chapter 38

    You have shocked me. You through Andrew and Will believe Trump will be quickly vindictive , if he wins Will expects to be arrested and out on a public show trial. He has arranged for a British plane to fly his sons to London to stay with their aunt, He asked his boy to not fight his decision. He wants them to be safe Andrew expects a victorious Trump will order his military to sink the Free Canada forces and destroy St John's. He asked for his ship to evacuated St john's. He is considering firing the Acheron's missles at the enemy ships and Norfolk Naval Base . It is a chance to inflict damager as Newfoundland is destroyed A great deal is riding on this election. Wil needs to win to keep the peace.
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    Chapter 7

    Jody agreed to be the sex subject in a sling, His legs were raised up and held back exposing his hole. That night 4 guys fucked him and ubkiaded on him His body was coated in cum and his nipples were pinched often They were in heaven. They fucked him and did not expand their play by using toys, double dicking or fisting him. Jody continued a set of aggressive sex activities with the guys he knew on his base.
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    Chapter 6

    Nev baited Fenn and got under his skin . Ain took over interrogating Nev. Ain taking his best shots drew out the knowledge that Nev had a boyfriend. Ain told Nev his forces could attack the palace and kill all inside. This attack traumatized Ne since his boyfriend lived in the palace, He offered to tell ain where the new magical soldiers were created if his boyfriend was not hurt, This is great news.They need to get back to their military leadership soon, to plan an attack.
  18. Klebber had so many troubles and sad events in his life. He 8 year old brother drowning and his father being killed in a trucking accident while he was driving and the death of Adam, the love of his life, had significant influences on him . He pushed himself to be his best and graduated as valedictorian of his Columbia University class. He only wanted to be friends with Dennis, He did not want a romantic relationship with him. But, the introduction of the simulate irate ship as introduced by Dennis seems have really made Klebber happy,
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    Chapter 37

    FYI--The Bell Boeing V-22 Osprey is designed to carry up to 24 troops in seats or up to 32 personnel in floor-loaded configurations, in addition to its four-person crew. There had to be other aircraft to be able to transport 85 people.
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    Chapter 10

    Tanaka's interrogation technique worked and was appropriate for that situation and his longer time horizon. A bully who is groggy, injured and made to feel helpless tied up facing strange, confident people might give information up through repeated questions. Tanaka did not use any form of torture. Andrew will need to learn other techniques to gain information and ,if necessary , break people. Tanaka told him to watch his eyes. I expect over the time Tanaka was with Masterson, he learned his "tells" or physical reactions to questions, I do noy know how Canadian lawyer training works, but in the US, a law student normal has a three year program and the law student might work part-time at a law firm doing basic jobs in his or her second and third years during the school year or summer. Law firms seek out promising students to work for the summer as a way to judge potential junior members of their firm. Law students can be further educated by seeing how full time lawyers work. If Andrew goes to work with GSand P, a corrupt law firm with drug ties he learns in this story, he is going to be under great pressure when he finds out what is really going on. I am thinking of Tom Cruise in John Grisham's The Firm..
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    Chapter 23

    Who knew Orel was interested in everyone's dating prospects and Finn loves it? Orel is acting as a matchmaker. Hasn't Oliver removed to Ottawa ? Orel is showing a new side and hopefully is insightful. At first a pizza delivery guy and a financial whiz who might be making lots of money do not seem compatible. Watching them interact after Orel's help should be fascinating,
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    Chapter 10

    Andrew finally faced Masterson who followed him to an abandoned quarry he knew. Andrew got out of his MULE and went right up to him while Masterson took out a police baton to beat up Andrew., But, Andrew took down Masterson with skill and moves he leaned from hockey, Masterson was unconscious. Andrew called Tanaka who showed up with two men. Masterson was still groggy and was placed on an aluminum chair and zipped tied. Tanaka told Andrew to watch his eyes for the truth and listen. Tanaha quietly interrogated Masterson over a long time and received lots of good intel by being patient. They know the distribution route. key turnover point and location of the financial connection. He has his new assignment to find financial news and watch the next shipment, Masterson will be sent to one of two locations he choses, No courts or lawyers will be involved, Andrew has Masterson's gun and holster. He needs to learn how to use it, Maybe, he will ask Bobby McCormick for help? Dent will probably think Masterson skipped out and will replace him. Andrew can expect an escalation of violence and needs to be ready, Things have gotten more deadly and intense, He must be glad even more that Peter and Jason are safe.
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    Chapter 37

    The meeting was intense, revealing and needed Will and Andrew covered their issues and worries. I am so glad that finally kissed and kissed and made love. They satisfied third needs. Andrew told Will he did not expect a pardon now and for a longer time. He thinks Will needs to carry out his agenda and heal the people. He thinks Will could be impeached, if he was pardoned while bitterness existed, "This isn't the end," Andrew said, his voice fierce—a commander giving a charge. "This is the middle. The hard, grinding middle of the storm. But we can see the way out now. You go back there. You be the King they need you to be. You be the Lord of Winter or whatever weird title they’ve given you this week. But for God’s sake, don't let your heart freeze solid. Keep a corner of it warm. Keep it for me. For the boys. For the man you really are." Will left with 85 sailors and an October Surprise that will boost his campaign. He has to win to reunite his family.
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    Chapter 5

    Ain took Petre with him to exceed his orders and rise farther deep into Orinovo. They hoped to find him and selected a destination as a logical guess. They figured out Fenn was kidnaped by a windwalker by a loss of tracks. They rode fora long while and finally saw the windwalker land up ahead, I guess a horse can go faster than a windwalker over distances. Ain turned himself invisible and attacked the windwalker. He knocked him out and untied Fenn. Ain saw that the windwalker was Oretski. He was tied up and will be taken back to their side for interrogation. The four of them on two horses will have to be caught on their way back Ain and Petre have been very lucky up to now. I hope their luck continues.
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    Chapter 7

    Oh Please-I hope to see Riley get his way, find love and have a fulfilling sex life. You are saying it will not be a straight line. These characters and the situations they seem to evolve into do not lead to simple lives.
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